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Author Topic: Manuster *******-Tsukegami (Chapter 19)  (Read 89139 times)

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Re: Manuster *******-Tsukegami
« Reply #45 on: September 13, 2016, 17:42:13 »
Great chapter nice work :)
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Re: Manuster *******-Tsukegami
« Reply #46 on: September 14, 2016, 16:49:07 »
You're not gonna make more chapters ? :'( NOOOO!!! This was awesome tho! If you need any help on writing more... pm me i can help you out if you want.

xD oh dear, after rereading my comment at the end it really does sound like my final chapter xDDD

you might be please to know though that i have quite a long way to go xD I haven't even been born yet yk

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Re: Manuster *******-Tsukegami
« Reply #47 on: September 21, 2016, 00:24:59 »
Read through about four parts roughly and I am pretty certain this mentions Onimaro more than Manuster. Is this your character history or a SLO story? Great writing though.
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Re: Manuster *******-Tsukegami
« Reply #48 on: September 21, 2016, 01:46:06 »
Read through about four parts roughly and I am pretty certain this mentions Onimaro more than Manuster. Is this your character history or a SLO story? Great writing though.
I think its an SLO story about everyone.
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Re: Manuster *******-Tsukegami
« Reply #49 on: September 21, 2016, 02:55:34 »
Read through about four parts roughly and I am pretty certain this mentions Onimaro more than Manuster. Is this your character history or a SLO story? Great writing though.
I think its an SLO story about everyone.
Ahh. I feel it should have been put in a separate post in my opinion, lol.
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Re: Manuster *******-Tsukegami
« Reply #50 on: September 21, 2016, 08:42:20 »
He just forgot to introduce his character lmfao, but, he's setting up the world rn.



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Re: Manuster *******-Tsukegami
« Reply #51 on: September 21, 2016, 17:20:10 »
Read through about four parts roughly and I am pretty certain this mentions Onimaro more than Manuster. Is this your character history or a SLO story? Great writing though.
Awe thanks Leebz, it was really inspired from your Himitsu Trilogy

As for my character, he makes an appearance later on xDD I wanted to do a backstory including SLO characters before I 'arrive'

He just forgot to introduce his character lmfao, but, he's setting up the world rn.

Exactly xDD my parents are the main characters in Part 1



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I'm finishing up ST's story then I'll return to it xD
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Re: Manuster *******-Tsukegami
« Reply #52 on: December 10, 2016, 21:38:15 »
Okay, so I've just read all chapters and I'm really looking forward to chapter 8  :)

Keep the awesome work up!  ;D
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Re: Manuster *******-Tsukegami
« Reply #53 on: January 04, 2017, 16:21:20 »
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Sorry for the long delay, I was gonna post Chapter 8 before December even started but lost mah USB and had to start all over ;_;

And then was gonna post this duriing Christmas but left my new USB in school on the last day #topkeks

New chapters should be coming in like my shitposts tho, thick and fasta


Last Time

The Himitsu brothers, Kazuki and Kuria face off, whilst Haruko Tsukegami forces Ken, the Lust of Katakiuchi, to use his strongest jutsu to overcome him. Konohuro deceives Batt with a Genjutsu and manages to take the 3 Legendary Sage Beast Scrolls off him, Batt slits Toichi's throat whilst under the Genjutsu.

Part 8

Standing upon a snowy peak were 3 Jonin level shinobi. Behind them, a fourth, much shorter shinobi clambered up, panting in her obvious efforts to reach the summit. StarShizen's small frame was inadequate for battle, however a sharp intellect and unparalleled memory distinguished her as one of the greatest tacticians of all time. All over the shinobi world, stories are told of how she passed the physical aspect of the Chunin exams without using a single jutsu. Her primary chakra nature is still unknown to even her closest of friends.

"Now...call up.... the soldiers" panted the young tactitian. Shishida Amigake, leader of the Amigake clan and close friend of Onimaro Himitsu, rose her arm to signify the first stage of the assault. A loud, thudding noise soon blasted from behind as the sound of tens of thousands of shinobi clambered to the peaks of the surrounding mountains. Crono Sabaku stared in awe as StarShizen's plan came to fruition.

Strategically placed, every 10-20 metres apart were Genjutsu seals that amplified and regulated any visual Genjutsu cast by a user placed upon them. Sitting at the bottom of a 2 kilometre deep valley, the Village Hidden in the Snow was surrounded on all sides by treacherous, snow covered mountains. As Shishida Amigake gave the signal, Genjutsu users simultaneously cast Shadow Style: Shinobi Multiplication Genjutsu to make the 200 strong shinobi army appear over 100 times greater in number.

As a result; the Snow Village now appeared to be surrounded on all sides by treacherous mountains with shinobi dotted along their face. As the shinobi stamped their feet, the snow that blanketed the mountains now began to slide, slowly at first but quickly gathering into terrifying avalanches.

The avalanches, of course weren't meant to fool any decent Jonin-level shinobi. The sheer number of shinobi that dotted the landscape was far too many to be reasonable, it was obvious that Amplification seals were being used, however that deduction was simply part of StarShizen's plan.

Nevertheless, some response was still expected, yet the village was unperturbed by the apparent threat and as the first wave of snow slammed into the walls, not a single flare, alarm or siren was activated. Onimaro sensed something was wrong and asked Star about it, who responded in a calm yet rather hurried fashion;

"The average village posts Chunin to Special Jonin level shinobi at their gates, a village as desolated and hard to locate as the Snow should have even lower, making it practically impossible that not a single shinobi fell for the trap. Furthermore, the Snow Village has enforced metal gates that they imported from the Hidden Metal over a decade ago, the fact that those weren't used, even as a safety measure mean that they must have been forewarned. However, even if they were fully knowledgeable of our plan, the obvious route would be proceed as if they were unaware and simply lay in ambush... "

The tactician's rant was cut off by a scream and clash of metal from behind, an explosion sent a wave of heat up her back and she was soon swamped on all sides by the familiar sounds of battle as the Genjutsu-specialists were forced to defend themselves. In almost as little time as it had taken to sweep her head from side to side to spectate the dismantling of her strategy, StarShizen's diversion had been completely taken apart. As StarShizen turned her head to inspect the intensity of the damage behind her, she felt a sharp sensation at her lower back, swiftly followed by a great force pushing her backwards. As she rolled down the face of the mountain, she made the following mental deductions.

"1. I'm losing a lot of blood, yet this wound was perfectly aimed so as to not kill me immediately...this is most likely a kidnapping, either with intent of a ransom...or worse.
2. Crono Sabaku, Onimaro Himitsu and Shishida Amigake are the only individuals who were informed of the initial stage of the plan before this morning.
3. No shinobi approached us recently, therefore the attacks must have come from members within.
4. The fact that we were attacked at this point, reveals that Stage 2 and 3 of the plan were not jeopardised. That excludes Onimaro who was aware of all 3 stages.
5. The attacks must have come from the guards assigned to protect the Genjutsu users.
6. Crono was solely in charge of the payments and recruitment of the guards, furthermore, he's the only other individual who doesn't have clan members involved in this mission.
7. Crono Sabaku is the traitor."

StarShizen hit a boulder as she reached halfway down the mountain, combined with the blood loss she had already suffered; she then spent the next 15 seconds of her descent unconscious, rolling to a contorted slump with far too many broken bones than she would've liked to count.



A heavily bandaged Ken Himitsu waddled into the meeting room, flanked on both sides by Katakiuchi subordinates. They each had an arm over his back as they helped him to his seat at the front of the room. They scampered out immediatly; ecstatic to just have set foot in the war room. Konohuro stood in front of the congregation, virtually unscathed. His lips tightened as he began to address the people before him.

"Now that we're all here, I'd like to start off by addressing several obvious concerns." He gestured to the 5 empty seats alongside Ken.

"Nibui Kirishima perished in Vuregu's escape." Several concerned gasps spread throughout the room.

"This is no cause to worry. Arashi, our current Sloth, has been sent to recruit a new Greed. The two of them will then proceed to locate Vuregu." There was a pause as Konohuro looked across the room.

"However... we do have a deserter. Our Envy, Rayzote Yamato vanished at the Hidden Hill and we do have cause to believe that he has given up our plans. I can assure you that he will be handled justly, but as of now, we will have to lay low.

As we all know, our Gluttony will be out of combat for a considerable period of time due to the child she is bearing. She will use her visual prowess to recruit not only a replacement for herself but for Rayzote and Kazuki."

Ken, rarely ever paid attention in these meetings, he only really joined Katakiuchi for the blood and fighting. He wouldn't even have bothered to come to this one if so many of the Yugure weren't absent. As usual, his interest wasn't piqued and he was just about to dose off when he heard Kazuki's name mentioned. He snapped his head up and had to shake off the dizziness that followed.

"K...Kazuki? What about Kazuki?" It suddenly dawned upon Ken that he hadn't seen his friend since halfway through the battle at the Hidden Hill. Konohuro raised a curious eyebrow at Ken.

"Surely you of all people would have noticed... he never made it back from his battle with Kuria. We found his arm and alot of blood at the scene so we're assuming the worst. His brother wasn't found either."

The crowd that Konohuro was addressing was largely made up of corrupted Kage. There were 6 of them, and each sat in a seat specifically ordained for their respective Hidden Villages. As there were still 5 uncorrupted Kage, the remaining 5 seats were filled with high ranking shinobi with hidden Kirishima links. Once the remaining 5 Kage had been disposed of, these high ranking shinobi were to take their place. One of the soon-to-be-Kage/shinobi stood up to ask a question.

"Konohuro, I am not doubting your leadership qualities and this question is in no way questioning your capabilities; but I, as well as other members present do find it unsettling that you have such confidence when your proclaimed Yugure has been reduced to just 1 member in such a short period of time. And I'm saying 1 because Ken here is no condition to fight. Only leaving you...and, you couldn't even kill the Hidden Hill Kage."

Konohuro nodded in agreement. "I can understand your worry Allake, but in 48 hours the Yugure will be back at full strength. As for Batt, I have...other... plans for him. Someone with his talents can serve us better alive than in death." A sinister yet thoughtful smile appeared on his face, a look that silenced the room and any other questions. As Konohuro's eyes wandered across the room, scanned the Kage and future Kage alike. He pointed to the Kage of the Hidden Snow and the soon-to-be-Kage of the Hidden Inferno.

"You and you, come with me, lets talk. Everyone else is dismissed, this meeting is over." 


« Last Edit: January 14, 2017, 16:45:07 by Manuster »
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Re: Manuster *******-Tsukegami
« Reply #54 on: January 04, 2017, 16:22:13 »
FINALLY!!!
SHIT MAN IT TOOK YOU SO FUCKING LONG

edit: I did like the story a lot tho ggg
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Re: Manuster *******-Tsukegami
« Reply #55 on: January 04, 2017, 21:24:00 »
whoa Manuster doing work that's unheard of!!! it looks good man
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Re: Manuster *******-Tsukegami
« Reply #56 on: January 07, 2017, 02:08:17 »
Last Time:

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StarShizen's plan unfolds but it interrupted by either Crono Sabaku, Onimaro Himitsu or Shishida Amigake.
Konohuro addresses the situation to the Katakiuchi-Kirsihima council.


Part 9

"Hey fatso, hurry up." complained Hachemon Himitsu, kicking more dust into the eyes of his larger, yet younger companion.

"26 years old and still a Chuunin, he's just venting his frustrations." repeated Itsuki Himitsu to himself. The more that the 16 year old tried to calm the growing distaste within him, the harder Hachemon seemed intent on making it. Itsuki placed his foot into the dent in the wall and pushed himself up. He came to an immediate stop. He exhaled, sucked in his stomach and pushed again, only managing to push his chest deeper into the narrowing tunnel.

"Err...Hachemon...I think I'm stuck...." said Itsuki in a somewhat nervous voice. Hachemon sighed in reply, took out a timer from his pocket and groaned for only the 8th time in the past 5 minutes.
 
"Come on fatty, the assault began 30 seconds ago and we haven't even begun to unlock the seal....urggh....I can't believe I'm stuck at the same rank as you..."

Stage 2 of StarShizen's plan included teams of 2 shinobi making their way through century old tunnels deep below the Hidden Snow Village. As the village was supposed to react in a panic to the threat of Stage 1, the Stage-2 shinobi were then tasked with launching simultaneous assaults on vulnerable locations of the village. Hachemon and Itsuki were part of a team designated to attack the huge citizen bunker, designed to hold double the population of the Hidden Snow in times of crisis. However, before it had even started Hachemon felt that Itsuki was putting the mission at risk with his shenanigans.

"I...I told you..it's...it's narrower...here" gasped Itsuki. He'd managed to keep his claustrophobia under wraps throughout the mission so far but the narrowing at the top coupled with the stress that Hachemon was pilling on him were finally getting to him. His feet kicked pathetically beneath him as he struggled to find the foothold.

"Of all the partners...fuck this Fatso, I can't wait any longer." Hachemon pressed his hands against the seal at the top of the ancient tunnel. The chakra seal had weakened but it's presence was undeniably present. With no knowledge or experience in Fuuinjutsu, Hachemon had no chance of opening it, a task that was solely designated to the struggling teen below him.

'I'll just have to use brute force' concluded Hachemon, we're too late to be worried about stealth.' Hachemon pressed his back against the seal, looking down at his wheezing companion. In the dim light, Hachemon could see the beads of sweat that plastered Itsuki's hair and forehead, and for a moment, he felt sorry for how he'd treated him.

"Hey...Itsuki..." Itsuki turned to face Hachemon, noticing a change in his voice. As Itsuki opened his mouth to ask Hachemon why he'd been called; he noticed the Dragon sign that Hachemon's hands had taken.

"Errr...Hachem-"

"Wind Style: Dragon Bullet!" Itsuki's sentence was whipped away in the following wind. It felt like a hurricane was unleasheed in the confined spaces of the tunnel. As wind rushed into his lungs, Itsuki felt the earth around him breaking away, and as suddenly as it had started... the attack stopped. Itsuki found himself on one of the safety nets they'd installed in the case that one of them fell. Several hundred metres up, he could see the roof of a large, hollow room. With one jutsu, Hachemon had freed Itsuki and bypassed the seals, using the force of his jutsu to make what would have been a grand entrace. Itsuki smiled, impressed.

"Ahhh...well, lemme just rest here for a while...I'll need my energy for the climb back up.." thought Itsuki to himself, as the cold air of the Hidden Snow met his legs.


Kazuki Himitsu was standing with his back against a tree, the sheer pressure of his brother's chakra making movement impossible. In a deep, booming voice his younger brother asked him;

"Kazuki, make your choice. Home...or death?"


"And you're saying that the counter attack is ready to go as planned? Stage 1 and Stage 2 of StarShizen's plan have both been accounted for and they are none the wiser?" asked Konohuro.

"Yep, by nightfall, Onimaro, Shisida and StarShizen should all be in the dungeon." replied Nanami Kirishima, the pride in her voice easily evident.

Konohuro walked down the lengthy corridor at a brisk pace, keeping up alone left Zama Kirishima struggling for breath. He burrowed his eyes in both confusion and awe as the elderly woman, Nanami Kirishima easily kept up with Konohuro's pace. As they approached the stairwell at the end of the corridor, Zama let out a sigh of relief, expecting that the descent would be easier on his poor stamina. He let out a frustrated groan as the pair hurried down the stairs, side by side and in conversation so casually one would assume they were at a dinner party.

4 minutes and over 1000 steps later, Zama reached the bottom of the staircase, and only just managed to follow the pair into the dungeons before the guard closed the door behind them. As he caught his breath with his hands on his knees, he pondered on where the actual location of the Kirishima-Katakiuchi base was. They had walked for at least 10 minutes in a horizontal direction before the strenuous vertical descent. He had counted over 40 rooms before giving up, so he roughly estimated that the building must be at least 3 kilometres long and at least half that size high. Only ever being transported to and from one room, Zama had no idea how large the building was, and with the lack of any windows, there was no way of determining where it was either. He was perplexed by how such a large building could be so easily hid and began fabricating abstract theories...

"Psst...psst" Zama's internal dialogue ended as a hunched figure called out to him from within the shadows. He looked around, only just taking in his surroundings.  He seemed to be in a dungeon of sorts, with long steel cells that descended into barely lit shadows. He squinted at the figure talking to him, and took a disgusted step back once he noticed the individual was naked.

"Hey...Hey no no come back...d-d-d-don't go" stuttered the manic-looking figure. The caged man slithered into the light and Zama could make out the scars that covered every inch of his skin.

"Wh..wha...what's your name kid" hissed the figure. "L-l-l-lemme add it to my collection kid...c'mon kid...w-w-whatcha ssstaring at.... I've never killed a nig-" the  man's sentence was cut off by a fire style jutsu that collided with the right side of his body. The scrawny man vanished back into the shadows with a loud hiss as his skin bubbled from the impact.

Zama looked over to Konohuro, smoke drifting from his hands as he lowered the tiger sign from his mouth.

"Don't talk to the prisoners Zama. Also...I'm guessing from the deployment of Kuria and the others, that you were successful at gaining Reminance's trust." Zama nodded in response, maintaining eye contact as his superior talked to him. Nanami Kirishima was looking at him rather distastefully, almost as if she were trying to unnerve him.

"Good..." Konohuro replied. "...now report to them that we've recruited Crono Sabaku and by the end of the week we should also have Isei Himitsu. We'll need to feed him with truthful information before we can truly take advantage of his trust." smirked Konohuro. Zama nodded in response, glad to be doing something useful, as he turned away to leave, Konohuro added one more thing.

"Oh and Zama, when you get back, we'll start on dispatching the Inferno Kage...I think you're just about ready to take his place."

Zama left without reply, he glanced back at the naked man's cell only to see him sitting by the bars, dragging a cracked kunai into his skin, engraving the name "Zama Kirishima" onto his thigh. It dawned on Zama that the scars that covered the mans skin were all names and he shuddered as a chill passed down his spine.


Kazuki Himitsu woke up in an intense sweat...his eyes flashed open and flashed closed immediatly again.

"W..where the fuck am I???" thought Kazuki to himself. He attempted to move his body only to be hit by how weary...both mentally and physically he was. As he gained full control of his senses, he noticed the sounds around him.

"OHH FUCK, he's actually awake!" screamed one voice. Excited clapping could be heard over the sound of rushing footsteps.

"I said the BLUE INJECTION!! HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO KNOCK HIM BACK OUT WITH THOSE." screamed another, more authoritative voice.

"Errr...guys quieten down, I think his eyes just opened..."

Kazuki only just opened his eyes once more in time to see a white coat leaning over him before being hit by a massive wave of tiredness. He tried to fight the feeling but was overcome by sleep before his brain even registered the pain of the needle.


« Last Edit: July 31, 2018, 16:10:55 by Manuster »
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Re: Manuster *******-Tsukegami
« Reply #57 on: January 07, 2017, 07:23:13 »
Read it.. Dope shit. Keep it coming.

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Re: Manuster *******-Tsukegami
« Reply #58 on: January 07, 2017, 08:26:03 »
Mine eyes deceive me -_- Manuster updated it heck yeah! *dives through window*

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« Reply #59 on: January 10, 2017, 12:57:04 »
Mine eyes deceive me -_- Manuster updated it heck yeah! *dives through window*

<_< can't wait for the next update in 2018

lmaoo fk u m9, the next update was now bish.

Chapter 10 cumin soon



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