Shinobi Life Online

Shinobi Life Online Category => Shinobi Life Online Character => Topic started by: Thunder Dragon on November 16, 2018, 03:58:21

Title: My Character
Post by: Thunder Dragon on November 16, 2018, 03:58:21
Name: Thunder Dragon
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Height: 5.9
Weight: 55
Hairstyle: Undercut
Facial hair: none
Hair color: Black
Eye color: Blue
Blood type: A
Primary chakra nature: Lightning
Hidden Village: Thunder
Clan: Raiu
Good or evil at heart?: Good

Description of the character's personality: I'm a boy who dream big to become a Hokage and no one will stop and i'll surpass people that want to destroy my beloved one and village.

Description of the character's history: Born With simpple Chakra and train to surpass his rival
Title: Re: My Character
Post by: Leebz on December 06, 2018, 13:03:22
Alright Naruto, settledown... Joking xD
A good start but would love there to be more character devlopment rather than what seems a very bland copy of Naruto. "A boy who wants to become Hokage" "Will surpass people that want to destroy my loved ones" "Simple chakra and train to surpass rival" just gives off Naruto vibes, however, i believe you aim for more than that and I would love to know more details. :P
Title: Re: My Character
Post by: 184adj on December 13, 2018, 09:43:53
how to become jonin