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Shinobi Life Online Category => Shinobi Life Online Character => Topic started by: Ken on October 25, 2015, 18:22:28

Title: Ken Nakai
Post by: Ken on October 25, 2015, 18:22:28
THE 1ST HIDDEN SNOW KAGE

(http://i.imgur.com/h0WMTVW.png?1)                                      (http://i.imgur.com/KIkGyY2.png?1)



ROGUE
(https://i.imgur.com/N9CiR27.png)





Name: Ken Nakai
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Hair color: White
Eye color: Blue
Blood type: A
Primary chakra nature: Water Release (http://i.imgur.com/sjM2NH1.png)
Hidden Village: Hidden Snow
Clan: Nakai
Good or evil at heart?:Evil
Specialization: Kenjutsu

Description of the character's personality: Psychotic,phlegmatic,childish but smart in combat and he is mostly chill.


Techniques//Jutsus


-Name: Water Clone Jutsu
-Name: Summoning Jutsu
Type: Shark
-Name:Hidden Mist Jutsu
Description: A mist to spring forth by lifting up some water, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it.
-Name:Water Style: Water Shark Jutsu
Description: The user shapes water into the form of a large shark, and thrusts their hand forward sending it towards the opponent. The shark moves at high-speeds and creates a powerful impact. The user can also ride inside the water shark to increase their swimming speed.
-Name:Water Style: Tsunami
Description: This technique extends water over a large scale, surges and rises up to several dozen meters high. Then it streams down to the ground in one big cascade, much like a gigantic waterfall. In doing so, it resembles a huge wave, with tremendous power that can hollow out the ground. What remains after that technique's utilization is reminiscent of no less than the aftermath of a natural disaster. This is a considerably advanced ninjutsu, and activating this technique requires a fair amount of chakra.
-Name:Water Style:Water Shockwave
Description: The user spits out a great volume of water from their mouth, swallowing up and crushing the enemy with the advancing surge. The user can ride the wave, allowing them to move at high speed, and attack the enemy, now swept off their feet, without fear of counter-attacks. The amount of water created is proportional to the amount of chakra used.
-Name:Water Style:Multiple Sharks Jutsu
Description: The user puts his hand on the surface of a body of water and from the tips of five fingers, chakra is released into the water, changing it into the form of five ferocious sharks. The sharks circle the target with high speed, creating a raging stream that takes away their prey's freedom of movement and their sharp teeth tear into the enemy with each consecutive attack. These sharks can regenerate from surrounding water, making them difficult to destroy.
-Name:Water Style:Water Gun
Description:The user mimics a fire gun with his hand and compresses a drop of water in their index finger, firing it with tremendous force and speed similar to a gunshot.

Description of the character's history: SOON TO COME


Thank you @RaphoZentel for re-making my OC! :D
Title: Re: Ken Kirishima
Post by: Konohuro on October 25, 2015, 18:43:26
I like it.
Title: Re: Ken Kirishima
Post by: Ken on October 25, 2015, 18:45:30
Thank you very much.
Title: Re: Ken Kirishima
Post by: Shivraj on October 26, 2015, 07:25:12
woah, child of a Kirishima AND Himitsu member... must say... nice idea, but, I think you should ask @Leebz if he has any problem with this, not likely, but just to be sure :).
Title: Re: Ken Kirishima
Post by: Leebz on October 26, 2015, 08:55:42
woah, child of a Kirishima AND Himitsu member... must say... nice idea, but, I think you should ask @Leebz if he has any problem with this, not likely, but just to be sure :).
Forbidden love child kek.
Honestly, I do find this a little hard to accept. I don't mind the person being of two clans if the child isn't in my clan and I only say that because Himitsu is so secretive and would never accept someone from the outside so carelessly.. Especially as Kirishima and Himitsu have bad blood.

The only way I see this really working out is the mother, Asami went rogue from the clan, disobeying all orders to be with Daichi from the Kirishima but even then, if she did, the Himitsu would of sent a few high level family members after her to bring her back or kill her. Failing the high level ninja we have we would of hired a rogue organisation to do it for us or with us.

I think you need to go more in depth with this to make it work as you have picked two clans that would never really accept one another in their clan therefore it would be some Romeo & Juliet forbidden love type of thing and we all know how that ended.

I am very flattered you included Himitsu in your family tree but either go a little more in depth or change it. :P
All in all, awesome character. :3
Title: Re: Ken Kirishima
Post by: Shivraj on October 26, 2015, 11:06:35
ooooh, does that mean I can expect some future alliances with Himitsu to hunt a rogue family member or naw? x3 @Leebz
Title: Re: Ken Kirishima
Post by: Ken on October 26, 2015, 11:16:42
woah, child of a Kirishima AND Himitsu member... must say... nice idea, but, I think you should ask @Leebz if he has any problem with this, not likely, but just to be sure :).
Forbidden love child kek.
Honestly, I do find this a little hard to accept. I don't mind the person being of two clans if the child isn't in my clan and I only say that because Himitsu is so secretive and would never accept someone from the outside so carelessly.. Especially as Kirishima and Himitsu have bad blood.

The only way I see this really working out is the mother, Asami went rogue from the clan, disobeying all orders to be with Daichi from the Kirishima but even then, if she did, the Himitsu would of sent a few high level family members after her to bring her back or kill her. Failing the high level ninja we have we would of hired a rogue organisation to do it for us or with us.

I think you need to go more in depth with this to make it work as you have picked two clans that would never really accept one another in their clan therefore it would be some Romeo & Juliet forbidden love type of thing and we all know how that ended.

I am very flattered you included Himitsu in your family tree but either go a little more in depth or change it. :P
All in all, awesome character. :3

Oh, sorry for not asking you for permission to use Himitsu in my character history, but if it doesn't make a problem i will change it a little bit. I have some ideas that might work.
Title: Re: Ken Kirishima
Post by: Konohuro on October 26, 2015, 12:19:16
ooooh, does that mean I can expect some future alliances with Himitsu to hunt a rogue family member or naw? x3 @Leebz

No.
Title: Re: Ken Kirishima
Post by: Leebz on October 26, 2015, 13:24:04
ooooh, does that mean I can expect some future alliances with Himitsu to hunt a rogue family member or naw? x3 @Leebz
It will most likely be from a rogue hunting organisation like Roguhunta XD
Title: Re: Ken Kirishima
Post by: Reminance on October 26, 2015, 14:51:04
Shivraj will be my most favorite Rogue ^^
xD also on-topic i like the twist of Himitsu and Kirishima in here. (Even though you didn't ask permission)
Title: Re: Ken Kirishima
Post by: Kai on October 26, 2015, 15:02:47
Nice character design and history, and you've made the Kirishima and Himitsu thing work. I'm glad you read up on things and didn't say you had a KG or anything.

To make it better i suggest re-sizing the character, maybe? Also, using paragraphs instead of one wall of text.

Title: Re: Ken Kirishima
Post by: Ken on October 26, 2015, 17:55:25
Shivraj will be my most favorite Rogue ^^
xD also on-topic i like the twist of Himitsu and Kirishima in here. (Even though you didn't ask permission)

Yeah.... sorry about that. Won't happen again.

Nice character design and history, and you've made the Kirishima and Himitsu thing work. I'm glad you read up on things and didn't say you had a KG or anything.

To make it better i suggest re-sizing the character, maybe? Also, using paragraphs instead of one wall of text.



Thanks and ill fix that as soon as i can :D
Title: Re: Ken Kirishima
Post by: Ken on October 26, 2015, 19:47:43
 :)
Title: Re: Ken Kirishima
Post by: Shivraj on October 27, 2015, 04:20:49
ooooh, does that mean I can expect some future alliances with Himitsu to hunt a rogue family member or naw? x3 @Leebz

No.
Was just joking xD

ooooh, does that mean I can expect some future alliances with Himitsu to hunt a rogue family member or naw? x3 @Leebz
It will most likely be from a rogue hunting organisation like Roguhunta XD
Awww, no love for us rogues? ;3;

Shivraj will be my most favorite Rogue ^^
xD also on-topic i like the twist of Himitsu and Kirishima in here. (Even though you didn't ask permission)
and you'll be my most favorite rogue hunter <3
Title: Re: Ken Kirishima
Post by: Nas on October 30, 2015, 03:02:33
Ooo forbidden love :3
Title: Re: Ken Himitsu
Post by: Ken on January 28, 2016, 22:00:30
UPDATED:
New History
New looks
:D :D
Title: Re: Ken Himitsu
Post by: Konohuro on January 29, 2016, 12:48:53
I enjoyed the history and I like his personality, a blood thirst demon...
Title: Re: Ken Himitsu
Post by: Ken on January 29, 2016, 15:15:59
I enjoyed the history and I like his personality, a blood thirst demon...
THX and EXACTLY :D
Title: Re: Ken Himitsu
Post by: Yamasukage on January 29, 2016, 15:48:22
That history added a strange feeling to my inner rp'er spirit i am more then interested in seeing how this turns out man you better add more chapters, you gotta, no you have to! its just so awesome
Title: Re: Ken Himitsu
Post by: Ken on January 29, 2016, 16:06:31
That history added a strange feeling to my inner rp'er spirit i am more then interested in seeing how this turns out man you better add more chapters, you gotta, no you have to! its just so awesome
(http://i.imgur.com/TmrjFYp.png)
Title: Re: Ken Himitsu
Post by: Sanji on January 30, 2016, 05:23:16
it is so fking awesome.
Title: Re: Ken Himitsu
Post by: Nas on January 30, 2016, 17:39:42
What else can be expected when when you're born in the hidden inferno. :P *whistles innocently as he walks away*
Title: Re: Ken Himitsu
Post by: Konohuro on January 30, 2016, 17:45:58
What else can be expected when when you're born in the hidden inferno. :P *whistles innocently as he walks away*
Shush.
Title: Re: Ken Himitsu
Post by: Ken on May 22, 2016, 20:14:45
Did some updates ;) And THANK YOU LEEBZ for making the oc :*
Title: Re: Ken Himitsu
Post by: Manuster on May 22, 2016, 21:41:53
"Name: Summoning Jutsu
Type: Shark
Name:Rex"

Rofl xD You're going to name your shark...Rex? As in Tyrannosaurus Rex? I have no problem with that...it just seems kinda....



fishy ;)
Title: Re: Ken Himitsu
Post by: Ken on May 22, 2016, 21:44:29
"Name: Summoning Jutsu
Type: Shark
Name:Rex"

Rofl xD You're going to name your shark...Rex? As in Tyrannosaurus Rex? I have no problem with that...it just seems kinda....



fishy ;)

THAT PUN! But yeah..Rex.. :D
Title: Re: Kuro Nakai
Post by: Ken on October 31, 2016, 21:27:33
Update:

Re-made OC
New story soon to come
Title: Re: Kuro Nakai
Post by: StriderOtaku on October 31, 2016, 21:33:34
Sugoi! Totally made me wanna serve under Yuki's Kage. Thumbs up bruv! (18 z a bit young tho, mars is 12..you're 18?..tch, kids these days :) )