Beautiful post, the layout is great and the character is simple enough that it doesn't bore me to read it; but detailed enough to give a good overview of what he's about. Keep up the good work lad

One thing that bothers me about SLO character creation (this isn't solely you or your fault at all, Rapho)  is the 'Intelligence' stat. There really isn't a way to measure this in game other than the players intelligence, which can't be changed by putting points into it, etc. A lot of us have been guilty of this, including myself, but it just doesn't seem like a valid stat to put on your character. You can shape how your character turns out by training your chakra or strength, but your character can't be any smarter than you are.