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Art Category => 3D Modeling => Topic started by: Kakashi Natsu on March 31, 2017, 02:46:27

Title: Shuriken Model with Voroni Texture
Post by: Kakashi Natsu on March 31, 2017, 02:46:27: (https://image.ibb.co/kwB8rF/Ninja_Star.png)

Tell me what you guys think!! All feedback is appreciated. Also anyone know how to get the edges illuminated as well. I can't seem to get them illuminated.
Title: Re: Shuriken Model with Voroni Texture
Post by: M on March 31, 2017, 03:33:31: The texture seems weird for a shuriken. Other than that, it's good.
Title: Re: Shuriken Model with Voroni Texture
Post by: Kakashi Natsu on March 31, 2017, 03:41:20: Normally you think it be a solid color or a brushed metal, but i kinda didn't like it like that so i added a futuristic look.

Here's the shuriken with a nice kinda camouflage look to it:
Added a bump map to it.
(https://image.ibb.co/jwjpyv/Ninja_Star2.png)
Title: Re: Shuriken Model with Voroni Texture
Post by: taigakun on March 31, 2017, 05:18:00: The camouflaged looked hella nice ngl
GJGJ
Title: Re: Shuriken Model with Voroni Texture
Post by: Tameshi Hinode on March 31, 2017, 06:33:20: Hm.....a shuriken wita futuristic,camouflage design?
That foesnt fit,i think.
The first one is better,but still.....it looks weird,id prefer a regular shuriken.

Sorry i couldnt give you a more positive feedback once more,but its a honest one at least.
I think you would totally be capable of creating good stuff,and im sure there are people who like this.
Im just not one of them.
You design things that could look nice,if seperated.
But then you mix it together,like the camouflage and the shuriken,or the katana/saber-like blade with a medieval looking handle.
I really got to give you credit for trying out something new and creative though,thats great!
Maybe you prove me wrong with the next picture,keep going :)
Title: Re: Shuriken Model with Voroni Texture
Post by: lollernoob9 on March 31, 2017, 08:08:41: I do like the camo lol, tho yes keep at it and make wonderful things
Title: Re: Shuriken Model with Voroni Texture
Post by: Kakashi Natsu on March 31, 2017, 10:51:32: Quote from: Tameshi Hinode on March 31, 2017, 06:33:20
Hm.....a shuriken wita futuristic,camouflage design?
That foesnt fit,i think.
The first one is better,but still.....it looks weird,id prefer a regular shuriken.

Sorry i couldnt give you a more positive feedback once more,but its a honest one at least.
I think you would totally be capable of creating good stuff,and im sure there are people who like this.
Im just not one of them.
You design things that could look nice,if seperated.
But then you mix it together,like the camouflage and the shuriken,or the katana/saber-like blade with a medieval looking handle.
I really got to give you credit for trying out something new and creative though,thats great!
Maybe you prove me wrong with the next picture,keep going :)

thanks so much for the feedback. No worries, its constructive criticism. I like making things that don't fit the norm, and look cool regardless if it doesnt fit the bill.
Title: Re: Shuriken Model with Voroni Texture
Post by: gevanei on March 31, 2017, 20:22:53: Maybe next time show a few more screenshots from different angles, I really can't have my opinions from what I can see
Title: Re: Shuriken Model with Voroni Texture
Post by: AbeMelbs on April 01, 2017, 09:27:48: Quote from: Tameshi Hinode on March 31, 2017, 06:33:20
Hm.....a shuriken wita futuristic,camouflage design?
That foesnt fit,i think.
The first one is better,but still.....it looks weird,id prefer a regular shuriken.

Sorry i couldnt give you a more positive feedback once more,but its a honest one at least.
I think you would totally be capable of creating good stuff,and im sure there are people who like this.
Im just not one of them.
You design things that could look nice,if seperated.
But then you mix it together,like the camouflage and the shuriken,or the katana/saber-like blade with a medieval looking handle.
I really got to give you credit for trying out something new and creative though,thats great!
Maybe you prove me wrong with the next picture,keep going :)

Who wants to be like everyone else? Who wants to be the same? Its good to be different, because sometimes different is more creative and better. And in this context it is because i really like the camo texturing. Gj keep it up.

Maybe have the things on the side like this (http://i65.tinypic.com/4gso5s.png) to show thats its sharp or something. :)
Title: Re: Shuriken Model with Voroni Texture
Post by: Tameshi Hinode on April 01, 2017, 09:45:48: I didnt say he has to be the same,i even praised him for beeing creative and trying out new things.
I just dont think that something is automatically good,just because its new.
Some things just dont go along well with drastical changes,and i consider this shuriken to be one of those.
As always,art shines in a different light for each individual.
Title: Re: Shuriken Model with Voroni Texture
Post by: sirpaul on April 01, 2017, 13:35:52: looks hella weird for a shuriken.. the middle ring part is way too thick imo
Title: Re: Shuriken Model with Voroni Texture
Post by: Diamond Lee on April 01, 2017, 15:20:46: Not going to lie I like the camo one much better and can immediately imagine some kind of futuristic setting where people throw camo laser guided shuriken and stuff. Makes no sense but I like it and imagine it so hahaha i like it. Keep doing things in this style if it's what you like!
Title: Re: Shuriken Model with Voroni Texture
Post by: Kakashi Natsu on April 01, 2017, 16:03:36: Quote from: gevanei on March 31, 2017, 20:22:53
Maybe next time show a few more screenshots from different angles, I really can't have my opinions from what I can see
The bottom is just like the top, even though it may not look like it
Title: Re: Shuriken Model with Voroni Texture
Post by: Seiko Uchiha on April 02, 2017, 14:16:39: Good idea, but wait a bit because they focus on building before the weapons ...