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Author Topic: SLO Arena Battle #9 - Kuro Nakai(Ken) vs Satoru Nii (DrSuhi)  (Read 3665 times)

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Battle #9 @Ken vs Satoru(@DrSuhi)


Ken
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My char will have a big sword/big katana maybe


Character Name: Ken Himitsu


Ninja Stats: 150 Points Available


Ninjutsu: 100/100
Taijutsu: 50/100
Genjutsu: 0/100


Advanced Ninja Stats: Pick One


Kinjutsu


Physical Stats: 225 Points Available


Health: 50/100
Stamina: 25/100
Speed: 50/100
Strength: 100/100


Chakra Related Stats: 150 Points Available


Chakra Levels: 50/100
Hand Seals: 50/100
Chakra Efficiency: 50/100


Extraneous Skills: 150 Points Available


Bukijutsu: 0/100
Kenjutsu: 100/100
Summoning: 0/100


Chakra Natures: Pick Two


Wind
Water


Leftover Points: 50


Satoru
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Character Name:
Satoru Nii


Ninja Stats: 150 Points Available


Ninjutsu: 65/100
Taijutsu: 75/100
Genjutsu: 10/100


Advanced Ninja Stats: Pick One


Kinjutsu


Physical Stats: 225 Points Available


Health: 70/100
Stamina: 60/100
Speed: 75/100
Strength: 20/100


Chakra Related Stats: 150 Points Available


Chakra Levels: 65/100
Hand Seals: 20/100
Chakra Efficiency: 65/100


Extraneous Skills: 150 Points Available


Bukijutsu: 50/100
Kenjutsu: 100/100
Summoning: 0/100


Chakra Natures: Pick Two


Lightning
Water


Leftover Points: 0


Chance to receive a Chakra Combination: 0%



Satoru stood in the Kage’s library, shuffling through various texts on the bookshelf. He glanced over his shoulder every so often, nervously checking the doorway. The room got chilly as the windows frosted over. Satoru panicked when the door opened to reveal a robed figure.


“I see I’ve got a visitor in my library… I suppose he couldn’t have been patient enough to wait and ask for a book…!” The man yelled throughout the room. Satoru immediately dodged behind the end of one of the shelves. He could hear the man’s footsteps as he walked down aisle after aisle. Suddenly, they stopped. Satoru’s heart was beating out of his chest. Without warning, he took a solid punch to the face.The impact stung as the unexpected hit punctured his icy face . Satoru hit the floor and slid. He wasted no time in producing some lightning clones. They directly blocked a follow up attack from Kuro, throwing him back.


When he looked back towards Satoru, his target was gone. Kuro heard something hit the window with a thump.
“Can't jump out of those windows, pal. I reinforc-” Kuro was interrupted by a loud crashing noise. His reinforced windows easily broke from a well placed Chidori.
“Fuck…” His shoulders slouched. Outside he heard screams, and he quickly perked back up. Kuro dashed outside in time to take a Water Dragon straight on. Most of the damage that would've been inflicted was deflected by a quick Jutsu used by Kuro - the front of the dragon froze and shattered. The rest of it splashed onto him, drenching his fine Kage robe.


Kuro landed softly on the snow covered ground as Satoru charged. Satoru’s initial kick was dodged and Kuro returned a punch which hit his stomach. Unexpected pain came as blood started to pour. He backflipped out of Kuro’s range to check his damages. The skin around his stomach had been punctured, but by what? He looked up towards Kuro, who's ice style had been used to form a sharpened fist weapon. Satoru weaved some hand signs, and lightning jumped from his body into the ground.


Kuro tried to prepared for whatever attack his opponent was planning, but it was no use. Satoru barreled forward only to stop just out of his reach. The Kage slapped his hands together and stomped on the ground, building a wall of ice in between. Lightning suddenly blew through the decently thick wall, but Kuro had already been airborne for a second. He launched a barrage of wind bullets towards the ground. Lightning began to gather near Satoru’s feet. Before the first wind bullet reached him, Satoru had launched himself through the wind bullets, dodging faster than Kuro was able to process.


The ground below where Satoru had once been shattered, leaving a crater from the sheer force of the launch. His element of surprise didn't last long. The lightning chakra he had expended in the launch limited the power of his augmented attacks. Kuro easily blocked the first punch, grabbing hold of Satoru’s wrist. Between blocking rapid fire punches and kicks, Kuro weaved hand signs with his one free hand. Eventually, he finished the jutsu, freezing his and Satoru’s arm together.


As they fell to the ground Kuro and Satoru wrestled, attempting to flip the other so that they may land first and absorb the impact. They both hit the ground at roughly the same time. Loud grunts were emitted, and they tried to roll away from each other, but their arms were still frozen together. Neither could break free; they rolled in the snow, slapping, punching and kicking each other. For the Kage, it was the least dignified fight of his life.


Satoru could begin to hear the shouts of village shinobi coming to their Kage’s rescue. He would have to finish this now. He wasn't able to find the book he sought, but he could still possibly get away. Kuro finally decided to dissolve their icy bond, which still left Satoru’s arm almost unusable. It was frost bitten badly and he could barely feel it respond when he tried to move it. He quickly formed a squadron of clones, sending several in each direction as he and two others stayed to fight.


“Quick! The real one’s getting away!” Kuro redirected the first shinobi to arrive. He continued the short fight with the fakes, unaware that the real Satoru still stood in battle. The two clones with him gave a final effort, popping into a cloud of smoke when they were defeated. Satoru exploded a smoke bomb on himself as Kuro’s kick to the chest landed. He lay there for a moment, half expecting the Kage to destroy him in that moment. Apparently other things were on his mind; he jumped straight back into the library. Satoru performed a simple transformation and snuck away disguised as a regular Snow villager. Satoru had accepted his defeat, and would have to face harsh punishment, since he wasn’t able to complete his task “But hey, anything’s better than death, right?” he walked away ashamed.

Ken Wins!

-Mostly written by America, edits by Snoopy and Shivraj.


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Re: SLO Arena Battle #9 - Kuro Nakai(Ken) vs Satoru Nii (DrSuhi)
« Reply #1 on: October 28, 2016, 19:51:53 »
ggwp



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Re: SLO Arena Battle #9 - Kuro Nakai(Ken) vs Satoru Nii (DrSuhi)
« Reply #2 on: October 28, 2016, 20:22:58 »
gg nice,i thought ken will lose cuz he had Genjutsu 0 and suhi had 10.
anyway good jop guys!
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Re: SLO Arena Battle #9 - Kuro Nakai(Ken) vs Satoru Nii (DrSuhi)
« Reply #3 on: October 28, 2016, 21:15:05 »
Nice fight!
is this the first time both parties make it out alive?

gr8 b8 shivraj
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Re: SLO Arena Battle #9 - Kuro Nakai(Ken) vs Satoru Nii (DrSuhi)
« Reply #4 on: October 28, 2016, 22:14:15 »
Pretty good fight, cant wait to read the next one.
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Re: SLO Arena Battle #9 - Kuro Nakai(Ken) vs Satoru Nii (DrSuhi)
« Reply #5 on: October 29, 2016, 01:56:05 »
That was quite a read
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Re: SLO Arena Battle #9 - Kuro Nakai(Ken) vs Satoru Nii (DrSuhi)
« Reply #6 on: October 29, 2016, 06:02:59 »
Very nice!

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Re: SLO Arena Battle #9 - Kuro Nakai(Ken) vs Satoru Nii (DrSuhi)
« Reply #7 on: October 29, 2016, 09:53:57 »
Nice fight!
is this the first time both parties make it out alive?

gr8 b8 shivraj
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Re: SLO Arena Battle #9 - Kuro Nakai(Ken) vs Satoru Nii (DrSuhi)
« Reply #8 on: October 29, 2016, 11:14:54 »
yas yas sehr gut
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Re: SLO Arena Battle #9 - Kuro Nakai(Ken) vs Satoru Nii (DrSuhi)
« Reply #9 on: October 30, 2016, 03:25:25 »
@Reminance do one for me :P
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Re: SLO Arena Battle #9 - Kuro Nakai(Ken) vs Satoru Nii (DrSuhi)
« Reply #10 on: October 30, 2016, 04:04:45 »
Wait I just noticed something. Ken write his character name as being"Ken Himitsu", but in the story he is referred to as Kuro... did I totally not get it or is this a mistake? O.o
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Re: SLO Arena Battle #9 - Kuro Nakai(Ken) vs Satoru Nii (DrSuhi)
« Reply #11 on: October 30, 2016, 06:31:40 »
Wait I just noticed something. Ken write his character name as being"Ken Himitsu", but in the story he is referred to as Kuro... did I totally not get it or is this a mistake? O.o
We updated it, because Ken has updated it aswell, to "Kuro Nakai", but he didn't update on his application for arena, which was unnecessary, since we try to keep it updated anyway.
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Re: SLO Arena Battle #9 - Kuro Nakai(Ken) vs Satoru Nii (DrSuhi)
« Reply #12 on: October 30, 2016, 10:03:11 »
gg enjoyed reading it


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Re: SLO Arena Battle #9 - Kuro Nakai(Ken) vs Satoru Nii (DrSuhi)
« Reply #13 on: October 31, 2016, 14:52:07 »
Nicely written, also congrats to @Ken and good luck in your next battle :)
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