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Saiko Akuma
« on: June 12, 2017, 19:05:29 »
Name:Saiko akuma
Age:15
Gender:male
Height:6.3ft
Weight:153Ibs
Hair:short 
Facial hair:none
Hair color:brown
Eye color: Grey
Blood type:hh
Primary chakra nature: Fire
Hidden Village: Heizukagure
Clan:Akuma clan
Good or evil at heart?:Eh neutral
Organization: Shadows of the haze


Description of the character's personality:Calm tactical and collected. (Despite the name):)


 Character's history: He is a direct descendant of demons. So he is expected to reach high levels of strength. This he has done. He has stomped out other ninja in the exams and fought through countless missions. He made order in the chaos of the Akuma clan and made a detructive force of a clan. He also founded the Shadow Walker. He has been though many things to reach his status but still has plenty of energy left in him to accomplish more.

 
« Last Edit: December 22, 2017, 06:12:39 by goldustian »


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Re: Nami Akuma
« Reply #1 on: June 12, 2017, 21:06:34 »
Why is everyone's parents dead in their history lol

Nonetheless, nice character and welcome to SLO :)


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Re: Nami Akuma
« Reply #2 on: June 12, 2017, 21:36:45 »
Why is everyone's parents dead in their history lol

Nonetheless, nice character and welcome to SLO :)



Why is everyone's parents dead in their history lol

Nonetheless, nice character and welcome to SLO :)



this might sound horrible but i needed them to be dead for my story

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Re: Nami Akuma
« Reply #3 on: June 13, 2017, 06:20:01 »


I like that Nami more. But you're ok.  ::)

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Lulls jk :D :D cool character and welcome to Haze, Buddy.


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Re: Nami Akuma
« Reply #4 on: June 13, 2017, 06:37:26 »
Why is everyone's parents dead in their history,lol
#parentlivesmatter

So in order to stay alive he stole from professional Shinobi to stay alive.
You typed stay alive two times in the same sentence.
Also.... I was thinking wouldn't it be easier for him to steal from normal humans... rather than shinobis? js... after all staying alive is more important than becoming more skilled (if that's what you're implying by stealing from shinobis )

It was getting a bit confounding towards the end... and yeah, I gut dem narutoish vibes =3

Anyways.... good luck :)




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Re: Nami Akuma
« Reply #5 on: June 13, 2017, 07:12:14 »
Why is everyone's parents dead in their history,lol
#parentlivesmatter

So in order to stay alive he stole from professional Shinobi to stay alive.
You typed stay alive two times in the same sentence.
Also.... I was thinking wouldn't it be easier for him to steal from normal humans... rather than shinobis? js... after all staying alive is more important than becoming more skilled (if that's what you're implying by stealing from shinobis )

It was getting a bit confounding towards the end... and yeah, I gut dem narutoish vibes =3

Anyways.... good luck :)

Crap your right i will fix it i turned him sadistic and it actually gave me a lot of ideas for the future thanks
« Last Edit: June 13, 2017, 07:43:30 by goldustian »
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Re: Nami Akuma
« Reply #6 on: June 13, 2017, 07:40:53 »


I like that Nami more. But you're ok.  ::)

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Lulls jk :D :D cool character and welcome to Haze, Buddy.


ive been told its a girl name but idc

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Re: Nami Akuma
« Reply #7 on: June 13, 2017, 09:40:06 »
This isn't bad at all.
All those peepz complaining about the name..deal with it :p
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Re: Nami Akuma
« Reply #8 on: June 13, 2017, 19:30:13 »
This isn't bad at all.
All those peepz complaining about the name..deal with it :p
Thanks i have had like 4 people tell me on discord that its a girl name

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Re: Nami Akuma
« Reply #9 on: June 13, 2017, 19:35:26 »
This isn't bad at all.
All those peepz complaining about the name..deal with it :p
Thanks i have had like 4 people tell me on discord that its a girl name
it's a girl name WTF DUDE WTF!!@#!#@!$!@$@#!@#
nah it don't matter as long as you like it.
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Re: saiko Akuma
« Reply #10 on: June 13, 2017, 23:44:23 »
This isn't bad at all.
All those peepz complaining about the name..deal with it :p
Thanks i have had like 4 people tell me on discord that its a girl name
it's a girl name WTF DUDE WTF!!@#!#@!$!@$@#!@#
nah it don't matter as long as you like it.
I changed my name any ways and i thought if i had a new name i might as well make a new story as well

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Re: Saiko Akuma
« Reply #11 on: June 14, 2017, 10:10:22 »
Why is everyone's parents dead in their history,lol
#parentlivesmatter
Amen

Nice character tho. Liked the story.


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Re: Odayaka Akuma
« Reply #12 on: June 22, 2017, 06:51:56 »
Why is everyone's parents dead in their history lol

Nonetheless, nice character and welcome to SLO :)



I changed it now my parents arent dead. I read all the ones with it in it and found it cliche.

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Re: Odayaka Akuma (My parents aren't dead)
« Reply #13 on: June 23, 2017, 04:19:50 »
Drunk daddy, sick mommy... I won't call it original .. yet it's better than dead..
Hope you write the next part soon




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Re: Odayaka Akuma (My parents aren't dead)
« Reply #14 on: June 24, 2017, 14:57:01 »
Hahah that title. But like the revamped story tho gj


 

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