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Fraq Kirishima [Character image updated]
« on: April 02, 2017, 20:42:18 »
Name: Fraq Kirishima
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Height: 185 cm
Weight: 55 kg
Hairstyle: Mossy (long on the rear, eventually tied)
Facial hair: Stubble (medium)
Hair color: Black
Eye color: Green, with light blue shades
Blood type: A-
Primary chakra nature: Lightning
Hidden Village: Inferunogakure (Hidden Inferno)
Clan: Kirishima
Good or evil at heart?: Neutral, good at the intent

I updated my character, took the idea from the internet and tried to make my own, hope it is at least pleasant to look at. :)



Description of the character's personality: Fraq is tremendously quiet, silent, always been a shy person with strangers. When he gets to know someone he is very kind and lovely, always ready to help, even he's lazy as hell. If someone's in danger he's holding back anything, ready to sacrifice himself if needed. He's secretive, cold blooded, a natural tactitian and a perfect partner in mission, a true friend with his great problems in life.
 
Description of the character's history: Fraq grew up in Inferunokagure, in the Kirishima Clan, and was a Demiblood. This condition made his later life full of discrimination, caused by his impure blood, black hair instead of white. While most of his friends managed the fire nature, he managed the lightning one, making things worse.
The discrimination was real. The division was real. He couldn't find any sense in that way of life and in other's behaviour.
His father was severe, but loved him; his mother was kind, and loved him. His father had psychological problems due to his parents and his mother took care of him with a lot of efforts.
The final blow came when Fraq was 16: his mother fell ill. That was no normal illness, she had a serious problem in her brain.
Life went dark. His father's problems returned. His mother didn't make it. The Clan's medics made little effort to save her, because of the nature of Fraq's family.
Now Fraq was 18, with no mother, a out of his mind father that threatened him to leave home and the village. He desperately wandered from a village to another to find relief. He never found it, but he found other people, with similar goals.
He started to think humans conducted an awful and obscene way of life, and Fraq wanted to change that. An horrific death, but also so natural, made crucial by lack of humanity.
They say that in his pilgrimages, whenever he had the occasion, he stated: "I hate no-one. I don't like how we live."

History extra #1: Fraq inherited his name by his clan, his extreme care for valuable people by his father, his kindness and generosity from his mother. But there's not only good things he received from his parents. Despite his cold blood, saving a companion goes on top of his duties, and if the situation is desperate, anger devours him. At first, when he was young (between 12 and 15) he didn't know how possible could it be for him to go crazy for a friend or himself like that. He used this latent behaviour to overwhelm foes in critic situations [(missions or fights in the clan(read story)].
At 15 things changed. He started to have constant headache, every day, for a certain period of the morning. At 16, when his mother fell ill, he thought he inherited it by her. He interpreted it like a punishment for his unconscious use of that anger. This made him get the nickname: "Zutsū" (headache).
He started to live with this problem, accepting it, minimizing it, and above all, canalizing it to gain consciousness of his body and his mind; learning how even little pain in comparison to his mother's could make him more aware of the nature of the world.

History extra #2: When Fraq was 19, after more than an entire year wandering in the shinobi world, he came across a small restaurant in a forest. He heard two people shouting and one of them yelling at the other; he obviously entered. The place was larger than he expected. The two screaming were the restaurant's owner and a girl with red hair. The girl was  yelling at him cause apparently there was a mistake between orders and prices. Fraq slowly approached to the scene and tried to offer his money to placate the disagreement. She refused the money and paid herself. The two stared at each other for a moment, then she ran away. Fraq was tempted to follow her, but then heard a voice: "Come and take a sit with me boy".
An old man was sitting alone at one table, eating his meal. He looked like an old shinobi, but maybe he only was an old man like others. He sat with him and shared a meal offered by the man. He started to talk about the world, shinobis, everything: "Things are not like in the past; maybe you think I'm going to say they changed, but it's not the case". He kept spitting criptic statements, but in a fashionable way for sure. "Shinobis don't change too. Their purposes may change, but not their way of doing it, the shinobi way".
At that point, after some time spent listening to him, Fraq asked him: "What about their behaviour? Doesn't a good or an evil shinobi change the shinobi way depending on his attitude to the world?", "Can you tell me the difference between a good and an evil shinobi, kid?", Fraq esitated, then replied: "I think I can't." "Exactly. If no-one can tell the difference, how can one say the shinobi way changes from ninja to ninja?".
They stayed in silence for a while, then the old man got back to talk: "A shinobi in a village kills every now and then, a shinobi outside it probably kills everyday. A 'good' shinobi kills the evil ones to prevent these from doing it to their friends and companions. The 'evil' shinobi kills for whatever reason, but you can't say he hasn't one to follow and fulfill. Every shinobi kills, the shinobi world is made up of killing, we can't escape that".
The man stopped. Fraq stared at his empty bowl.
Fraq stood up and went for the exit. The man suddenly asked him: "Don't tell me you hate this world and its people, do you?"... "I hate no-one. I simply don't like how we live." "That's a purpose, too".
Fraq was at the exit, said goodbye to the man, and this one finally said: "Remember kid: Know to Foresee, Foresee to Do".
« Last Edit: August 15, 2017, 22:04:02 by FraQ »


I'm sooo hyped

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Re: Fraq Kirishima
« Reply #1 on: April 02, 2017, 20:46:29 »
Yes, Simple Character ! But don't worry, you can make a beautiful character later :)

Good.

Oh and Welcome to SLO !!!
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Re: Fraq Kirishima
« Reply #2 on: April 02, 2017, 20:47:47 »
Welcome to SLO ..
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Re: Fraq Kirishima
« Reply #3 on: April 02, 2017, 20:51:06 »
finally a new Kirishima :p

anyways transparant version :

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Re: Fraq Kirishima
« Reply #4 on: April 02, 2017, 20:51:45 »
Welcome to SLO! Nice character, dont worry about pic its just a visual thing xD

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Re: Fraq Kirishima
« Reply #5 on: April 02, 2017, 20:57:13 »
Looks good. Good luck
I haven't seen a Kirishima in a long time, it's a relief to see the clan back on track.
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Re: Fraq Kirishima
« Reply #6 on: April 02, 2017, 21:23:58 »
Yes, Simple Character ! But don't worry, you can make a beautiful character later :)

Good.

Oh and Welcome to SLO !!!
Thanks a lot :)

Welcome to SLO ..
Thanks!

finally a new Kirishima :p

anyways transparant version :

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Thank you for the image ahah didn't notice that :)

Welcome to SLO! Nice character, dont worry about pic its just a visual thing xD
Thanks!! I know, but that's always better to give a good impression and to see a good design

Looks good. Good luck
I haven't seen a Kirishima in a long time, it's a relief to see the clan back on track.
Thank you :) I've been active for a long time, but I decided to make my character just now ahaha
I'm sooo hyped

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Re: Fraq Kirishima
« Reply #7 on: April 02, 2017, 21:29:33 »
Welcome.
A dark story you got there.
I like that.

By the way,we will be in the same village,so you get another welcome ;)
Good to see more people join inferuno no sato.
I hope to see you on our discord server soon.

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Re: Fraq Kirishima
« Reply #8 on: April 02, 2017, 21:38:09 »
yoooo welcome here :3
and yea nice character xd
anyways if you want in my sig there are some interesting discord channels xdd




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« Reply #9 on: April 02, 2017, 22:57:17 »
Welcome.
A dark story you got there.
I like that.

By the way,we will be in the same village,so you get another welcome ;)
Good to see more people join inferuno no sato.
I hope to see you on our discord server soon.

https://discordapp.com/invite/NSvfrSw
Thanks, and thank you again ahahah, anyway, I'm looking forward to see what's this discord server! (I'll benefit from your welcoming to ask you a dumb question: I'm a Kirishima right, and I'm in Inferuno, but I think you noticed I'm one of Katakiuchi, so my question is, if you know, am I going to start in the village anyway? I ask you cause of your welcome, I'm a little confused now ahah, sorry)

yoooo welcome here :3
and yea nice character xd
anyways if you want in my sig there are some interesting discord channels xdd
Thank you :) Yeah as said just before, I'm looking forward to it thanks!
I'm sooo hyped

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« Reply #10 on: April 02, 2017, 23:12:57 »
Well,you DO have to start somewhere.
Im not sure if you can start in the village,but i think it will be possible.
You will have trouble to stay in that village,though.
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« Reply #11 on: April 02, 2017, 23:20:14 »
Well,you DO have to start somewhere.
Im not sure if you can start in the village,but i think it will be possible.
You will have trouble to stay in that village,though.
You start in a village that you choose, even though they know you'll be a rogue they can't arrest you or kill you for it.
Because you haven't turned rogue yet, i asked this question a long time ago.
After you do turn rogue and decide to leave the village you can kill him ez pz.
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« Reply #12 on: April 03, 2017, 12:53:32 »
Well,you DO have to start somewhere.
Im not sure if you can start in the village,but i think it will be possible.
You will have trouble to stay in that village,though.
Well,you DO have to start somewhere.
Im not sure if you can start in the village,but i think it will be possible.
You will have trouble to stay in that village,though.
You start in a village that you choose, even though they know you'll be a rogue they can't arrest you or kill you for it.
Because you haven't turned rogue yet, i asked this question a long time ago.
After you do turn rogue and decide to leave the village you can kill him ez pz.
Oh okok I get it now, thanks a lot to both of you!
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« Reply #13 on: April 03, 2017, 13:32:12 »
Welcome back!
I understand that you will stick with this name instead of Sans, right?


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« Reply #14 on: April 03, 2017, 14:25:45 »
Welcome back!
I understand that you will stick with this name instead of Sans, right?
That's right, sorry for the trouble, I almost forgot I changed the name ahahah
I'm sooo hyped