vregy good chapter

Writing was very good


Gib more gore

hands down the most beautiful YouTube video I've ever watched. I legit felt really emotional at one point.

+rep


every single line of dialogue was on point an hilarious

from the skeng to alguem br to art of blowjobs aaaaaaah
This is is art at its finest


I shiver and get wet when I wonder if mars hasn't even reached his peak yet

Also shivraj chill dude u want to get pounded?? damn nigga

before eating too much toxic ramen and killing myself, I vote Kakashi

Always kill Manu first its a guaranteed win then.

ahem

I vote for @Raidnn because his reason for picking me is quite random and it's just bs.

Also, aren't the dead not supposed to talk?

now that. Was a cheeky chapter. So many things I loved about this-- the hot tub flatulations, badass Ken not catching his arm, and the end, oh the end. You and america need to collab in a crossover story because u two make me wet with ur stories.




rip 2 months tho

not trying to be a dick or whatever but it looks shit and not like hidans scythe at all

if you are going to offer criticism, first off, dont say it looks like shit, because that is being a dick

then, after saying you don't think it looks great or isn't that cool, don't just finish your post and go find another post to insult, say why you don't think it looks good, and how the person could make it better . That is the point of constructive criticism.

In this case, you said it didn't look like Hidan's scythe. Why do you think so? Explain, because thankfully we are not in your head.

Take example from those before you in the forum who gave Kakashi suggestions like for example making something not naruto related.

Normally I think posts slightly on the shit end of the spectrum are funny, and I am guilty of shitposting quite a few times, but that was just toxic.

tl;dr when criticizing, give suggestions, don't just be a dick.

Gib moar chapter



also please give me an award for best sleeper I have slept through it all hahahaha


I love it gaaa