Shinobi Life Online
Shinobi Life Online Category => Shinobi Life Online Clans & Organizations => Shinobi Life Online Clans => Topic started by: AY0 on May 16, 2017, 23:30:30
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ツル Tsuri Clan
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Founder's
Ayo
Keyn
Allies
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Enemies
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Affiliation
Independant
History
Coming Soon
Purpose/Goals
Goals: Become The Clan With the best Swordsman(Kenjutsu Players)
Purpose: Collect All Legendary Swords
Unique features
Kenjutsu Expert Skills
And All Players Must use a StrawHat Whith The logo there when in missions
(if u want u can just use it in your back)
Members(5)
Leo
Keyn
Ayo
bobbybnx
Pow3R
Rules:
Respect Your Family
You Must Be In Hikatsuri | Once you turn hikatsuri , u turn tsuri , tsuri is a family. this is a way of proving ur loyalty to Hikatsuri and our brotherhood
(https://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php?action=post;msg=53804;topic=3124.0) To Join
Application
Username:
Why you want to be in Tsuri:
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Well good luck with your clan :)
A few things are bothering me here... hope you edit them:
1. The logos of your org and clan
First of all they are covering your post... so reduce the size
Second, the org logo seem not to be having a transparent background. No really, you just put the forum bg color in it didnt you? idk though
(http://i.imgur.com/iENiLoF.png)
Its covering Band some portion of the e in the "History" section I guess.
2. *Cause pain
3. Correction in the Katakana name of your clan
As far as my knowledge in Katakana, ツル = Tsuru which I guess stands for stork or something.
while ツ does stands for "Tsu" , ル stands for "ru" not "ri"
The correct Katakana for "Tsuri" is ツリ where リ = "ri"
What does tsuri mean tho? Tree? :P
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Is your clan identical to your org??
i mean i guess a Kenjutsu org works...kinda...
I just dont see the point
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What does tsuri mean tho? Tree? :P
Well, that would suck, bc I don't think that the Forest would want a rogue shinobi, considering how many of us are probably in Roguhanta, and there are no trees against the Hidden Forest. We are the village literally hidden by a BUNCH OF FUCKING TREES! We are the tree gods. ok, maybe I just got a little carried away, but that doesn't matter.
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CANCEROUS CANCEROUS CANCEROUS
(http://i.imgur.com/iENiLoF.png)
You are already *cousing pain on the forum.....but, really think that more recruits will apply if you make the logo more symmetrically aligned with the forum page.
I like the evilness in this clan.
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Well good luck with your clan :)
A few things are bothering me here... hope you edit them:
1. The logos of your org and clan
First of all they are covering your post... so reduce the size
Second, the org logo seem not to be having a transparent background. No really, you just put the forum bg color in it didnt you? idk though
(http://i.imgur.com/iENiLoF.png)
Its covering Band some portion of the e in the "History" section I guess.
2. *Cause pain
3. Correction in the Katakana name of your clan
As far as my knowledge in Katakana, ツル = Tsuru which I guess stands for stork or something.
while ツ does stands for "Tsu" , ル stands for "ru" not "ri"
The correct Katakana for "Tsuri" is ツリ where リ = "ri"
What does tsuri mean tho? Tree? :P
@Toratsume Nyshn Seeing it's katakana, my best guess would be a japan-ification of the English word "Three" (because the symbol consists of threefold of comma's and curves) rather than "Tree".
But yeah, ツリ would be the right way to write that.
As for the layout... Eh. Can't add anything more.
Content wise:
Limiting your players to the fact that they MUST be in Hikatsuri is a bit of a shame, but your call.
Also:
Allies
None, Never Going to Have
Enemies
EveryBody
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Tsuri a Rogue Clan That Live in A Florest Alll Rogues of That Clan Are From
The Organizacion Hikatsuri They are conected
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@Toratsume Nyshn Seeing it's katakana, my best guess would be a japan-ification of the English word "Three" (because the symbol consists of threefold of comma's and curves) rather than "Tree".
But yeah, ツリ would be the right way to write that.
Sookka... hmm
But why three though
@M0NK3Y is it their any meaning for the name?
Well, that would suck, bc I don't think that the Forest would want a rogue shinobi, considering how many of us are probably in Roguhanta, and there are no trees against the Hidden Forest. We are the village literally hidden by a BUNCH OF FUCKING TREES! We are the tree gods. ok, maybe I just got a little carried away, but that doesn't matter.
I guess he means they stay in the forest... which is like the whole area of which our village is a part.
But yeah... having a rogue clan nearby may spell trouble unless we all coexist peacefully :)
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its Outside the village will make your little Missions more dificult as we can follow u and just collect the reward of the mission TSURI *Whispering Voice* .. .
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Looks more like a organization.
And it seems to be almost identical with hikatsuri,and im not just talking about the logo.
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This is almost completely identical to your organization, Hikatsuri. In fact, it's completely the same, same goal. I guess you really like the idea of having Kenjutsu as a goal haha
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Straw Hats.. Swordsmen.. This definitely does not sound like a One Piece inspired clan/pirate crew at all.
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Straw Hats.. Swordsmen.. This definitely does not sound like a One Piece inspired clan/pirate crew at all.
Im not even into one piece i just like straw hats and swordsman
like swordsman whith strawhat '-'
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Well, that would suck, bc I don't think that the Forest would want a rogue shinobi, considering how many of us are probably in Roguhanta, and there are no trees against the Hidden Forest. We are the village literally hidden by a BUNCH OF FUCKING TREES! We are the tree gods. ok, maybe I just got a little carried away, but that doesn't matter.
I guess he means they stay in the forest... which is like the whole area of which our village is a part.
But yeah... having a rogue clan nearby may spell trouble unless we all coexist peacefully :)
Exactly!
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Well, that would suck, bc I don't think that the Forest would want a rogue shinobi, considering how many of us are probably in Roguhanta, and there are no trees against the Hidden Forest. We are the village literally hidden by a BUNCH OF FUCKING TREES! We are the tree gods. ok, maybe I just got a little carried away, but that doesn't matter.
I guess he means they stay in the forest... which is like the whole area of which our village is a part.
But yeah... having a rogue clan nearby may spell trouble unless we all coexist peacefully :)
Exactly!
So the village is in a flores!? Can where do u see the village in a florest
The Florest is Fking outside the village Tf '-'
now sht tf
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Application
Username: Nitsuini
Why you want to be in tsuri: Tsuri is of the sword and thesword is the ultimate way to fight.
Will You Join Hikatsuri Org: Yes
Whats Your Ping In Game? 55