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Shinobi Life Online Category => Shinobi Life Online Character => Topic started by: zaphuh on May 30, 2017, 04:22:08

Title: Kaori
Post by: zaphuh on May 30, 2017, 04:22:08
Name:Kaori
Age:17
Gender:Male
Height:5'9
Weight:58kg
Hairstyle:Medium Spiky
Facial hair:None
Hair color:White
Eye color:Light Blue
Blood type:O-
Primary chakra nature:Lightning
Secondary chakra nature: Water
Hidden Village:Yukigakure
Clan:
Good or evil at heart?:Depends

Description of the character's personality: Kaori minds own business, shows little emotion, doesn't talk much, does what he needs to do

Description of the character's history: Kaori was an orphan since birth. He was born in Kaminarigakure and was dropped off by Yukigakure. He was allowed to stay in the Hidden Ice Village by the elders, even though Kaori was different from everybody else in the the village. Kaori stayed on the streets and was often stealing from stores and stands. He would get caught by the store owners over and over, but he never gave up. He did what needed to survive. The kids that would roam the street would pick on Kaori. They would beat Kaori until he was on the ground crying.

One day a random shinobi decided to teach him some ninjutsu and taijutsu, after seeing him get beat up all the time. Kaori stayed with the shinobi for a couple of weeks and trained, then he went back on the streets, while the shinobi watched over him. The bullies came beat him up, but instead they had sticks in their hands. Kaori was frightened to see these weapons, but he decided to fight the anyways, as he picked up a stick. The bullies charged him and he used a simple water jutsu called Lightning Bullet. He hit the bullies with the jutsu and they were shocked, Kaori then continued to beat the bullies with his stick. The bullies ran away when they got the chance.

The shinobi came down and gave him a high five. The shinobi took him back to his house and said he was going to enroll him into the academy. Kaori was enrolled into the academy the next day. Kaori was quickly noticed as the kid who lived on the streets. He was a prodigy in his class and was quickly noticed by the teachers. Kaori got into an altercation that involved one of the kids older brother. He fought the older brother and beat him up also, but Kaori was suspended for 2 days, but his Genin exam was on the day he came back. Kaori came back to class and forgot that he had the exam. He was shaky during the exam, but he passed it.

Kaori came back to his house and was informed that his guardian was killed in a mission. He was filled with rage and wanted to become a chunin. He took the chunin exam not too long after the genin exam. He passed through the written chunin exam with ease. In the fights, he used his anger and destroyed everyone and severely hurt another kid. The Jonin stepped in and stopped Kaori from killing him. Everyone in the village noticed how strong he was. He went on a lot of missions with 3 man teams. Kaori realized that being a shinobi required a lot of time and effort, but everyone in the village were urging him to become a Jonin. Kaori became a jonin out of peer pressure, the next year. He was still filled with rage and blamed his village for the death of his guardian, so he left the village with the goal to kill his guardian's killer.
Title: Re: Shimizu Nagashi
Post by: Reminance on May 30, 2017, 07:25:53
If possible ask someone to create a character image for ya ^^
Title: Re: Shimizu Nagashi
Post by: zaphuh on May 30, 2017, 07:43:37
who should i ask :)))
Title: Re: Shimizu Nagashi
Post by: Reminance on May 30, 2017, 07:45:33
who should i ask :)))
There are some members who create images for others in this community, but most of them are kinda of busy right now due to exams.
Title: Re: Shimizu Nagashi
Post by: zaphuh on May 30, 2017, 07:47:46
ok thx.  also how do u put images in ur signature  xd
Title: Re: Shimizu Nagashi
Post by: Reminance on May 30, 2017, 07:55:48
You need to use the image tags (you can select and paste it into your signature, all you have to do is paste the image link you want to be your signature)

Code: [Select]
[img]Insert image link here[/img]
Title: Re: Shimizu Nagashi
Post by: zaphuh on May 30, 2017, 07:56:13
ok thanks bro!
Title: Re: Shimizu Nagashi
Post by: taigakun on May 30, 2017, 17:56:28
First time i'm seeing you so welcome to SLO :3
Title: Re: Shimizu Nagashi
Post by: takami on May 30, 2017, 21:40:53
yoo welcome on SLO and welcome in the hidden thunder kek :D
Title: Re: Shimizu Kaori
Post by: zaphuh on May 31, 2017, 07:29:27
can anybody make a character that look like this for me? (WITH white HAIR) xd please or at least tell me how to make a simple character in photo shop, i can add extra stuff later :L  .   or if anyone has a Photoshop character template i can download, so i can make it. thanks you

https://gyazo.com/3a507ea6ce4676d68abc957007c24133
Title: Re: Kaori
Post by: zaphuh on June 06, 2017, 08:36:35
(http://imgur.com/fmlVBRQ.png)   my first shitty ass character in photoshop :))))) http://imgur.com/fmlVBRQ
Title: Re: Kaori
Post by: Nova on June 06, 2017, 10:41:13
(http://imgur.com/fmlVBRQ.png)   my first shitty ass character in photoshop :))))) http://imgur.com/fmlVBRQ

Edited your post to actually make the image appear.
Looks good, if possible I would add some shading to give it more depth/detail.
this could be of help:
http://rudea.deviantart.com/art/Easy-shading-tutorial-138623137
https://i.ytimg.com/vi/PKMIwJt_joE/maxresdefault.jpg

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You forgot to define what type of file it was supposed to be.
You had:
[img]http://imgur.com/fmlVBRQ[/img]

adding a simple .png at the end of the link resulting in
[img]http://imgur.com/fmlVBRQ.png[/img]
Would've fixed it.
Furthermore I resized it a little so it wouldn't take up the entire screen by adding "height=300"
[img height=300]http://imgur.com/fmlVBRQ.png[/img]
Title: Re: Kaori
Post by: zaphuh on June 06, 2017, 16:10:52
ok thx!
Title: Re: Kaori
Post by: StriderOtaku on June 06, 2017, 19:46:05
Welcome to SLO.
Nice Image.
Title: Re: Kaori
Post by: DarthTyrael on June 06, 2017, 19:59:53
Waiting for your history and definitive look. So far the character look shows good promise.

I like the simplicity yet very elegant and stylish look of the clan's symbol. Very sexy c:


Welcome to SLO :)
Title: Re: Kaori
Post by: Fraudulent on June 06, 2017, 22:46:43
Welcome.
Title: Re: Kaori
Post by: IbrahimRafi on June 07, 2017, 16:17:11
Welcome and enjoy.