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Re: Infernus Probi (Hell Casters) Clan
« Reply #1 on: February 02, 2017, 01:29:11 »
Nice Chadi! good luck to you and your clan :)

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Re: Infernus Probi (Hell Casters) Clan
« Reply #2 on: February 02, 2017, 01:52:39 »
Is this meant to be a troll clan? I don't understand.. It's for rogues to have a safe space but it is a clan? What? Little effort went into this from what I can read but good luck anyway bud. Maybe improve on the storyline more.
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Re: Infernus Probi (Hell Casters) Clan
« Reply #3 on: February 02, 2017, 02:09:08 »
 
Is this meant to be a troll clan? I don't understand.. It's for rogues to have a safe space but it is a clan? What? Little effort went into this from what I can read but good luck anyway bud. Maybe improve on the storyline more.
  A rogue is someone that left a village good or bad, we accept rogues/indies to be able to come in and join and get a new life. I dont see how you see this as a troll, I do not know why you would think of this as a troll.
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Re: Infernus Probi (Hell Casters) Clan
« Reply #4 on: February 02, 2017, 02:10:20 »
It may seem like that but far from it, and I was not sure of history since I did not want it to be an ancient clan!!
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Re: Infernus Probi (Hell Casters) Clan
« Reply #5 on: February 02, 2017, 04:13:35 »
Idk why Leebz is a tad angsty but I'm sure he means no harm. Now he does have a point that as a clan it is rather odd (and pretty confusing) for you to accept rogues and independents. An individual chooses their clan at character creation. They will be born into it.

Most, if not all shinobi would only go rogue once they reach Jonin. The few exception would either be overlyconfident, extremely talented, or both. It makes no sense for an individual to abandon their village and be hunted to the death as an Academy Student or Genin.

By the time the average player gets to Jonin level or even a week into playing the game, they will almost definitely have a clan, and when they abandon their village...they won't abandon their clan.
(This is not 100% as some clans are village-affiliated and will kill any rogues witihn their ranks.)

However, in most cases, a rogue would keep their clan.

As an organisation, you have a fairly unique idea as I don't believe there are currently any orgs that act solely as a safe haven for rogues.

However as a clan, you're either asking for 5 minute old players to abandon their villages and join you or for them to stay in a village but belong to a rogue only clan.

Basically, it's kinda dumb <3 lmao. But a good idea nevertheless, just replace the word clan with organisation and post it on the organisation thread and you've got a deal.


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I notice in your 'Organisation' tab you've already put the name Infernus Probi lmao as if u knew your mistake


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Re: Infernus Probi (Hell Casters) Clan
« Reply #6 on: February 02, 2017, 07:20:27 »
Idk why Leebz is a tad angsty but I'm sure he means no harm. Now he does have a point that as a clan it is rather odd (and pretty confusing) for you to accept rogues and independents. An individual chooses their clan at character creation. They will be born into it.

Most, if not all shinobi would only go rogue once they reach Jonin. The few exception would either be overlyconfident, extremely talented, or both. It makes no sense for an individual to abandon their village and be hunted to the death as an Academy Student or Genin.

By the time the average player gets to Jonin level or even a week into playing the game, they will almost definitely have a clan, and when they abandon their village...they won't abandon their clan.
(This is not 100% as some clans are village-affiliated and will kill any rogues witihn their ranks.)

However, in most cases, a rogue would keep their clan.

As an organisation, you have a fairly unique idea as I don't believe there are currently any orgs that act solely as a safe haven for rogues.

However as a clan, you're either asking for 5 minute old players to abandon their villages and join you or for them to stay in a village but belong to a rogue only clan.

Basically, it's kinda dumb <3 lmao. But a good idea nevertheless, just replace the word clan with organisation and post it on the organisation thread and you've got a deal.


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I notice in your 'Organisation' tab you've already put the name Infernus Probi lmao as if u knew your mistake



Leebz was a little bit harsh with his advice but he was right and so is Manuster. This would work better as an org, and it would be a unique one too. But if you decide you want it as a clan nevertheless, it's your choice, no one will stop you.
Good luck anyways.
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Re: Infernus Probi (Hell Casters) Clan
« Reply #7 on: February 02, 2017, 09:48:25 »
Even the logo gives off more of a org vibe than a clan. We are not forcing you to change it if you do not want, but that would most certainly be the better option.

Anyways good luck

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And boyz this is a Lucifer created clan back the fuck off if u dont want to go to hell :O
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Re: Infernus Probi (Hell Casters) Clan
« Reply #8 on: February 02, 2017, 10:01:09 »
Where is tehh heaven clan? #FeelsBadMan, Goodluck with your clan ^^
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Re: Infernus Probi (Hell Casters) Clan
« Reply #9 on: February 02, 2017, 11:07:09 »
Even the logo gives off more of a org vibe than a clan. We are not forcing you to change it if you do not want, but that would most certainly be the better option.

Anyways good luck

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And boyz this is a Lucifer created clan back the fuck off if u dont want to go to hell :O

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Re: Infernus Probi (Hell Casters) Clan
« Reply #10 on: February 02, 2017, 17:45:47 »
ok... confused with the history and unique traits (pls elaborate)
room for improvement...
good luck :)




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Re: Infernus Probi (Hell Casters) Clan
« Reply #11 on: February 02, 2017, 17:56:32 »
Everyones just cooking this boi for his clan... FeelsBadMan. But, i do agree with Manu. Change it to an Org, or even set out to make your own little village with the building system or something. GL with it my guy :)

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Re: Infernus Probi (Hell Casters) Clan
« Reply #12 on: February 02, 2017, 20:23:53 »
I guess it would be a better org I will change it on my pc
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