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Offline AY0

ツル Tsuri Clan
« on: May 16, 2017, 23:30:30 »
ツル Tsuri Clan



Founder

Ayo

Keyn


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None, Never Going to Have

Enemies

EveryBody

Affiliation

Rogue

History

Being Made
Purpose/Goals

Goals: Become The Clan With the best Swordsman(Kenjutsu Players) Couse Pain and Suffering

Purpose: Collect All Legendary Swords

Unique features

Kenjutsu Expert Skills
And All Players Must use a StrawHat Whith The logo there when in missions
(if u want u can just use it in your back)


Members(5)

Leo 1) Just Beginning to learn

Keyn 6) Divine Sword Talent

Ayo 6) Divine Sword Talent

bobbybnx 6) Divine Sword Talent

Pow3R 3) Work whith sword

Ranks

1) Just Beginning to learn

2) Attain some achievements
 
3) Work whith sword

4) Outstanding

5) Swordsman 

6) Divine Sword Talent

7) Unrivalled With Sword

8.) Sword Master

9) One With The Sword

10) Surpass Th World

Rules:

Respect Your Members Or Else You Will Get Expelled

Always Wear the Color of the Vest that Everybody

You Must Be In Hikatsuri(https://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php?action=post;msg=53804;topic=3124.0) To Join

Application

Username:

Why you want to be in tsuri:

Will You Join Hikatsuri Org:

Whats Your Ping In Game?



« Last Edit: July 19, 2017, 22:58:40 by AY0 »


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Re: ツル Tsuri Clan
« Reply #1 on: May 17, 2017, 04:45:04 »
Well good luck with your clan :)

A few things are bothering me here... hope you edit them:
1. The logos of your org and clan
First of all they are covering your post... so reduce the size
Second, the org logo seem not to be having a transparent background. No really, you just put the forum bg color in it didnt you? idk though



Its covering Band some portion of the e in the "History" section I guess.

2. *Cause pain

3. Correction in the Katakana name of your clan
As far as my knowledge in Katakana, ツル = Tsuru which I guess stands for stork or something.
while does stands for "Tsu" , stands for "ru" not "ri"
The correct Katakana for "Tsuri" is ツリ where リ = "ri"

What does tsuri mean tho? Tree?  :P
 


Offline Manuster

Re: ツル Tsuri Clan
« Reply #2 on: May 17, 2017, 06:06:48 »
Is your clan identical to your org??

i mean i guess a Kenjutsu org works...kinda...

I just dont see the point

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Re: ツル Tsuri Clan
« Reply #3 on: May 17, 2017, 15:42:31 »

What does tsuri mean tho? Tree?  :P
 
Well, that would suck, bc I don't think that the Forest would want a rogue shinobi, considering how many of us are probably in Roguhanta, and there are no trees against the Hidden Forest. We are the village literally hidden by a BUNCH OF FUCKING TREES! We are the tree gods. ok, maybe I just got a little carried away, but that doesn't matter.
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Offline HermitTheSage

Re: ツル Tsuri Clan
« Reply #4 on: May 17, 2017, 16:33:54 »
CANCEROUS CANCEROUS CANCEROUS







You are already *cousing pain on the forum.....but, really think that more recruits will apply if you make the logo more symmetrically aligned with the forum page.
I like the evilness in this clan.
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Re: ツル Tsuri Clan
« Reply #5 on: May 17, 2017, 20:26:05 »
Well good luck with your clan :)

A few things are bothering me here... hope you edit them:
1. The logos of your org and clan
First of all they are covering your post... so reduce the size
Second, the org logo seem not to be having a transparent background. No really, you just put the forum bg color in it didnt you? idk though



Its covering Band some portion of the e in the "History" section I guess.

2. *Cause pain

3. Correction in the Katakana name of your clan
As far as my knowledge in Katakana, ツル = Tsuru which I guess stands for stork or something.
while does stands for "Tsu" , stands for "ru" not "ri"
The correct Katakana for "Tsuri" is ツリ where リ = "ri"

What does tsuri mean tho? Tree?  :P
 

@Toratsume Nyshn Seeing it's katakana, my best guess would be a japan-ification of the English word "Three" (because the symbol consists of threefold of comma's and curves) rather than "Tree".

But yeah, ツリ would be the right way to write that.

As for the layout... Eh. Can't add anything more.

Content wise:

Limiting your players to the fact that they MUST be in Hikatsuri is a bit of a shame, but your call.
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EveryBody








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Offline AY0

Re: ツル Tsuri Clan
« Reply #6 on: May 17, 2017, 22:08:00 »
Tsuri a Rogue Clan That Live in A Florest Alll Rogues of That Clan Are From
The Organizacion Hikatsuri  They are conected
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Re: ツル Tsuri Clan
« Reply #7 on: May 18, 2017, 01:24:45 »

@Toratsume Nyshn Seeing it's katakana, my best guess would be a japan-ification of the English word "Three" (because the symbol consists of threefold of comma's and curves) rather than "Tree".

But yeah, ツリ would be the right way to write that.

Sookka... hmm
But why three though
@M0NK3Y is it their any meaning for the name?

Well, that would suck, bc I don't think that the Forest would want a rogue shinobi, considering how many of us are probably in Roguhanta, and there are no trees against the Hidden Forest. We are the village literally hidden by a BUNCH OF FUCKING TREES! We are the tree gods. ok, maybe I just got a little carried away, but that doesn't matter.
I guess he means they stay in the forest... which is like the whole area of which our village is a part.
But yeah... having a rogue clan nearby may spell trouble unless we all coexist peacefully :)


Offline AY0

Re: ツル Tsuri Clan
« Reply #8 on: May 18, 2017, 09:04:08 »
its Outside the village will make your little Missions more dificult as we can follow u and just collect the reward of the mission TSURI *Whispering Voice* .. .
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Re: ツル Tsuri Clan
« Reply #9 on: May 18, 2017, 12:20:48 »
Looks more like a organization.
And it seems to be almost identical with hikatsuri,and im not just talking about the logo.
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Re: ツル Tsuri Clan
« Reply #10 on: May 18, 2017, 15:22:08 »
This is almost completely identical to your organization, Hikatsuri. In fact, it's completely the same, same goal. I guess you really like the idea of having Kenjutsu as a goal haha
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Re: ツル Tsuri Clan
« Reply #11 on: May 18, 2017, 15:28:22 »
Straw Hats.. Swordsmen.. This definitely does not sound like a One Piece inspired clan/pirate crew at all.

Offline AY0

Re: ツル Tsuri Clan
« Reply #12 on: May 18, 2017, 18:38:07 »
Straw Hats.. Swordsmen.. This definitely does not sound like a One Piece inspired clan/pirate crew at all.

Im not even into one piece i just like straw hats and swordsman
like swordsman whith strawhat '-'
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Re: ツル Tsuri Clan
« Reply #13 on: May 19, 2017, 15:27:21 »

Well, that would suck, bc I don't think that the Forest would want a rogue shinobi, considering how many of us are probably in Roguhanta, and there are no trees against the Hidden Forest. We are the village literally hidden by a BUNCH OF FUCKING TREES! We are the tree gods. ok, maybe I just got a little carried away, but that doesn't matter.
I guess he means they stay in the forest... which is like the whole area of which our village is a part.
But yeah... having a rogue clan nearby may spell trouble unless we all coexist peacefully :)
Exactly!
« Last Edit: May 19, 2017, 15:28:56 by animeoveraddict »
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Re: ツル Tsuri Clan
« Reply #14 on: May 20, 2017, 03:40:19 »

Well, that would suck, bc I don't think that the Forest would want a rogue shinobi, considering how many of us are probably in Roguhanta, and there are no trees against the Hidden Forest. We are the village literally hidden by a BUNCH OF FUCKING TREES! We are the tree gods. ok, maybe I just got a little carried away, but that doesn't matter.
I guess he means they stay in the forest... which is like the whole area of which our village is a part.
But yeah... having a rogue clan nearby may spell trouble unless we all coexist peacefully :)
Exactly!


So the village is in a flores!? Can where do u see the village in a florest
The Florest is Fking outside the village Tf '-'
now sht tf
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