Good work. I love when stories incorporate clans/orgs of the forum.Took the words right out of my mouth Batt , I love the history dude I'm hyped up for the next part Lol
I just finished reading part 1 and I have to say it looked amazing. Then I found out that there was more. LOL. It's that I have to study for my tests that I am quittin' now, saving the best for last I hope ;D
Looks really good this far. Like the style! +rep for ya ;D
Daaaaamn. I snitched so hard! xD
"If I survive this, I am soooLol omg dude awesome!!!!!!!
stepping down as Kage" said
Vuregu,
Manu when are we getting part 5?? :33
You, sir, are the best writer I've seen here yet.
Please correct me if I'm wrong, but I...I think you just established a whole sh*tload of canon.
Manu when are we getting part 5?? :33
Today ;)
Manu when are we getting part 5?? :33
Today ;)
Manu when are we getting part 5?? :33
Today ;)
Aye looking forward to it
Manu when are we getting part 5?? :33
Today ;)
I eagerly await it. :)
SHIIT MANU, you made me a fucking Bolton... I LOVE IT <3 Can't wait for the other part!
Imma eat that heart TSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS.
damn I'm old as shit in that story lol.
Just took the time to read it all.
It's amazing. Very nice job. I like the way you made every character be special.
Kirishima looks so malicious though :/
As well as Hidden Ash... Too bad I am part of both.
Amazing as always man
do you make your grand entry when all the good ninjas are dead :3
jk this one gave me chills tho.
goodwork.
You're going down the wrong road... @Mars
Is it worth dying just to kill me?
Awesome Chapter <3
You're not gonna make more chapters ? :'( NOOOO!!! This was awesome tho! If you need any help on writing more... pm me i can help you out if you want.
Read through about four parts roughly and I am pretty certain this mentions Onimaro more than Manuster. Is this your character history or a SLO story? Great writing though.I think its an SLO story about everyone.
Ahh. I feel it should have been put in a separate post in my opinion, lol.Read through about four parts roughly and I am pretty certain this mentions Onimaro more than Manuster. Is this your character history or a SLO story? Great writing though.I think its an SLO story about everyone.
Read through about four parts roughly and I am pretty certain this mentions Onimaro more than Manuster. Is this your character history or a SLO story? Great writing though.Awe thanks Leebz, it was really inspired from your Himitsu Trilogy
He just forgot to introduce his character lmfao, but, he's setting up the world rn.
I NEED PART 8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mine eyes deceive me -_- Manuster updated it heck yeah! *dives through window*
<_< can't wait for the next update in 2018
It dawned on Zama that the scars that covered the mans skin were all names and he shuddered as a chill passed down his spine.Chills maan... them chills :3
Come on manuster im w8ing for the next chapteeeeeeeeer. Come on man...
Next chapter in 5mins or I kill you.
taanks taiga <£Next chapter in 5mins or I kill you.
kek welp its been like 3 hours m9
Spent alot more time on this as I felt quality was kinda lacking recently.lol nice joke :3
Next chapter in 5mins or I kill you.
Next chapter in 5mins or I kill you.
*falls back on chair*.............................woah that Itsuki part....damn....it hit me hard........he lives right? Some dope shinobi saves him right?
<_< this crap never happens at hidden inferno, ocean, thunder or shock we got our shit covered
Great job again Manu..time to wait another month..or twolkgnerlgerge I cant write as fast as Snoops or Murica, and besides, they release shorter chapters fuSpoiler: show
"Come to my carriage if you want a
firsthand experience of being under the
law.
TeeheeSeriously!
I dont wanna make promises but anytime between today and the weekend
Its gonna be a loooong ass chapter
idk anymore rip
idk anymore rip
What the fuck does that mean?
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Not your call.
If the owner wants it locked he knows where to find me.
U legit owe us the final shit... come on...
U legit owe us the final shit... come on...
Just write your own ending lol