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Hidden Dust Chronicles - Databook
« on: April 27, 2017, 21:32:49 »
Props to @America  for the concept, I stole it from him.
Artwork: @Rapho


This thread contains the significant characters from my chapters. This should fill in any gaps of information which you would not have found in the story.

Entry 01

Name: Darā Naku
Age: 26
Status: Immortal
Chakra Nature(s): Fire
Fighting style: Melee, Swordsmanship
Code: 0035
Present/Mentioned in chapters: 5-12
Residence: Shaolin Temple, Hidden Dust Village (North-East)

Personality: Darā is a well disciplined, young man. He is careless and arrogant most of the time, as well as very sensitive and diligent in his own arts. Darā talks in a sarcastic tone and likes to toy around with his victims before taking decisive actions.

History: Here

Strengths:
Great Speed
Great Strength

Weaknesses:
Poor Stamina



Entry 02

Name: Hyoban
Age: 17
Status: Alive
Chakra Nature(s): Lightning
Fighting style: Melee, Ranged Jutsu Attacks
Code: 0021
Present/Mentioned in chapters: 10-15
Residence: Currently in Hidden Dust, originally from Hidden Thunder

Personality: Hyoban is an arrogant and vain shinobi. He naturally underestimates his opponents, however will back away from a battle he feels would threaten his life. Hyoban is fairly rational when it comes to battle, as he would find the best possible method to deal with things, avoiding excess hassle that would waste time.

History: (Soon)

Strengths:
Great Speed
Great Agility
Ability to enter the zone instantaneously

Weaknesses:
Average strength in standard form



Entry 03
Name: Vizier
Age: ~40
Status: Alive
Chakra Nature(s): Wind, Earth
Fighting style: Melee, Swordsmanship
Code: N/A
Present/Mentioned in chapters: 2-Present
Residence: Hidden Dust Village

Personality: Vizier is by far the wisest shinobi Nibui has come across so far; he has lived the longest out of every member in Blackbox. Vizier is a helpful and straightforward ninja with great leadership qualities. He open for humorous conversations but will quickly fix up when the time for serious business calls. He is the father figure to Nibui and therefore disciplines him from time to time.

History: Soon

Strengths:
Powerful Jutsu
Good Stamina

Weaknesses:
Low Speed


« Last Edit: June 26, 2017, 13:26:41 by Snoopy »


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Re: Hidden Dust Chronicles - Databook
« Reply #1 on: April 27, 2017, 21:44:53 »
Damn, (gimme some credit too, for ze inspiracion) this fking great. The story's building a lotta hype. Keep going.
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Re: Hidden Dust Chronicles - Databook
« Reply #2 on: April 27, 2017, 22:07:18 »
Knowing America? I expect them to sue you for everything you own.

Everyone knows you don't do what America does.

Cause that would make you a terrorist ;)
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Re: Hidden Dust Chronicles - Databook
« Reply #3 on: April 27, 2017, 22:29:10 »
Knowing America? I expect them to sue you for everything you own.

Everyone knows you don't do what America does.

Cause that would make you a terrorist ;)
Okay, so you spent your post talking about something retarded like that, which comes from the small italic letters at the corner of my thread, instead of making a more on-topic comment about the actual contents of my thread that actually relate to my story.

But you're you, so I wouldn't expect anything different.

Damn, (gimme some credit too, for ze inspiracion) this fking great. The story's building a lotta hype. Keep going.
Haha, credits to you for the idea ;).
Yeah, the story is getting somewhere slowly.

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Re: Hidden Dust Chronicles - Databook
« Reply #4 on: April 27, 2017, 22:57:11 »
Very nice! I quite like the data book concept, it helps ground stories and develop characters imo. Looking forward to more chapters and entries!


Suggestion -- when u update the data book, I personally think it would be easier for you to update it it in the original post in the first page, and then bump the thread to let people know it's updated. It enables you to see all the entries without having to scroll around and change pages. Seems better to me, but do with this suggestion what you will :/ :)

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Re: Hidden Dust Chronicles - Databook
« Reply #5 on: April 27, 2017, 23:13:45 »
Very nice! I quite like the data book concept, it helps ground stories and develop characters imo. Looking forward to more chapters and entries!


Suggestion -- when u update the data book, I personally think it would be easier for you to update it it in the original post in the first page, and then bump the thread to let people know it's updated. It enables you to see all the entries without having to scroll around and change pages. Seems better to me, but do with this suggestion what you will :/ :)

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Thanks, I agree with your statements about character development.
And yeah, I was initially going to do the idea you suggested, but thanks anyway :P
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Re: Hidden Dust Chronicles - Databook
« Reply #6 on: April 28, 2017, 07:53:06 »
The suit is cool and the face gives the villainous vibes.

Suggestion -- when u update the data book, I personally think it would be easier for you to update it it in the original post in the first page, and then bump the thread to let people know it's updated. It enables you to see all the entries without having to scroll around and change pages. Seems better to me, but do with this suggestion what you will :/ :)

This would totally depend upon the size of the databook tho. If it increases the set word limit then ofc further entries need a new post. But I guess the original post can hold around 15 or 20 OCs... or even more maybe, so it ain't gonna be a problem.. hopefully.





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Re: Hidden Dust Chronicles - Databook
« Reply #7 on: April 28, 2017, 16:18:21 »
Immortal and shit lul
But goddamn like the char design. This is the first SLO created character i've seen with a suit. Looking forward to more


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Re: Hidden Dust Chronicles - Databook
« Reply #8 on: April 28, 2017, 17:15:36 »
Nicee :) in love with those Databooks

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Re: Hidden Dust Chronicles - Databook
« Reply #9 on: April 28, 2017, 19:01:11 »
A shinobi with a suit...
Spoiler: show
How cool is that?!?! :D


Like his personality too.

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Re: Hidden Dust Chronicles - Databook
« Reply #10 on: April 28, 2017, 22:40:40 »
Immortal and shit lul
But goddamn like the char design. This is the first SLO created character i've seen with a suit. Looking forward to more
I'm going to clear it out now before further confusion arises.
My story is based in the SLO World, however it does not follow Narutoverse physics and logic, in a sense that jutsu and chakra aren't the only viable methods of combat, and characters aren't strictly bound to human physics and limits.

Nicee :) in love with those Databooks
Thanks :)

A shinobi with a suit...
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Like his personality too.

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Re: Hidden Dust Chronicles - Databook
« Reply #11 on: April 29, 2017, 17:26:23 »
oooh nice char, cant wait for his history xd
and good job rapho ^^
STATUS: immortal wooooooo fuark xdd




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Re: Hidden Dust Chronicles - Databook
« Reply #12 on: April 29, 2017, 17:57:13 »
oooh nice char, cant wait for his history xd
and good job rapho ^^
STATUS: immortal wooooooo fuark xdd
Thank you :)


@Snoopy Are you going to make an entry for every character that appeared in your stories or only for the ones that you created for your story?

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Re: Hidden Dust Chronicles - Databook
« Reply #13 on: April 29, 2017, 18:29:10 »
oooh nice char, cant wait for his history xd
and good job rapho ^^
STATUS: immortal wooooooo fuark xdd
Thank you :)


@Snoopy Are you going to make an entry for every character that appeared in your stories or only for the ones that you created for your story?
Only the ones that are in my ongoing story. I'll add my OC in here and Vizier, along with any other significant characters.
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Re: Hidden Dust Chronicles - Databook
« Reply #14 on: June 26, 2017, 13:28:10 »
Databook update:
Entries 02 and 03; Hyoban and Vizier have been added to the databook.

Dara update: History included.
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