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Re: Hayame Ibiki
« Reply #15 on: June 15, 2016, 18:23:28 »
That's lovely man, really nice storytelling...I'm attached.

I love how...different everything is. Definitely one of my favourites, great fricking job ;)

@Manuster Thanks man, appreciate it ^^




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Re: Hayame [WIP]
« Reply #16 on: June 20, 2016, 08:35:12 »
lul. Your Picture is actually really nice. I like it because im fking bad in drawing xd. And I think your character is a little bit too old but its your decision ^^.
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Re: Hayame [WIP]
« Reply #17 on: June 20, 2016, 11:41:21 »
lul. Your Picture is actually really nice. I like it because im fking bad in drawing xd. And I think your character is a little bit too old but its your decision ^^.
Someone hasn't seen ST's character then xD
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Re: Hayame [WIP]
« Reply #18 on: June 20, 2016, 12:21:28 »
lul. Your Picture is actually really nice. I like it because im fking bad in drawing xd. And I think your character is a little bit too old but its your decision ^^.
Someone hasn't seen ST's character then xD

He's only... a bit too old >.<

The backstory and drawing are really nice! gz on the cool character

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Re: Hayame
« Reply #19 on: June 20, 2016, 12:25:00 »
lul. Your Picture is actually really nice. I like it because im fking bad in drawing xd. And I think your character is a little bit too old but its your decision ^^.
Someone hasn't seen ST's character then xD

He's only... a bit too old >.<

The backstory and drawing are really nice! gz on the cool character

TFW you just replied and I edited the story afterwards. XD




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Re: Hayame
« Reply #20 on: June 20, 2016, 15:02:28 »
It seems you've changed the story and the way you storytell is really amazing ^^
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Re: Hayame
« Reply #21 on: June 20, 2016, 15:13:00 »
lul. Your Picture is actually really nice. I like it because im fking bad in drawing xd. And I think your character is a little bit too old but its your decision ^^.

Thanks @tyler179. I did it because on average, I suppose 30-ish would be a valid age for someone to become ANBU, having earned quite some reputation as a Jounin (probs around 20-ish). I hope you understand my decision.

Also thanks @SirTroll and @Reminance for your compliments and @SirTroll again for allowing me to use your character in my history ^^




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Re: Hayame
« Reply #22 on: June 20, 2016, 16:54:58 »
xDDDD ST the Desert Fox niiice


coool addition + Reminance was right, your storytelling skills are remarkable
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