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Shinobi Life Online Category => Shinobi Life Online Clans & Organizations => Shinobi Life Online Organizations => Topic started by: AY0 on February 28, 2017, 13:19:46

Title: 剣客 Hikatsuri
Post by: AY0 on February 28, 2017, 13:19:46
剣客 Hikatsuri

(https://image.prntscr.com/image/zbhsd2pHRVCL-__t5hK-Zw.png)

Founder's

AYO & Keyn


 
Spoiler: show
We go by ranks, and the ranks go by skill. even the founder can be surpassed.


Allies

None, We do not trust no one. Only ourselves.

Enemies

Anyone that gets in our way

Affiliation

Rogue

History

Coming Soon...
Purpose/Goals

Goals: Become The Organization With the best Swordsman(Kenjutsu Players) Couse Toxicity Among The World

Purpose: Collect All Legendary Swords

Unique features

Kenjutsu Expert Skills
Expert Toxicity Skills.


Members(5)

Leo 1) Just Beginning to learn

Keyn 1) Just Beginning to learn

Ayo 1) Just Beginning to learn

bobbybnx 1) Just Beginning to learn

Pow3R 1) Just Beginning to learn


Ranks

1) Just Beginning to learn

2) Attain some achievements
 
3) Work whith sword

4) Outstanding

5) Swordsman 

6) Divine Sword Talent

7) Unrivalled With Sword

8.) Sword Master

9) One With The Sword

10) Surpass Th World

Rules:~

Respect your members , and follow ur founders rules.

Application

Username:

Why you want to be in Hikatsuri:

Are you Toxic?

How many friends in this community u have?



Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: Fraudulent on February 28, 2017, 13:32:46
This guy's on crack.
Good luck with this.
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: Sokka Tongsi on February 28, 2017, 13:47:01
This guy's on crack.
Good luck with this.
😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 lol
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: AY0 on February 28, 2017, 15:17:33
This guy's on crack.
Good luck with this.

 Says The Guy Whith the Name "Snoopy" Lol
 :D
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: StriderOtaku on February 28, 2017, 15:24:25
This guy's on crack.
Good luck with this.
I agree. I agree with both sentences.
Spoiler: show
the crack is strong with this one
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: Ken on February 28, 2017, 16:46:08
This is maybe the most ugliest lay-out i've seen on an org.

gl.
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: RyRy on February 28, 2017, 16:48:28
the layout is a bit broken lel
GL with the org my guy
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: Manuster on February 28, 2017, 16:58:27
Ignore the hate buddy, you got a great thing going here!!!!

I've even +repped to show how much I like the idea!!!!

One little tip though:
Maybe change the yellow and white font as that is hard to read?

And having an afro as a requirement may restrict you on what members could join. What if one of the best kenjutsu users are bald?

As cool as your organisation logo is, maybe try reduce the size?

End your life?

You could've proofread your story as there are a lot of spelling errors.

Maybe hold back a bit with tab and spacebar? There are a lot of unnecessary spaces that make the entire post disjointed and hard to read.

Read a couple other organisations to get an idea of how to present yourself to be taken seriously. No one will want to join an organisation that is so poorly presented.

Think about it this way; if you can't put effort into your own organisation, then why would anybody else?
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: Diamond Lee on February 28, 2017, 17:54:45
Well good luck I uh well yeah good luck!


It's original
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: taigakun on February 28, 2017, 18:42:58
Eyyy i like this!!
Good luck bro
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: AY0 on February 28, 2017, 20:39:25
Ignore the hate buddy, you got a great thing going here!!!!

I've even +repped to show how much I like the idea!!!!

One little tip though:
Maybe change the yellow and white font as that is hard to read?

And having an afro as a requirement may restrict you on what members could join. What if one of the best kenjutsu users are bald?


As cool as your organisation logo is, maybe try reduce the size?

End your life?

You could've proofread your story as there are a lot of spelling errors.

Maybe hold back a bit with tab and spacebar? There are a lot of unnecessary spaces that make the entire post disjointed and hard to read.

Read a couple other organisations to get an idea of how to present yourself to be taken seriously. No one will want to join an organisation that is so poorly presented.

Think about it this way; if you can't put effort into your own organisation, then why would anybody else?

Ty For The Suppurt alredy Edited
Used to Hate On My Posts
Not chaging the afro idea



There Mutch Better! lol



This is maybe the most ugliest lay-out i've seen on an org.

gl.
Here Better Now?
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: Fraudulent on February 28, 2017, 23:42:26
Please refrain from double triple posting. Instead click on 'Modify' to edit your previous message.
@Nova  you should probably fix this for him and remove the excess posts.

Bye~~
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: Manuster on March 01, 2017, 04:24:06
Ignore the hate buddy, you got a great thing going here!!!!

I've even +repped to show how much I like the idea!!!!

One little tip though:
Maybe change the yellow and white font as that is hard to read?

And having an afro as a requirement may restrict you on what members could join. What if one of the best kenjutsu users are bald?


As cool as your organisation logo is, maybe try reduce the size?

End your life?

You could've proofread your story as there are a lot of spelling errors.

Maybe hold back a bit with tab and spacebar? There are a lot of unnecessary spaces that make the entire post disjointed and hard to read.

Read a couple other organisations to get an idea of how to present yourself to be taken seriously. No one will want to join an organisation that is so poorly presented.

Think about it this way; if you can't put effort into your own organisation, then why would anybody else?

Ty For The Suppurt alredy Edited
Used to Hate On My Posts
Not chaging the afro idea




Honestly, jokes aside, the idea is good, great actually. There's no other organisation that focuses only on Kenjutsu (afaik).

What is likely to hold you back were the initial comments, it doesn't really give off the best image.

NEVERTHELESS, good luck to the org, I personally hope you get some help with the story; not everyone's a born storywriter. ;)

And hey, you like black guys with afros fighting with big ass swords, who am I to complain?
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: AY0 on March 01, 2017, 10:06:57
I Decided To Put The REAL STORY of this organization! There you go Guys
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: ziSwav on March 02, 2017, 10:57:31
Bruh , U Played AOW
I Was There The Dude Was One of The 7Immortal Thats Why he Was using Ancient Tai Chi Sword
Btw I Want to Join i Was Rootless In AOW
I'm zKen
I Heard About You in AOW Soo its True u Do Exist 
Its Here were you been ?  The Beggar Sect Immortal Told Me You Was Here in this Game/Forums
I Like This Game ill Stay Here Whith You
Your One of The 5 Wudang SwordsMen?
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: AY0 on March 02, 2017, 11:01:23
Bruh , U Played AOW
I Was There The Dude Was One of The 7Immortal Thats Why he Was using Ancient Tai Chi Sword
Btw I Want to Join i Was Rootless In AOW
I'm zKen
I Heard About You in AOW Soo its True u Do Exist 
Its Here were you been ?  The Beggar Sect Immortal Told Me You Was Here in this Game/Forums
I Like This Game ill Stay Here Whith You
Your One of The 5 Wudang SwordsMen?
Ur zKen ?! Lol :P
You In Ill Pm U The Discord
Yea i WAS One of them I Stopped Playing Let That Beggar Immortal Be his Annoyign Asf
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: ziSwav on March 02, 2017, 11:45:58
Bruh , U Played AOW
I Was There The Dude Was One of The 7Immortal Thats Why he Was using Ancient Tai Chi Sword
Btw I Want to Join i Was Rootless In AOW
I'm zKen
I Heard About You in AOW Soo its True u Do Exist 
Its Here were you been ?  The Beggar Sect Immortal Told Me You Was Here in this Game/Forums
I Like This Game ill Stay Here Whith You
Your One of The 5 Wudang SwordsMen?
Ur zKen ?! Lol :P
You In Ill Pm U The Discord
Yea i WAS One of them I Stopped Playing Let That Beggar Immortal Be his Annoyign Asf
Ignoring One Of The Immortals Lololl I Bet u Was Strong Swordsmen
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: AY0 on March 02, 2017, 11:53:51
7th Immortal Was My Master Obviously KKKK
Beggar Immortal Literaly Bullied me So i had to become strong no matter what but im done whith that
but i never reatch to Mont Hua
Always wanted to be ay Immortal :/
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: AY0 on March 09, 2017, 11:21:13
Oh i Forgot lol!
Aplication Added!

Go Check it Out
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: CaioDarT on March 09, 2017, 17:51:19
Good luck with yout Organization Monk3y :)
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: AY0 on March 09, 2017, 18:14:47
Good luck with yout Organization Monk3y :)
Obrigado :)
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: Kazmaru on March 09, 2017, 18:27:24
I really like the rankings, GL with the org!
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: Ken on March 09, 2017, 18:31:36
This is somewhat better. :) Gj
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: Keyn on March 14, 2017, 18:02:42
Character Name: Sanyú
Why you want to join:I want to be the best kj player
Will you swear to never betray the rootless swordsmen?:Yes
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: AY0 on March 14, 2017, 18:06:43
Character Name: Sanyú
Why you want to join:I want to be the best kj player
Will you swear to never betray the rootless swordsmen?:Yes


    Accepted!
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: iREES3 on March 15, 2017, 15:11:32
Character Name: Lil Reese
Why you want to join: I Also Want To Be The Best Kenjutsu Player
Will you swear to never betray the rootless swordsmen?: Yes, I Swear
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: AY0 on March 15, 2017, 15:23:03
Character Name: Lil Reese
Why you want to join: I Also Want To Be The Best Kenjutsu Player
Will you swear to never betray the rootless swordsmen?: Yes, I Swear
   Accepted!
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: Tsunayoshi on March 18, 2017, 01:40:17
It looks like all the members of this organization besides Reese, is fake.

Tell me why you're the very symbol of cancer
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: AY0 on March 18, 2017, 02:14:11
It looks like all the members of this organization besides Reese, is fake.

Tell me why you're the very symbol of cancer




Ask Nova Himself If M0NK4Y is Fake  ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Mybe it IS Iluminati  ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Mybe Not... Idn Cancer? Look at ur Char Lookin Like a White Carrot  ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°).... and u talking about my logo? Haha *Grown People ironic short laugh*
Title: Re: Rootless Swords
Post by: Toratsume Nyshn on March 18, 2017, 02:26:00
It looks like all the members of this organization besides Reese, is fake.

Tell me why you're the very symbol of cancer




ASK CAIODART HE CAME IN VOICE CHAT WHITH ME AND SANYU , B***
A*** MAN STFU, WHITH YO UGLY ASS SIGNATURE PIC LOOKIN LIKE WHITE CARROT OR SOME SH*T LMFAO

aye chill chill
ik you and 4 are two separate entities, Tuna must have confused you both cuz almost similar usernames.
No need lose your chill k.
good :)

btw, his sig is one of my fav anime bruh... you should watch it too its called Boku no Hero Academia
season 2 coming out soon!!
Title: Re: Katsuki Swords
Post by: AY0 on March 19, 2017, 11:21:45
         Updated
Title: Re: Katsuki Swords
Post by: sirpaul on March 19, 2017, 12:06:56
"3rd: If You want to Leave , Or U Fight  or u Get Bullied :)" this doesnt even make sense wtf
Title: Re: Katsuki Swords
Post by: AY0 on March 19, 2017, 12:59:05
"3rd: If You want to Leave , Or U Fight  or u Get Bullied :)" this doesnt even make sense wtf

Ohh lol
Wait
Title: Re: Katsuki Swords
Post by: samuelmedina70 on March 19, 2017, 23:47:40
well, my caracter name is Obito Uchiha, and i want enter because i liked the description, and i think i will can spy others guys, clans and organization for you guys, and i can  make other things too
Title: Re: Katsuki Swords
Post by: Manuster on March 21, 2017, 01:01:25
*sees new update*

nononono

this is akatsuki

dude.

this.
is.
akatsuki.
(with the added goal of mastering kenjutsu)

dude

monkeh.

i like your idea, i really do. It's reminiscent of Godai Temple, an org that strives to collect and master Elemental Jutsu. However you decided to focus on Kenjutsu.

Now, I know alot of players who plan on using Kenjutsu. Ken, Isei, Nova (plans to use a scythe but whatever, he's weird).

But you're not attracting them. Seriously, I don't know if this entire thing is a troll or not, but if not, you really have to ask for advice. I don't wanna roast you, as tempting and as easy as it may be.

You got a fantastically unique idea in a KJ orientated org.

Truthfully, everything else is a mess.

I'd personally advise for you to ask someone for help, and start over on a new thread. Maybe even find someone else to host the new thread.



On another note,
      Couse Pain.         




well, my caracter name is Obito Uchiha, and i want enter because i liked the description, and i think i will can spy others guys, clans and organization for you guys, and i can  make other things too

nonononononononononononon

look at who you're attracting
Title: Re: Katsuki Swords
Post by: Leebz on March 26, 2017, 00:57:03
Oh god.. I defended this fool in shoutbox?
*Seppukus in Japanese*

Really though. Your organisation is begging to be hated. Change it or not, I don't care, just letting you know what is to be the outcome.
Title: Re: Katsuki Swords
Post by: AY0 on March 26, 2017, 10:14:02
Oh god.. I defended this fool in shoutbox?
*Seppukus in Japanese*

Really though. Your organisation is begging to be hated. Change it or not, I don't care, just letting you know what is to be the outcome.

I Dought My Org is More Hated Than Me , even if i change it  it will be hate so ye idgaf
Title: Re: Katsuki Swords
Post by: jojomand on April 01, 2017, 20:14:15
Character Name: jojo
Why you want to join: I want to collect 1 of the legendary swords
Title: Re: Katsuki Swords
Post by: AY0 on April 01, 2017, 20:15:50
Character Name: jojo
Why you want to join: I want to collect 1 of the legendary swords

Aceepted
Title: Re: Katsuki Swords
Post by: AY0 on April 02, 2017, 17:29:42
Chapter 1 Realsed
Title: Re: Katsuki Swords
Post by: Leodrakes on April 04, 2017, 12:15:56
Character name:leo
Reasons i want to join: to get stronger
Title: Re: Katsuki Swords
Post by: AY0 on April 04, 2017, 12:17:38
Character name:leo

You forgot why you want to join but u alredy told me in game sou you are
 
Aceepted!
Title: Re: Katsuki Swords
Post by: AY0 on April 06, 2017, 11:38:12
Katsuki Swords Chapter 2 Realsed
Title: Re: 剣客 Hikatsuri
Post by: AY0 on May 01, 2017, 18:24:42
Remade The Organization
Title: Re: 剣客 Hikatsuri
Post by: Reminance on May 01, 2017, 22:14:24
Transparant logo: (http://i.imgur.com/xtpIPru.png)

code:
Code: [Select]
http://i.imgur.com/xtpIPru.png
Title: Re: 剣客 Hikatsuri
Post by: AY0 on May 01, 2017, 22:17:04
Transparant logo: (http://i.imgur.com/xtpIPru.png)

code:
Code: [Select]
http://i.imgur.com/xtpIPru.png

Ty
Title: Re: 剣客 Hikatsuri
Post by: Manuster on May 02, 2017, 20:09:44
I like this.

It's actually a great improvement.

Not perfect, but it's on the way.

Now...what to do about the 30 cancerous comments...
Title: Re: 剣客 Hikatsuri
Post by: assandouze on May 07, 2017, 10:08:38
Character Name : Mihawk (assandouze)
Why I want to join: I want to be one of the best swordsman !
Title: Re: 剣客 Hikatsuri
Post by: AY0 on May 07, 2017, 10:11:30
Mihawk Acepted!
Title: Re: 剣客 Hikatsuri
Post by: sirpaul on May 07, 2017, 12:33:24
the logo is a lil pixelated. smoothing it out would be neat af
Title: Re: 剣客 Hikatsuri
Post by: goldustian on June 14, 2017, 08:33:25
This is maybe the most ugliest lay-out i've seen on an org.

gl.
Then you havent seen mine
Title: Re: 剣客 Hikatsuri
Post by: bobbybnx on July 15, 2017, 00:37:18
Character name: bobbybnx
Reason: I want to be the best swordman ever :D, and kill all with pain.
Title: Re: 剣客 Hikatsuri
Post by: AY0 on July 15, 2017, 09:32:04
Character name: bobbybnx
Reason: I want to be the best swordman ever :D, and kill all with pain.

KIll  Hmm good Pain Best Swordsman hmm


Your In!
Title: Re: 剣客 Hikatsuri
Post by: Pow3R on July 19, 2017, 17:39:01
Character name: Pow3R
Reason: I want to be a real rouge and kill everyone
Title: Re: 剣客 Hikatsuri
Post by: AY0 on July 19, 2017, 20:03:33
Character name: Pow3R
Reason: I want to be a real rouge and kill everyone

Hmm Kill EveryOne .. Good Enough :p

Accepted!
Title: Re: 剣客 Hikatsuri
Post by: Akitermoun on July 19, 2017, 20:56:25
Hi
Title: Re: 剣客 Hikatsuri
Post by: Akitermoun on July 19, 2017, 22:58:32
Character Name: Akitermoun
Title: Re: 剣客 Hikatsuri
Post by: Akitermoun on July 19, 2017, 22:59:16
Character name: Akitermoun
Why you want to join: I want to be one of the best swrodman
Title: Re: 剣客 Hikatsuri
Post by: AY0 on July 19, 2017, 23:00:57
Character name: Akitermoun
Why you want to join: I want to be one of the best swrodman

Hmm Good Enough

Accepted
Title: Re: 剣客 Hikatsuri
Post by: Nitsuini on August 21, 2018, 22:17:28
Application

Username: Nitsuini

Why you want to be in Hikatsuri: Because the sword is the most efficient way to fight, and the goals of the organization align with mine own.
Title: Re: 剣客 Hikatsuri
Post by: Jiro on September 03, 2018, 21:08:57
Application
Username: Jiro
Reason: I love the feeling of slicing things in two! (also hoping to get a sword like samehada)
Title: Re: 剣客 Hikatsuri
Post by: 184adj on September 04, 2018, 08:18:52
swords are the best
Title: Re: 剣客 Hikatsuri
Post by: AY0 on October 09, 2020, 13:55:39
Application

Username: Nitsuini

Why you want to be in Hikatsuri: Because the sword is the most efficient way to fight, and the goals of the organization align with mine own.


Declined
Title: Re: 剣客 Hikatsuri
Post by: AY0 on October 09, 2020, 13:56:31
Application
Username: Jiro
Reason: I love the feeling of slicing things in two! (also hoping to get a sword like samehada)

That was cheesey Declined and there will be no samehada in game
Title: Re: 剣客 Hikatsuri
Post by: Shuninx on October 11, 2020, 15:47:26
Application
Username: Jiro
Reason: I love the feeling of slicing things in two! (also hoping to get a sword like samehada)

That was cheesey Declined and there will be no samehada in game
ooh tell em