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Kuria Ennia Yuishi
« on: January 05, 2015, 16:51:32 »

Name: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Age: 12
Gender: Male
Height: 5'3
Weight: 90lbs
Facial hair: None
Hair color: Navy
Eye color: White
Blood type: A
Primary chakra nature: Wind
Village: Hidden Hill
Clan: Akagi
Good or evil at heart?: Good

Description of the character's personality:
Not serious even in crucial moments
My character will be like how I am, no roleplaying as another personality will occur.


Description of the character's history:
Kuria was born into the Ennia family. The family wasn't too well known as their heritage was from a distant land.
His father was a Chunin level Shinobi who took it upon himself to train Kuria since his birth to awaken his potential as a shinobi.
Days of training turned into months which turned into years.
At the age of 6 he was better than the children in the academy and even some Genin.

One night, as Kuria was walking home with both of his parents a hidden snow shinobi jumped out.
"you funkging earth hill shinobi fuck you"
The shinobi then lunged at Kuria's mother with a Kunai and his father jumped in the way to block it, getting hit himself.
Unable to prevent the backhand on his mother, Kuria and his father watched in despair to see a defenseless woman be hit to the ground.
With both parents out of the fight, the next target was clearly Kuria.
Kuria locked eyes with his assailant and was fuming with rage.
He heard his father shout "Do it Kuria, practice the technique we trained."
"We believe in you" his parents chorused.
This was something Kuria had to do. He took a deep breath and closed his eyes. He channeled his chakra to his arms and legs and screamed at his lungs "Kuria special att"- he was cut off as the shinobi dashed towards him and punched him in the throat.
The shinobi then ran towards his parents and killed both of them.

The shinobi ran away and Kuria was left with no parents
That kinda sucked but he got over it and didn't become an avenger or obsess over revenge because Kuria wasn't a pussy.

As his parents died he became the head of the branch of his clan.
Being exposed to such leadership and responsibility, one would only expect Kuria to be used to power and leading people.
This wasn't the case, Kuria didn't give a shit.

- At the age of 8 Kuria graduated the academy and became a Genin. After this Kuria excelled in training and missions, soon being promoted to Chunin in the exams held 2 months after his graduation.
Kuria was then ranked up to Jonin at the age of 10 because he got shit done and wasn't a little bitch.
At the age of 12 Kuria was elected as Kage of the hidden hill village.
Some say the election was rigged and he had an affair with the village elder, Nao Tsukegami (Batt).
Other's say he only got the position because there were no other decent candidates.

Neither of these rumours were true, Kuria became kage because he had swag and payed the bills

As stated earlier, Kuria wasn't good with responsibility and runs the village immaturely as that reflects his personality.
« Last Edit: December 31, 2016, 13:19:07 by Mars »


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Re: Kurai Himitsu
« Reply #1 on: January 05, 2015, 17:06:17 »
Fellow Himitsu brother! :D
I look forward to hearing more about this Character :P
He kinda reminds me of a character in my story, personality wise. Maybe I will change the name in the story from Yaron to Kurai :3
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Re: Kurai Himitsu
« Reply #2 on: January 05, 2015, 17:16:56 »
Cool character Mars! Cant wait for the history
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Re: Kurai Himitsu
« Reply #3 on: January 05, 2015, 17:37:28 »
Fellow Himitsu brother! :D
I look forward to hearing more about this Character :P
He kinda reminds me of a character in my story, personality wise. Maybe I will change the name in the story from Yaron to Kurai :3
Really? :D

Cool character Mars! Cant wait for the history
And thanks man :)
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Re: Kurai Himitsu
« Reply #4 on: January 05, 2015, 19:01:55 »
Fellow Himitsu brother! :D
I look forward to hearing more about this Character :P
He kinda reminds me of a character in my story, personality wise. Maybe I will change the name in the story from Yaron to Kurai :3
Really? :D

Yeah bro :P
I don't continue the story no more but I'd prefer to have you in it than a made up name like 'Yaron' xD
I'ma change it to Kurai now :3
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Re: Kurai Himitsu
« Reply #5 on: January 05, 2015, 19:04:50 »
Nice! :D, i'm sure the history will be great so i can't wait for it!

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Re: Kurai Himitsu
« Reply #6 on: January 07, 2015, 17:17:24 »
Nice! :D, i'm sure the history will be great so i can't wait for it!
Thanks

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Re: Kurai Himitsu
« Reply #7 on: January 07, 2015, 17:32:56 »
The story was great! :D, you didn't let anyone down!

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Re: Kurai Himitsu
« Reply #8 on: January 07, 2015, 21:56:07 »
Amazing story bro! You could make a fanfic from this. I'd love to hear what he does next :)
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Re: Kurai Himitsu
« Reply #9 on: January 09, 2015, 17:49:28 »
Amazing story bro! You could make a fanfic from this. I'd love to hear what he does next :)
Thanks man:)
« Last Edit: January 10, 2015, 13:01:05 by Mars »
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Re: Kurai Himitsu
« Reply #10 on: January 10, 2015, 08:26:13 »
I like the way Kurai jabs the air, so passionate.
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Re: Kurai Himitsu
« Reply #11 on: January 11, 2015, 11:42:50 »
I like the way Kurai jabs the air, so passionate.
The most beautiful jab in history.
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« Reply #12 on: January 11, 2015, 13:13:02 »
So graceful, just wow.
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Re: Kurai Himitsu
« Reply #13 on: January 30, 2015, 21:15:32 »
Quick update, friendly reminder. This is the V.1 Kurai
The first of it's kind.
The original prototype.
Not even a prototype.
Better than a prototype.
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Re: Kurai Himitsu
« Reply #14 on: February 05, 2015, 07:41:43 »
This is an interesting character. I liked how Kurai basically became a shinobi because he was inspired by Raika. Also, the detail that you put into the chunin exam was pretty awesome, I especially liked your description of the techniques. Furthermore, the way that Kurai and his teammates pay for their ignorance was kind of neat, if a little bit confusing.  The construction of the story was also pretty solid, though you may want to edit "indisguindished" and replace it with "undistinguished"?

I have a question, could I tie in this chunin exam with my character's history? If possible, I want Raisho and Shingen to have been in the same class as Raika so I could match the chunin exam events (my chunin exams will probably be held in part 3, unless part 3 gets really complex and long-winded) in both Kurai and Raisho's history.

Yukigakure POWAAAAAA!!!!  8)
That would be fine, in fact that would be really cool!
Thanks for the feedback man :)
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