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Re: Drawings by the Dragon
« Reply #75 on: May 25, 2015, 17:35:39 »
You've improved so much.
That is your best drawing on this thread by far!
Good work :D
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Re: Drawings by the Dragon
« Reply #76 on: May 26, 2015, 16:03:51 »
Oh my god.
It's in Drum roll
PROPORTION!!!

But seriously, you've got much better than you used to be, wayyyy better than I could have ever done :P
Keep it up :D
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Re: Drawings by the Dragon
« Reply #77 on: May 27, 2015, 16:18:08 »
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Re: Drawings by the Dragon
« Reply #78 on: May 28, 2015, 09:53:11 »
Nice draw, great story and some nice details. So yeah as mentioned proportions are the only real issues here aside from some little perspective problems. Like for starters im not entirely sure if  the hill behind those guys is a hill, a rock or a mountain. This is kinda down to a lack of clear perspective, which becomes more obvious if we look in the foreground. If it is indeed a rock, due to the angle at which the rock has been drawn, the slope of the rock seems very steep. To fix this id recommend widening out the base of the rock, which would naturally occur due to foreshortening for a rock with what i assume is intended to be a less steep slope( oh and probably make the vanishing point flat too, maybe with a ruler?). Only other problem you've got is depth, which is extremely hard to achieve with pencil, only thing i could recommend with this medium is making the foreground values a bit darker/make them stand out compared to the background values through some greater line thickness on the characters and body bag. As for proportions, only tip i can give is study bodies and how they move, maybe look for similar poses online before you start a draw and see the way bodies and limbs move for the pose you want. Other than that, nice draw, your improvement can be seen with each drawing! ;)
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Re: Drawings by the Dragon
« Reply #79 on: May 28, 2015, 15:20:33 »
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Re: Drawings by the Dragon
« Reply #80 on: May 28, 2015, 15:23:29 »
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Re: Drawings by the Dragon
« Reply #81 on: June 09, 2015, 03:55:10 »
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Re: Drawings by the Dragon
« Reply #82 on: June 09, 2015, 13:37:01 »
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Re: Drawings by the Dragon
« Reply #83 on: July 06, 2015, 01:01:18 »
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Re: Drawings by the Dragon
« Reply #84 on: July 06, 2015, 08:15:07 »
That's amazing, you're improving so much :)
Cc would be that the left hand looks deformed.
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Re: Drawings by the Dragon
« Reply #85 on: July 06, 2015, 17:59:51 »
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Re: Drawings by the Dragon
« Reply #86 on: July 07, 2015, 10:09:55 »
Holy Shit!
That is awesome dude
Indeed the hands are not that good but it is normal
The best part is the evil ninja standing at the door.......loving him
Sorry i cant do critique.....as my knowledge about drawings is far lesser than yours :(
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Re: Drawings by the Dragon
« Reply #87 on: July 07, 2015, 15:24:10 »
I really like the pencil-only drawings <3
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Re: Drawings by the Dragon
« Reply #88 on: July 07, 2015, 20:05:34 »
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Re: Drawings by the Dragon
« Reply #89 on: September 08, 2015, 21:07:34 »
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