Quote from: dragon6624 on July 21, 2015, 05:28:57

Quote from: EternalEyes on July 17, 2015, 00:43:57

Thanks man, thats my most recent and honestly favourite atm, not just in regards to detail/lighting/mood but more the time in which the standard was achieved, which was like 2.5 hrs. (quick for me anyway xD)

2.5 HRS?!?!?

Wtf were you on, coffee+cocaine?

Seriously, that's extremely low...for ANY ARTIST. Took me three hours to make something only a 16th that good.

Also, I noted something on that picture while I was looking at it. Your "Roid-Mane" has it's legs off, a normal cat-leg setup goes more like:

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and less like:

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Just my two cents, hope it helped in some way.

They are like in the first pose. The left front leg goes naturaly because that joint that is bending forward is not the knee is the ankle.


EDIT: Is like in this photo (ignore the back legs)

Yeah i noticed something was up with that, thanks guys i for giving me tips and reference, very useful. My anatomy needs some work xD

Thanks man, thats my most recent and honestly favourite atm, not just in regards to detail/lighting/mood but more the time in which the standard was achieved, which was like 2.5 hrs. (quick for me anyway xD)

Yeah thats what i thought^^. However Straw, there will be some tests which require revision of some sort, for example the chunnin and jounin exams will certainly require knowledge about konoha and other topics, which will of course be specified beforehand in some sort of spec. However doing that kind of thing at academy level is kinda unnecessary, better reserve it for only the upper levels which far less people will achieve

Nice references, they will be very useful when designing their various outfits. Thank you

Nice draw, great story and some nice details. So yeah as mentioned proportions are the only real issues here aside from some little perspective problems. Like for starters im not entirely sure if  the hill behind those guys is a hill, a rock or a mountain. This is kinda down to a lack of clear perspective, which becomes more obvious if we look in the foreground. If it is indeed a rock, due to the angle at which the rock has been drawn, the slope of the rock seems very steep. To fix this id recommend widening out the base of the rock, which would naturally occur due to foreshortening for a rock with what i assume is intended to be a less steep slope( oh and probably make the vanishing point flat too, maybe with a ruler?). Only other problem you've got is depth, which is extremely hard to achieve with pencil, only thing i could recommend with this medium is making the foreground values a bit darker/make them stand out compared to the background values through some greater line thickness on the characters and body bag. As for proportions, only tip i can give is study bodies and how they move, maybe look for similar poses online before you start a draw and see the way bodies and limbs move for the pose you want. Other than that, nice draw, your improvement can be seen with each drawing!

Replaced the 2 year old disgusting art with some new stuff basically. So everything is new

Oh wow this is still up.....this feels like an age ago lol

Yeah @Dartsam check our indie db and facebook for the 4th question, we have a bunch of concepts of how the villages will be http://www.indiedb.com/games/shinobilifeonline/images