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Shinobi Life Online Category => Shinobi Life Online Discussion => Topic started by: TemiHyung on July 03, 2017, 19:29:53

Title: More Detailed Information About TemiHyung's Past
Post by: TemiHyung on July 03, 2017, 19:29:53
TemiHyung was born July 13th in the year xxxx(depending on what year slo is set in). He was son to Hirokishi and Yuri Masashi and a younger brother to Isaac Masashi and Jordan Masashi, of the Hidden thunder. Throughout Temi's childhood he was very highly regarded because of his family's royalty and their friendship with the Kaminarikage. He was also noticed with his skills in ninjutsu, taijutsu and shuriken-jutsu. Temi was also very proficient with other skills except for genjutsu. Temi was not too keen about having friends so he mostly kept to himself.

Although still a child Temi was sent out on his first mission only at the age of 11. He and his brother, Isaac went on a mission to safely escort a sacred scroll to the Hidden Metal. They were expected to be ambushed by rouge thugs who wanted to learn all types of powerful jutsus in order to kill all the kage. Fortunately Temi and Isaac didn't find it very difficult to hold off the thugs and get to the Hidden Metal without being hurt badly. Two years later after TemiHyung got his genin status and was about to get chunin status he was sent out on a solo mission the Hidden Metal to deliver a message from Kaminarikage to the Kinzokukage. On his way back to the Hidden Thunder TemiHyung was ambushed by rouges from the Hidden Metal who didn't believe in getting help from other villages. Temi was forced into battle with 3 chunin leveled shinobi he won the fight but didn't leave unscathed. TemiHyung suffered a broken leg and a broken rib. After being found laying on the ground unconscious halfway to the Hidden Thunder TemiHyung was found by a passing villager who rushed him to the hospital. Temi was told that he couldn't go on any missions for the next two months which really took a tool on his physical strength. Weeks later and TemiHyung's family was sent out on a mission to a newly discovered hideout which was thought to be where most of the rouge ninja's were located. Temi's family went on that mission but......never came back. No bodies were found and no traces were found either. Now Temi is all alone....

 4 years pass and a lot of things have changed for TemiHyung he has now turned 17 and has a lot of friends who he can use to give him happiness and allow him to be distracted of his loses. Now Temi has a new future ahead of him and it looks pretty bright. His goal is to become a legend in the shinobi world and to also find out the truth about what happened to his family
Title: Re: More Detailed Information About TemiHyung's Past
Post by: Toratsume Nyshn on July 03, 2017, 23:09:01
Remi is ruthless.
Who sends academy students out on missions.
Genins on solo missions in foreign territories and forgetting all about him ;_;
And finally sending the family of a temporarily suspended genin (under health conditions)  to a dangerous mission.
Makes my heart crush under the inhumanity of the situations!

Lel, those were my first thoughts after reading this... It was rushed, but I guess you planned it that way. You just went a step further and vanished your entire family. GJ

Thankfully, the part after the three year timeskip is good to read.
gl broh *thumbs up*
Title: Re: More Detailed Information About TemiHyung's Past
Post by: taigakun on July 05, 2017, 14:05:10
Remi is ruthless.
Who sends academy students out on missions.
Genins on solo missions in foreign territories and forgetting all about him ;_;
And finally sending the family of a temporarily suspended genin (under health conditions)  to a dangerous mission.
Makes my heart crush under the inhumanity of the situations!
What a monster .-.
Nah but enjoyed reading your story. Gj
Title: Re: More Detailed Information About TemiHyung's Past
Post by: Manuster on July 05, 2017, 15:51:57
Remi is ruthless.
Who sends academy students out on missions.
Genins on solo missions in foreign territories and forgetting all about him ;_;
And finally sending the family of a temporarily suspended genin (under health conditions)  to a dangerous mission.
Makes my heart crush under the inhumanity of the situations!

lmaaoo I'm glad someone else noticed it...

Who'd send a Chuunin to deliver a personal message to a kage

rip
Title: Re: More Detailed Information About TemiHyung's Past
Post by: StriderOtaku on July 05, 2017, 15:55:57
Remi is ruthless.
Who sends academy students out on missions.
Genins on solo missions in foreign territories and forgetting all about him ;_;
And finally sending the family of a temporarily suspended genin (under health conditions)  to a dangerous mission.
Makes my heart crush under the inhumanity of the situations!

lmaaoo I'm glad someone else noticed it...

Who'd send a Chuunin to deliver a personal message to a kage

rip
At this point, Remi is responsible for half the ded shinobi in his village.
Nice story btw, gj
Title: Re: More Detailed Information About TemiHyung's Past
Post by: Suroshi on July 08, 2017, 22:29:09
nice story.