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Hatsu Yamato
« on: January 27, 2017, 22:02:42 »



Name: Hatsu Yamato
Age: 17
Gender: male
Height: 1.791 m
Weight: 150 lbs
Hairstyle: Medium
Facial hair: None
Hair color: Black
Eye color: Blue
Blood type: Negative O
Primary chakra nature:Lightning
Hidden Village: Okagakure
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Good or evil at heart?: Good

Description of the character's personality: Hatsu is a hardworking Shinobi who when isn't on a mission is training diligently. Hatsu's goal is to simply become strong, Hatsu is caring but stays distant from others and focuses on becoming as strong as he can to avenge his father.

Description of the character's history: When Hatsu was born his mother died leaving his father to take care of him, Hatsu always felt that his father despised him ever since birth, his father always gave him little food and poor conditioned clothing. Years later Hatsu was ready to go to the Academy but one afternoon he arrived home from the academy only to see a shinobi carrying a letter for Hatsu. The letter said that his father had died while on mission, the killer wasn't identified. However after that day Hatsu began studying and training hard to someday find and kill his fathers killer.
« Last Edit: January 29, 2017, 17:04:51 by Hatsu »


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Re: Hatsu Yamato
« Reply #1 on: January 27, 2017, 22:15:00 »
ok, nice character and nice history.
But 1: you have not apply for Fengshui Clan, 2: Fengshui clan is from hidden hill, but you are from hidden inferno.. so search a clan from hidden inferno like this https://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php?topic=1340.0 and try to apply. ( it's an example of course you can search another clan or create one )
however, welcome on SLO  :)
« Last Edit: January 27, 2017, 22:16:58 by takami »




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Re: Hatsu Yamato
« Reply #2 on: January 27, 2017, 22:36:47 »
Good character but as Takumi said don't claim a clan or an organization until you are accepted into


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Re: Hatsu Yamato
« Reply #3 on: January 28, 2017, 03:23:17 »
noted
hope he finds his dad's killer(s)
Good luck




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Re: Hatsu Yamato
« Reply #4 on: January 28, 2017, 03:31:01 »
Welcome to SLO! Read FAQ for informations of the forum ;)

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Re: Hatsu Yamato
« Reply #5 on: January 28, 2017, 03:31:34 »
thanks
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Re: Hatsu Yamato
« Reply #6 on: January 28, 2017, 10:07:33 »
Good character but the story is overused :p

You could make it a bit more unique if you'd like ^^
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Re: Hatsu Yamato
« Reply #7 on: January 28, 2017, 13:06:27 »
Nice, so you have chosen hidden hill at last, so welcome in SLO and welcome in Hidden Hill  ;D




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Re: Hatsu Yamato
« Reply #8 on: January 28, 2017, 15:29:29 »
It's another Kasuke history but nonetheless a good character :)
Welcome to SLO mate
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Re: Hatsu Yamato
« Reply #9 on: January 28, 2017, 20:09:47 »
It's another Kasuke history but nonetheless a good character :)
Welcome to SLO mate

please explain how a kasuke is a good character
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Re: Hatsu Yamato
« Reply #10 on: January 28, 2017, 21:04:35 »
Nice character
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Re: Hatsu Yamato
« Reply #11 on: January 28, 2017, 22:34:11 »
It's another Kasuke history but nonetheless a good character :)
Welcome to SLO mate

please explain how a kasuke is a good character
You have to be nice and encouraging to strangers @America sama ;)
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Re: Hatsu Yamato
« Reply #12 on: January 28, 2017, 23:08:56 »
It's another Kasuke history but nonetheless a good character :)
Welcome to SLO mate

please explain how a kasuke is a good character
You have to be nice and encouraging to strangers @America sama ;)

however, you are misleading them by telling them their character is good when in fact it isn't, making them believe that it needs no improvements. They haven't even put in their picture link correctly and their story has been seen here many times. ease up on the post-whoring and actually give some decent feedback if you're going to post in someone's character thread.
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Re: Hatsu Yamato
« Reply #13 on: January 29, 2017, 08:34:50 »
It's another Kasuke history but nonetheless a good character :)
Welcome to SLO mate

please explain how a kasuke is a good character
You have to be nice and encouraging to strangers @America sama ;)

however, you are misleading them by telling them their character is good when in fact it isn't, making them believe that it needs no improvements. They haven't even put in their picture link correctly and their story has been seen here many times. ease up on the post-whoring and actually give some decent feedback if you're going to post in someone's character thread.
Nice character
Welcome to SLO
Nice, so you have chosen hidden hill at last, so welcome in SLO and welcome in Hidden Hill  ;D
Good character but the story is overused :p

You could make it a bit more unique if you'd like ^^
@America tbh, I don't see why you're facing me, why don't you take your time and read all the other posts on this and other character threads. It's the pattern, though it's not right. So, don't face me instead of the people you should actually be going after, smh. I'd rather not be the one to come as rude to someone new right off the bat.
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Re: Hatsu Yamato
« Reply #14 on: January 29, 2017, 10:36:28 »
It's another Kasuke history but nonetheless a good character :)
Welcome to SLO mate

please explain how a kasuke is a good character
You have to be nice and encouraging to strangers @America sama ;)

however, you are misleading them by telling them their character is good when in fact it isn't, making them believe that it needs no improvements. They haven't even put in their picture link correctly and their story has been seen here many times. ease up on the post-whoring and actually give some decent feedback if you're going to post in someone's character thread.
Nice character
Welcome to SLO
Nice, so you have chosen hidden hill at last, so welcome in SLO and welcome in Hidden Hill  ;D
Good character but the story is overused :p

You could make it a bit more unique if you'd like ^^
@America tbh, I don't see why you're facing me, why don't you take your time and read all the other posts on this and other character threads. It's the pattern, though it's not right. So, don't face me instead of the people you should actually be going after, smh. I'd rather not be the one to come as rude to someone new right off the bat.
It is a decent character there are far better ones out there really, i gave advice on how to improve it, so for you to quote me is bullshit buddy :)
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