Shinobi Life Online Category => Shinobi Life Online Character => Topic started by: takami on November 29, 2016, 16:05:05
Title: Takumi Himitsu
Post by: takami on November 29, 2016, 16:05:05
Name: Takumi Himitsu Age: 16 Gender: Male Height: 1.71cm Weight:58Kg Hairstyle: Short Facial hair: N/A Hair color: Red Eye color: Red/Black Blood type: Unknown Primary chakra nature: Lightning Hidden Village: Hidden Thunder Clan:Himitsu Good or evil at heart?: good....maybe? I guess it depends. Well, do not annoy him...just in case.
Description of the character's personality: A very calm person, easily bored and usually detached from other people, but when enraged its impossible to calm him down, the only way is to wait for his rampage to get to an end or to die trying to stop him. He follows orders without hesitation, whatever it is...probably he doesn't care, he just want to get paid and kill time (or people?). Always trying to measure his strength to get better, and he would do anything to aquire more power .... if it is to be able to protect those friends he still managed to get or just greed of power, even he doesn't knows ...still, there are very few things precious to him, and he would cold-bloodedly kill anyone who dares to harm them.
Description of the character's history: -deleted-
Combat style: As an expert in genjutsu usually he ends his opponent combining genjutsu and lightning style/kenjutsu, but when enraged he just charge at the enmy with overwhelming power that grows as his rage does. While fighting, he immediately tries to understand the opponent's fighting style and to understand it's weak points. However when he is fighting strong opponents or he is in a difficult situation, he overcome his usual boredom and eventually start to enjoy it, and when that happens he turns more like a wild beast...his attacks becomes unpredictable and his speed and ferocity increases significantly. Also his chakra and consequently his lightnings are red.
much simple much wow, much kappa (https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Cbg6oKqUkAI2PAB.jpg)
nice char mein
Title: Re: Takumi Ukita
Post by: Fraudulent on November 30, 2016, 23:47:50
Welcome to the forum. I would suggest adding some more information on your character profile. If you need help, refer to the links in my signature, they should help you get started.
Title: Re: Takumi Ukita
Post by: takami on December 05, 2016, 17:58:46
actually is a really incomplete description, so I will try to work of the imagination to add things ... I hope it will be a decent thing because I'll use the translator :)
Title: Re: Takumi Ukita
Post by: mamita on December 20, 2016, 17:45:15
Damn! I like the new story! :D Killed his baby brother though... That's sad D:
Title: Re: Takumi Ukita
Post by: StriderOtaku on December 20, 2016, 19:24:26
Wow. Killing his younger brother...dark, very dark. Its wayy more interesting now.
Title: Re: Takumi Ukita
Post by: takami on December 20, 2016, 19:47:59
Thank you, in the future I will try to expand the story and make it very long and more detailed.
Title: Re: Takumi Himitsu
Post by: takami on December 23, 2016, 01:02:31
UPDATED
Title: Re: Takumi Himitsu
Post by: taigakun on December 23, 2016, 01:30:40
Nice work Takami. Looking forward to reading more of the chapters man Good job
Title: Re: Takumi Himitsu
Post by: mamita on December 23, 2016, 01:33:44
Damn. That is a really good story. I can't wait to see more!
Title: Re: Takumi Himitsu
Post by: Leebz on December 23, 2016, 12:35:46
Dialogue is a little hard to follow (I assume English isn't your first language, so it's not a big issue.) but other than that, great story man. :)
Title: Re: Takumi Himitsu
Post by: CaioDarT on January 03, 2017, 21:49:14
Very nice character Takami :D
Title: Re: Takumi Himitsu
Post by: takami on January 03, 2017, 21:59:55
thank you, it is a bit messy but I will try to improve in the next chapters ;)
Title: Re: Takumi Himitsu
Post by: Uzumaki Hari on January 04, 2017, 00:04:40
Dat some deep shiz!! Gj mayn!
Title: Re: Takumi Himitsu
Post by: HavvicGames on January 04, 2017, 01:24:44
Takumi its dank :)
Title: Re: Takumi Himitsu
Post by: iyonatan on January 04, 2017, 01:40:13
You are my bro!
Title: Re: Takumi Himitsu
Post by: luckycmsn on January 24, 2017, 19:15:31