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Shinobi Life Online Clans / Re: Shi 死 Clan
« on: September 17, 2017, 11:07:57 »
Great Clan with a really good backstory,It's great Inferno is growing up a little : D
Btw here is the Inferno's discord https://discord.gg/NSvfrSw

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Shinobi Life Online Character / Re: Shizou's Journal (Chapter 2) Zem under attack
« on: August 30, 2017, 11:01:05 »
changed ;p

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Shinobi Life Online Character / Re: The past of Shizou (Chapter 2) Zem under attack
« on: August 30, 2017, 04:35:53 »
Thank you for the suggestions and the correction,I'd like to change the tittle to Shizou's journal but could I do it after 2 chapters,what do you think?

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Shinobi Life Online Character / Shizou's Journal (Chapter 2) Zem under attack
« on: August 27, 2017, 22:46:59 »
This history is from a no-player.Shizou was a fantastic character that saved Ragna in his main story,Ragna returned to see his village again alone,it was empty.The bodies were still there,so he made a grave for every body.After that,he gone to Shizou's house to leave some presents for him...He found a book called ,,The History of mine by Shizou"..Well,Ragna got the book and started reading.After reading chapter one,with many tears in his eyes,he continued in the second chapter named "Zem under attack".

Zem under attack

CHAPTER 2,PAGE 1
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When me and my comrades were going to pass to my village some anbu stopped us,one of them came in front of me and took a look at me,then he said that we are okay to pass...I was full of questions but they quickly ran away...When we arrived in the village I din't have time to waste,I ran into a Zemu (Zem's village police) and asked him about the anbu....He said we were under attack,I didn't know what to say,or to do.....I was going to ask many questions but then I thought that there's no time for them,I ran to my house to see if my family were,at
least,alive...

CHAPTER 2,PAGE 2
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When I got home I first saw my mother crying and hitting everything that was in front of her..There was my uncle too,he was trying to calm her down...When she saw me,she hugged me immediately...She said "I'm sorry...I'm really sorry.....IT WAS ALL MY FAULT" while she was crying...Me and my uncle tried to calm her down....after 5 minutes,when we were all calm,I asked her why she told me such a thing....then she lowered her head down and told me "I am the reason your dad is dead..." then I quickly stand up and and I said "WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT...."I was shocked....I didn't know what happened..seconds after my mother explained me the whole story..this is what she told me...

CHAPTER 2,PAGE 3
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"Me and your father got a mission to look around the village for the enemy.We find a little base in a cave and we immediately went in.After some seconds of walking we find a room,we got in and saw some battle injured shinobi from our village locked in a cage...Only one was alive,your uncle...He saw us and he told us to run away quickly but me and your father wanted to get them out,so I ran to smash the cage.I broke 3 columns so your uncle could get outside..when he got outside 3 of our enemies got in our way...Your uncle were gravely injured and couldn't fight and I had to protect him...Your father went in front of us and told us to get away while he was fighting them...I didn't want to leave him,and I couldn't...I didn't know what to do...Then your father said "IF YOU STAY HERE LOOKING AT ME YOU AND MY BROTHER WILL DIE TOO,IF YOU REALLY WANT TO HELP HERE,GO BACK TO THE VILLAGE AND BRING HELP"...I ran away with your uncle and left your father alone...When we arrived in the village we immediately went to the anbu station for help...We went back in the base's place fast...but...but the cave wasn't there...The anbu searched the place....I felt like I killed my husband...I felt like I did nothing but running away from a person that needs help....."

WELL
This is it for chapter two,tell me what you think.


 : Shizou Zeimatsu :


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General Discussion / Re: Hidden Villages Discord
« on: August 22, 2017, 20:28:32 »
Quote from: Raidnn on August 21, 2017, 23:12:46
Quote from: Ragna on August 21, 2017, 22:00:07
can someone give me HIDDEN SHOCK WAVES :3
Hidden Shock Wave no longer has a discord


ohh...okay....why xD

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General Discussion / Re: Hidden Villages Discord
« on: August 21, 2017, 22:00:07 »
can someone give me HIDDEN SHOCK WAVES :3

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Introduction / Re: A wild Ara appeared!
« on: July 24, 2017, 13:57:01 »
Quote from: mamita on July 24, 2017, 13:28:59
Hi. Glad to greet you.
Maybe I can meet you sometime.
If I may give you some advice;
Choose a village not because it merely looks cool, but also for the terrain,
the location, the clans available, the atmosphere and lore/culture (if they have it yet),
and most importantly for the people there.

MAMITAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.....hey : D

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Introduction / Re: A wild Ara appeared!
« on: July 24, 2017, 13:11:58 »
Welcome to SLO!!!
Welcome to SLO,hope you find the community interesting.
Here you can find the SLO discord server in which you can learn things about the game and of course make friends -->  https://discord.gg/A6PrBm7

And here you can find other discords from villages --> https://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php?topic=3176.0

Here you can find the clans and organisations that will effect your role-play system --> https://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php?topic=2624.0 (organisations) - https://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php?topic=2490.msg38080#msg38080 (clans) OR you can make your own,here are the tamplets--> https://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php?topic=1506.0 (clans) - https://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php?topic=1505.0  (organisations)

WELL
The rest is up to you,have fun ;)

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3D Modeling / Re: Sadaiyan's model
« on: July 19, 2017, 09:18:39 »
Looks nice,I want to see it updated it too,keep up the good work ;)

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Shinobi Life Online Character / Re: The past of Shizou (Chapter 1) Good old friend's diary
« on: July 14, 2017, 15:16:31 »
Quote from: Toratsume Nyshn on July 14, 2017, 15:11:56
Quote from: Ragna on July 14, 2017, 14:05:07
...My new buddy just came out,his name is...
Errr...
Not sure if you are just writing excerpts from this guy's diary which are focused on Ragna.
If that's the case, then its fine.

If not,
P.S. don't read this part if it is the first case.
I'd like to state that a diary is maintained either on a daily basis or on eventful dates.
In this case, I'm sure this person Must have had more memorable experiences other than things related to ragna.
I'd like to see other stuff too, like picking up fights, meeting a cool shinobi, his sixth birthday, 7th birthday... friends' birthdays, adventures, etc.
Covering only Ragna memories would be a bit boring since I'm supposing you'll make a different story for him.
Finally, I'd suggest you get someone to proof read your works before you post.... someone good with english.
Hab fun :)


I will focus in Shizou in the next chapters,and yes I have to find someone
Thnx for the replies they makes me better ;)

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Shinobi Life Online Character / Re: Ragna Zeimatsu (UPDATED STORY AND DETAILS)
« on: July 14, 2017, 15:05:09 »
Quote from: Toratsume Nyshn on July 14, 2017, 14:51:21
Quote from: Ragna on July 14, 2017, 12:22:38
1.What is kkg xD
2.No it's like a pure blood potential of Zeimatsu's family

OOOOOHHHHH that's what kkg is.Yes it is something like that ;P

Kkg= kekkei genkei = pure blood potential of 'xyz' clan/ family/ individual

Like teh sharingan of uchiha
Byakugan of Hyuga
Magnet release of the third kazekage
Wood release of Shodaime Hokage
Particle style of Onoki ( I don't remember which number tsuchikage he was though.)
EDIT: Onoki's particle style is a Kekkei Tota... Haku's ice release is another example of kkg


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Shinobi Life Online Character / Shizou's Journal (Chapter 1) Good old friend's diary
« on: July 14, 2017, 14:05:07 »
This history is from a no-player.Shizou was a fantastic character that saved Ragna in his main story,Ragna returned to see his village again alone,it was empty.The bodies were still there,so he made a grave for every body.After that,he gone to Shizou's house to leave some presents for him...He found a book called ,,The History of mine by Shizou"..Well,Ragna got the book and started reading.

Welcome to my past.This is the book that I will write everything interesting moment in my life.

CHAPTER 1,PAGE 1
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Today is my fifth birthday!!!My friends and I would hang out but I heard that my aunt will soon have a new baby,so I have to keep her safe,besides,what medical ninja am I.It is 3 in the night and it is time for the baby to born,and then I will finally go to sleep,I'm so tired.My new buddy just came out,his name is Ragna,I will be the best cousin ever,I swear it.Well,it is time for me to go to sleep.

CHAPTER 1,PAGE 2
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Hello again,1 year passed since I last wrote.Not a lot of things happened,but yesterday my cousin walked for the first time,I was so happy to see that.Now I am six years old and I can finally go to my village's little academy to study and be a better shinobi my self!!!Me and Ragna have great times together,we are eating ramen together,go fishing together and training with kunai and shuriken,I really love him,I feel like,he is my brother.

CHAPTER 1,PAGE 3
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Ragna is 2 now,but I need to go,I have to go to a mission to help Inferunogakure.I was chosen for that mission because I am one of the greatest medical shinobis in my clan,I know I'm little but I'm still good.I'm in the mission,the inferno shinobis are really good and friendly,I like them.Well it is time to move,see you later.Our mission is to spot some spies and kill them,we already are curious about some people.A lot of months passed an we found the spies,now it's our time to move.Wow,that was hard,at least we won and no-one died.We had to deal with a kind of spies visitors,they were really strong,and it took many months too.Now it's the time to get back to my village,finally.

WELL
This is it for chapter one,tell me what you think.


 : Shizou Zeimatsu :


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Shinobi Life Online Character / Re: Ragna Zeimatsu (UPDATED STORY AND DETAILS)
« on: July 14, 2017, 12:22:38 »
Quote from: Toratsume Nyshn on July 14, 2017, 03:59:56
Is your white eye a kkg or just heterochromia?
Also pretty good story :)
Yeah a few errors here and there, but in the end, I liked it.

I suggest you give a glow to the text in white, it's difficult to read in this bg
1.What is kkg xD
2.No it's like a pure blood potential of Zeimatsu's family

and thanks ;P

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Introduction / Re: G'day
« on: July 14, 2017, 10:43:16 »
Nice too meet you.You have pretty good goals,but one of them is impossible (SLO)
(jk :3)

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Introduction / Re: Konichiwa!
« on: July 14, 2017, 10:38:36 »
Quote from: StriderOtaku on July 14, 2017, 09:12:17
Quote from: Ragna on July 13, 2017, 21:14:33
Ethnicity: Indian?
Nationality: Definitely Indian
Living in: India
Born in: INDIA! (gosh! never felt so patriotic :3 )
Sports: India


YOU COPIER
Bruv, you're the newbie and copier if anything, lmao
Quote from: Toratsume Nyshn on July 14, 2017, 03:46:50
Quote from: Ragna on July 13, 2017, 21:14:33
YOU COPIER

Lmao he posted it more than three months before you xD




Ohh...He posted it before me xD.I didn't see that sorry xD

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