Important News

We have released Shinobi Life Online Pre-Alpha Version 1.1.0.0! This update features Earth Release: Earth Dome Jutsu, Aiming Mode and more! Try it out and tell us what you think.

User

Welcome, Guest.
Please login or register.
 
 
 
Forgot your password?

Statistics

Members
Total Members: 37027
Latest: Lavoied69
New This Month: 366
New This Week: 39
New Today: 14
Stats
Total Posts: 54736
Total Topics: 3153
Most Online Today: 369
Most Online Ever: 440
(June 02, 2016, 00:34:37)
Users Online
Members: 6
Guests: 286
Total: 331
crononmos
fabris256
Reminance
Brad
Lavoied69
Tniemyy
Google (AdSense) (2)
Google (3)
Baidu (34)

Author Topic: Kottatsuki Clan  (Read 1949 times)

0 Members and 2 Guests are viewing this topic.

Offline Diamond Lee

  • Special Jonin Poster
  • ****
  • Posts: 290
  • Reputation Power: 4
  • Diamond Lee has no influence.
  • Gender: Male
  • Taijutsu User- Combat Team member of Heathen
    • View Profile
  • Clan: Himitsu
  • Organization: Heathen

Re: Kottatsuki Clan
« Reply #15 on: March 20, 2017, 03:04:09 »
10/10 professional
38/38 layout
374/374 overall

good luck with the clan love the concept!
Let the power of youth wash over you and fill you with strength!


-lethal dankness

Offline luckycmsn

  • Genin Poster
  • **
  • Posts: 74
  • Reputation Power: 2
  • luckycmsn has no influence.
  • Gender: Male
  • Where should I write my personal text?
    • View Profile
    • luckyngrh
  • Clan: Kinshēdo
  • Organization: Kazangakure
Re: Kottatsuki Clan
« Reply #16 on: March 20, 2017, 05:33:37 »
Looks really neat and nice logo. Goodluck with the clan!
● Hidden Volcano's Discord & Kinshēdo's Page ●

 


Offline misi4444

  • Special Jonin Poster
  • ****
  • Posts: 417
  • Reputation Power: 2
  • misi4444 has no influence.
  • Gender: Male
    • View Profile
Re: Kottatsuki Clan
« Reply #17 on: March 20, 2017, 05:35:11 »
haracter Name: Yase
Character Gender: Male
Character Specialty (taijutsu, kenjutsu, ect.): Ninjutsu
Position applying for: Chief Advisor
Primary Chakra nature: Ice
  • Character Name: Yasei Kamakiri

Offline JukeBlook

  • Academy Student Poster
  • *
  • Posts: 49
  • Reputation Power: 2
  • JukeBlook has no influence.
  • Gender: Male
  • Whats Up?
    • View Profile
  • Clan: Yamazaki


     
  • Organization: Heathen

Re: Kottatsuki Clan
« Reply #18 on: March 20, 2017, 05:43:25 »
This clan is mine now, because logogasm HMKAY :D
For real though neat and well organized :)

You'll have to fight me for it (ง ͠° ͟ʖ #)ง
Thanks dude



We all have wolves paired with from birth, we have good tastes in music
Already won my heart juke. Really nicely laid out. good job
btw, we all should meet up and form a pet/music club... wolves, tigers, whales, kraken :3 a nice get together lul

EDIT:
Snow, wolves, clan....

Why the hell not XD



10/10 professional
38/38 layout
374/374 overall

good luck with the clan love the concept!
10/10 would appreciate comment again



Looks really neat and nice logo. Goodluck with the clan!
Thanks man
« Last Edit: March 20, 2017, 07:42:51 by Nova »
  • Character Name: 1:Juke Yazamaki  2:Yasu Kottatsuki
Try not slow me down! *Poof*

Offline Manuster

Re: Kottatsuki Clan
« Reply #19 on: March 21, 2017, 01:09:09 »
Ayye kewl kewl

One question though; do you have 2 characters and 2 clans??? Or is your one character gonna be some weird ass dual personality person??

Juke one second, Yasu the next

By Rapho


By Rapho


By Artemis


By Snoopy



Offline Mars

  • Hidden Hill Kage
  • Hidden Village Kage
  • Academy Student Poster
  • ***
  • Posts: 0
  • Reputation Power: 6
  • Mars has no influence.
  • Gender: Female
    • View Profile
  • Clan: Yuishi
Re: Kottatsuki Clan
« Reply #20 on: March 21, 2017, 09:55:45 »
location: land of wolves
  • Character Name: frank

Offline StriderOtaku

Re: Kottatsuki Clan
« Reply #21 on: March 21, 2017, 14:25:23 »
Best thread you've created so far. Great job and good luck Juke.

Also, I love your new character.
  • Character Name: Ikiryo

Offline akicakenjac

  • Academy Student Poster
  • *
  • Posts: 9
  • Reputation Power: 2
  • akicakenjac has no influence.
  • Gender: Male
  • "I'm always ready for action! Yahoo!"
    • View Profile
Re: Kottatsuki Clan
« Reply #22 on: March 21, 2017, 15:28:00 »
Character Name: Akeshi
Character Gender: Male
Character Specialty (taijutsu, kenjutsu, ect.): Ninjutsu
Position applying for: Chief Advisor
Primary Chakra nature: Water
  • Character Name: Akeshi

Offline RyRy

  • Hidden Metal Kage
  • Hidden Village Kage
  • Chunin Poster
  • ***
  • Posts: 137
  • Reputation Power: 2
  • RyRy has no influence.
  • Gender: Male
  • Nan
    • View Profile
  • Clan: Tsunagami Clan
  • Organization: Roguhanta
Re: Kottatsuki Clan
« Reply #23 on: March 21, 2017, 15:37:43 »
location: land of wolves
location: da crib*

My final form

Biggest Shidori on SLO
Shout out to CaioDarT and Rapho for the character image!

Offline taigakun

Re: Kottatsuki Clan
« Reply #24 on: March 21, 2017, 17:41:12 »
Ayyy i like this Juke best of luck!


Offline JukeBlook

  • Academy Student Poster
  • *
  • Posts: 49
  • Reputation Power: 2
  • JukeBlook has no influence.
  • Gender: Male
  • Whats Up?
    • View Profile
  • Clan: Yamazaki


     
  • Organization: Heathen

Re: Kottatsuki Clan
« Reply #25 on: March 21, 2017, 18:55:53 »
Ayye kewl kewl

One question though; do you have 2 characters and 2 clans??? Or is your one character gonna be some weird ass dual personality person??

Juke one second, Yasu the next

2 Characters And 2 Clans

Ayyy i like this Juke best of luck!

Thanks Bro :D

location: land of wolves
location: da crib*

You cuming  to the crib bro?

Character Name: Akeshi
Character Gender: Male
Character Specialty (taijutsu, kenjutsu, ect.): Ninjutsu
Position applying for: Chief Advisor
Primary Chakra nature: Water

Accepted
  • Character Name: 1:Juke Yazamaki  2:Yasu Kottatsuki
Try not slow me down! *Poof*

Offline KanH13

  • Academy Student Poster
  • *
  • Posts: 2
  • Reputation Power: 2
  • KanH13 has no influence.
  • Gender: Male
  • I'm new around here.
    • View Profile
Re: Kottatsuki Clan
« Reply #26 on: May 11, 2017, 06:40:12 »
Character Name:Aidzoku
Character Gender:Male
Character Specialty kenjutsu
Position applying for:Combat
Primary Chakra nature:Water

  • Character Name: Aidzoku

Offline Leebz

  • Cursed Sennin Donator
  • Jonin Poster
  • *
  • Posts: 821
  • Reputation Power: 4
  • Leebz has no influence.
  • Gender: Male
    • View Profile
  • Clan: Himitsu
  • Organization: Jyuunishin-Tora
Re: Kottatsuki Clan
« Reply #27 on: May 15, 2017, 02:38:23 »
This genuinely would be a clan I would consider joining (If I was not dead set on staying loyal to Himitsu) but the whole idea that the 2 did not just eat the food the wolf provided (Reasonable) but also drank her breast milk (Weird) kind of grossed me out and put me off. Kinda makes me wonder what you are into and how that mindset would fit as a leader.

Another thing I have a dislike for is the fact the brother was knocked out, assumed dead and thrown into the water. A simple bonk to the head type of knockout would not leave him in a coma state, at least not how it was described. Water, even hitting his face, would wake him up before drowning even set in as a possibility... most likely.

Finally, I dislike how desperate it appeared to have so many detail traits and the fact it had little things that aren't remotely factual such as "Great taste in music." which is actually an opinion. Your "Great taste" could be absolute trash taste to another person and therefore is voided.

Things I did like though, were the fact its history is shown in its logo, history was rich and gripping, that it's quite homely in the sense of a pack that sticks together and is included in the history of the creation of the Hidden Snow (However, that could change when the lore is made and states otherwise.)

All in all, I really like this clan and hope it actually grows in members. (I am a bit late commenting about it but have only recently decided to check the newer Clans out in detail.)

Offline Gotarol

  • Academy Student Poster
  • *
  • Posts: 8
  • Reputation Power: 2
  • Gotarol has no influence.
  • Gender: Male
  • I'm new around here.
    • View Profile
Re: Kottatsuki Clan
« Reply #28 on: September 06, 2017, 22:51:03 »
Character Name: Akashita Tetsu
Character Gender: Male
Character Specialty (taijutsu, kenjutsu, ect.): Ninjutsu
Position applying for: N/A
Primary Chakra nature: Wind Release
Link to Character Profile (if completed): WIP
  • Character Name: Akashita Tetsu

 

Recent Topics

The Sandāreisu clan- finally a lightning clan by Thunder Dragon
Today at 05:09:19

Rōguhantā by Reminance
Yesterday at 19:30:50

General discussion by Manuster
Yesterday at 14:47:41

Shinobi Life Online Pre-Alpha Version 1.1.0.5 by Manuster
Yesterday at 14:35:36

handsign names by Legenderry
Yesterday at 06:58:28

Shizen clan by NinjaMirage
November 18, 2017, 01:01:13

Bitoku by Sandrito
November 17, 2017, 13:21:56

How to add things to a post by takami
November 17, 2017, 13:04:57

The Nakai Clan. by Nova
November 17, 2017, 11:05:40

The Nii clan by DrSuhi
November 17, 2017, 10:54:56

Top Posters

Reminance
Posts: 2237
Shivraj
Posts: 1600
m4r1us
Posts: 1298
Manuster
Posts: 1199
Nova
Posts: 1105
taigakun
Posts: 1098
Snoopy
Posts: 1069
Konohuro
Posts: 1057
NinjaMirage
Posts: 1030
Vreg
Posts: 972