Shinobi Life Online
Shinobi Life Online Category => Shinobi Life Online Character => Topic started by: waly206 on April 12, 2016, 22:13:41
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(http://i.imgur.com/kZgA0RF.png)
Age:15
Gender:Male
Height: 5.9
Weight:?
Hairstyle:Spike ( not my real hair just adding)
Facial hair:Nope
Hair color:White
Eye color:Brown
Blood type: A
Primary chakra nature:Wind
Hidden Village:Hidden Hill
Clan: Tsukegami Clan
Good or evil at heart?:Good at heart
Description of the character's personality: shy with stranger and get comfortable with people he knows and not really a conversation starter
Description of the character's history : Toichi Tsukegami is part of the Tsukegami clan he was born in the hidden hill, He's mother of a disease when he was 5. So after that tragic event he fell into sadness, but not for long because there was a kid by the name of Hiro ,that open up to him and they instantly they became friends,they help each other on everything ( training and learning new jutsu, etc.), and they both pass the academy together and place in the same team.
One day they were send into a low ranked request mission but things turn ugly, they were surrounded by rogue shinobi they fought the rogue shinobi with all they could, one of their team mates got it by a kunais on both of his shoulder, so they needed to defend them self's and protect their team mate, but in the moment of the battle hiro got hit with a poison kunai on his leg, he fell to the ground in the middle of the battle but help arrive(with healers) before the rogue shinobi could attack Toichi's injury friends and in the middle of the battle, his friends were being tend to, hiro said he could not feel his legs, they tried to heal them but it did not work and they ask Toichi what happen and he answer "the kunai on his leg" they pulled out the kunai off his leg, but they could not examined the kunai in the middle of the battle and after an hour of fighting the battle was over.
After they return to the village the medical ninja examined the kunai, the final results were a poison kunai that paralyzes his legs, the medical ninjas worked on an antidote and after finishing the antidote they give it to hiro who was sitting on his hospital bed with his parents,the medical ninjas said that the antidote will take a whole day to take effect and after the events of that mission the kage send shinobi to find the person who requested the mission but they could not find the suspect and this could have cause Toichi to fall into sadness again but it didn't, it did the opposite give him a mission to become strong and find the one who reported the mission.
Hope you enjoy it ,tell me for any typos :)
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Good character overall.
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A good start Toichi-kun.
I look forward to reading your history when you add it :D
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Thanks I thinking about a lot of things that I need to put together so it makes sense.
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Looks good so far, waiting for the story ^.^
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nice one
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Nice char, write a history too.
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I can almost picture Toichi in my head as I type this. Incredible job
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Thank you and it's going to take a few days to write the history because I'm doing a lot of things right now.
Thank you again :)
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Toichi Tsukegami is part of the Tsukegami clan he was born in the hidden hill, He's mother of a disease when he was 5 and his father was kill on a mission. So after those tragic events he fell into sadness, but not for long because there was a kid by the name of (I dont know what to name him, so you all can think of one to go along with the history),that open up to him and they instantly they became friends,
This is what I have for now hope you like it :)
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Toichi Tsukegami is part of the Tsukegami clan he was born in the hidden hill, He's mother of a disease when he was 5 and his father was kill on a mission. So after those tragic events he fell into sadness, but not for long because there was a kid by the name of (I dont know what to name him, so you all can think of one to go along with the history),that open up to him and they instantly they became friends,
This is what I have for now hope you like it :)
Not bad so far, but it is turning out to be extremely cliche, I don't think there are a single set of living parents in the forum....
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I know that's what im trying to change and that's what had me worried too im going to try to change the so he can have one parent at least.
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Hairstyle:Spike ( not my real hair just adding)
....uhmm so he is bald o.o...waiting to see the char history....and how he got fake hair
Toichi Tsukegami is part of the Tsukegami clan he was born in the hidden hill, He's mother of a disease when he was 5 and his father was kill on a mission. So after those tragic events he fell into sadness, but not for long because there was a kid by the name of (I dont know what to name him, so you all can think of one to go along with the history),that open up to him and they instantly they became friends,
This is what I have for now hope you like it :)
Not bad so far, but it is turning out to be extremely cliche, I don't think there are a single set of living parents in the forum....
lol i beg to differ
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yeah I need to rephrase what I mean is that my hair is not spiky because some people do have spiky hair and I said that because i' use to have my character look a little like me in some way so that's why I said that
Sorry for the misunderstanding
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yeah I need to rephrase what I mean is that my hair is not spiky because some people do have spiky hair and I said that because i' use to have my character look a little like me in some way so that's why I said that
Sorry for the misunderstanding
Erm...yeah...thanks for...clearing that up....>.>
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Sorry again
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Sorry again
lol dont worry im pretty sure most dont have white spiky hair irl....i think xD
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Sorry again
Dude, there's no need to apologise xD
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I'm a person that apologises too much
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I'm a person that apologises too much
Which isn't a bad thing.
But can get annoying after a while.
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Yeah but I don't apologise as much as I did before some times I use to say sorry for things that I did like drop a bottle I would say "sorry" for no reason, but that was a least 2 years ago or more.
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When a posted the updated version of my character with story it dissapear after a reloaded the page that was weird.