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Shinobi Life Online Category => Shinobi Life Online Character => Topic started by: hellaseb on February 03, 2017, 23:46:29

Title: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: hellaseb on February 03, 2017, 23:46:29
(http://i.imgur.com/w2xFpze.png)
Name: Hanzo Shizue
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Height: 5' 11"
Weight: 170 lbs
Hairstyle: Medium
Hair color: Dark Brown
Eye color: Green
Blood type: A
Primary chakra nature: Fire (Katon)
Secondary chakra nature: Lightning (Raiton)
Hidden Village: Former Hidden Ash
Clan: Shizue
Good or evil at heart?: Neither

Strong Points: Weak Points:

Description of the character's personality:
Hanzo is a caring brother of Konishi, his younger sibling . After his mother's death, his only goal is to keep his brother safe from harm. As a motivated, intelligent and tough shinobi, Hanzo now lives as a paid assassin, working alongside his younger brother hunting down people for money. Hanzo is neutral at heart, meaning he does what he feels is required to keep his and his brother's name alive. A skilled swordsman, (as expected from a descendant of Shizue clan), with huge talent for Ninjutsu, which he praises to Kazutoshi - his foster father - who educated him in chakra and jutsu ways. Humble in speech but deadly in combat, a beaming soul with a dark silhouette - that is the only way to describe Hanzo Shizue.

The Shizue History:
The Shizue blacksmith's family was notoriously known for their sword handling talents and incredible weapon crafting for the Village Hidden by Ash. When the Hidden Ash was at war, it accused the Shizue clan of treason. The Hidden Ash believed that the Shizue was crafting weapons for their enemies, in order to take over the village. Under the command of the Kage of the Hidden Ash, the family was to be wiped out as a punishment. Kamenashi Shizue, the clan's leader, secretly sent his son Hanzo and his pregnant wife Esumi into hiding from the Hidden Ash. The Shizue clan fought for their loved ones, but the Hidden Ash outnumbered them and not one member of the clan was spared.

The Story of Hanzo:
Esumi took Hanzo and her newborn Konishi into hiding outside of the Village where they lived away from people. There she met Kazutoshi, an elderly Shinobi outlaw. Esumi knew that someday she would be found and killed, therefore she pleaded Kazutoshi to train her sons, so that they can survive on their own, and maybe someday rebuild their clan that was so unfairly punished. Kazutoshi agreed to this under one condition - her sons were to become his travel companions. Hanzo, a 7 year old, and Konishi, a 5 year old, set out with Kazutoshi and began their training as Ninja outlaws.

Hanzo was a skilled swordsman from an early age. Under Kazutoshi's guidance, he mastered the blade and the techniques of Kenjutsu. Upon realising his chakra nature, Hanzo was taught how to control his chakra to perform jutsus and make him a bigger threat. His speed and accuracy impressed Kazutoshi and sooner Hanzo grew out to be one of the most agile he has ever seen.

After years of training and travelling, Kazutoshi announced that in order to advance as Shinobi, they would have to set out on a mission with him. Hanzo and his brother, who were both ready to take on a first real assignment, set off to their homeland of Hidden Ash. The mission was to split up and scout an abandoned headquarters in search of scrolls. Upon arrival, the place gave the two brothers a nostalgic feeling, as Henzo slowly realized that they were in fact in their old home - the Shizue Clan. They continued searching for the scrolls, but had an ominous feeling about the place. "It doesn't feel right.., we shouldn't be here". They searched for Kazutoshi to demand answers. They found him in an old derelict house. As they entered, they witnessed Kazutoshi's blade pierced through an elderly woman. She placed her hands on the sword as she fell to her knees and catched her last breaths. The brothers stared at her and saw the same eyes they missed for all these years. Their mother had died from the hands of their foster father. He turned around and gasped "Hanzo, Konishi", but before he could finish his sentence, Hanzo's sword was deeply buried within his heart. "Kazutoshi.. Why?" asked Konishi, as his body slid down from the blade and fell to the ground in silence.

All they found were two scrolls near Kazutoshi's body. The first, a payment agreement for killing the last member of the Shizue Clan signed X. "He was a hitman", said Konishi. "He was paid to kill our mother.." Hanzo began reading the second scroll. "Konishi, you need to see this". The second scroll was an outlined description of the clan's most lethal weapons created by their father, Kamenashi. Hanzo and Konishi were the last unknown members of the Shizue, and the family's most valuable piece of craft was now in their hands. They felt intense hatred towards Kazutoshi, but they soon realised that this was what he trained them for. He wanted Hanzo and Konishi to be like him, he wanted them to grow powerful in order to protect eachother and survive. Together they were to become hired hitmen. Not to fight for the good or the evil and not to gain notoriety, but to save the clan's name in a way that Kazutoshi envisioned it - as the last two living Shizue Shinobi - for the price of killing their mother and retrieving the secret scrolls.

Hanzo doesn't bond with anyone or anything, but this is only to eliminate the possibility of losing something he might care for, that is why he only needs his brother. Together they can protect and provide income for themselves. They don't kill without a purpose. With his brother they refuse jobs which have no real importance to anyone. To them life is precious, and they won't take lives of innocent people for money, however..
They take revenge for money, to not allow themselves become the evil they have fought and avenge their fallen clan.
Killing is a distraction of their subconscious pain


Konishi Shizue: https://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php?topic=3036.msg52689;topicseen#new
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: Toratsume Nyshn on February 04, 2017, 04:48:36
noted
this one is nicely done too
good job.
Good luck with avenging your clan.
stay active and have fun
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: taigakun on February 04, 2017, 07:23:52
Looks good man
stay active and have fun
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: CaioDarT on February 04, 2017, 07:59:51
Good job Hellaseb! feels good to see people elaborating such nice characters like you and your brother :) Welcome to SLO and enjoy your time here
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: takami on February 04, 2017, 12:15:03
Nice character  ;)
And welcome in SLO
And stay active  ;D
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: hellaseb on February 04, 2017, 12:53:41
Thanks a lot guys! im planning on writing out a few of the assassinations in detail, just to give you a bigger insight into what Hanzo does :)

@update: changed char picture, took ages to draw out :v
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: Kai on February 04, 2017, 13:46:15
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Humble in speech but deadly in combat, a beaming soul with a dark silhouette - that is the only way to describe Hanzo Shizue.

Nice description.

Looking forward to the assassination stories.
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: Manuster on February 04, 2017, 14:52:47
omgggg another brother-brother double story wegskdgkldfkm
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: luckycmsn on February 04, 2017, 15:13:20
Already met you in game and nice story btw.

Stay active buddy!
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: hellaseb on February 04, 2017, 15:39:43
omgggg another brother-brother double story wegskdgkldfkm

Except we're actually blood related in real life lol

Already met you in game and nice story btw.

Stay active buddy!
Thanks man! Looking forward to meeting you again :)
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: StriderOtaku on February 04, 2017, 16:11:56
Oh wow!
That character image, the personality description, the history...+++rep
Helluva good job. Welcome to the forum Seb.
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: hellaseb on February 04, 2017, 17:24:26
Oh wow!
That character image, the personality description, the history...+++rep
Helluva good job. Welcome to the forum Seb.
Appreciated <3 really loving it here, feels great to be a part of such a community and looking forward to new updates and meeting new people on here :)
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: Fraudulent on February 04, 2017, 17:54:21
Haven't seen a good character page in a while.
Welcome to the forum, enjoy your stay.
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: zaphuh on February 06, 2017, 07:17:36
howd u make ur character
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: Reminance on February 06, 2017, 09:39:42
howd u make ur character
He either made it himself with photoshop or a drawing tool, or just asked an artist to create it for him.
Great looking character buddy seems like you've put effort into it ^^
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: hellaseb on February 06, 2017, 09:48:37
howd u make ur character
I made a character in the deviant art creator tool and then drew it out myself in adobe illustrator :)
howd u make ur character
He either made it himself with photoshop or a drawing tool, or just asked an artist to create it for him.
Great looking character buddy seems like you've put effort into it ^^
Thanks man, first one I ever drew xd
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: hellaseb on February 22, 2017, 14:41:28
Okay finally got up to finishing the first assassination story, it was a bit rushed because I just wanted to finish it. Hope you guys understand.
Grab popcorn, coke and enjoy.


Target: Samumu Onashi
SOMEWHERE IN A FOREST
3:30 in the afternoon. The birds were still heard, accompanied by sudden movements in the bushes. The wildlife completely surrounded the spot, and the little breeze gave a refreshing feeling to the place. Only bits of the sun's light managed to pass through the dense trees and dimly light up a path within a forest, and the tall, thick trees casted shadows all around.

Deep in the forest, away from civilisation, a convoy was on their way to Morigakure, the Village Hidden in the Forest. A total of six men, and two horses made up the convoy. The men were clothed in khaki robes with black straw hats, and the two on horseback wore red capes with yellow symbols. The six had been on the road for over two days now, hoping to reach the village by the end of the day.

As they marched it began to get darker and the wind grew stronger and stronger. The branches on the trees began swaying and soon their rattling overpowered the normal speaking volume. With wind came rain, and soon thunder followed.

"Well great," said one of the men on horseback. "It's July and we're about to get soaked, there's no shelter in sight, we have to keep walking". The man was obviously in charge. His name was Samumu Onashi, a 46 year old sailor with a long history of drug transport and human trafficking. With him were 4 body guards and a 5th hired rogue ninja who was paid to get Samumu safely to Morigakure. Samumu, being a wanted man, had to travel safely to the Village in the Forest for a meeting with a corrupted Kage, and close a deal with him that would make Samumu one of the wealthiest man in the region - all legally.

"Stop" spoke the rogue ninja. Samumu stared back at him strangely, awaiting an explanation. "This isn't right, it's the middle of July and hasn't rained in weeks. Plus we should still have over 4 hours of sunlight.. somethings wrong." The dealer stared at his guard as if he was joking, but suddenly his face grew serious. "What are you proposing?" Samumu asked. "We're trapped in a genjutsu, a strong one, and we have been trapped inside for a while." Samumu turned his head towards the path they were walking on and stared into the forest. Is he in serious danger? They haven't met anyone on their way here for two straight days, they couldn't have been followed, they couldn't. But his thoughts were quickly interrupted by the sound of thunder. His eyes fixed on one point deep in the forest, and as he stared at it he realised it was a flashing light pointing in his direction.

As he focused more and more on the light, suddenly the thunder and the rain became quieter, as if the bad weather was stopping. "Maybe you were wrong" said Samumu to his guards. Suddenly a powerful lightning hit the ground in front of them, causing his horse to throw Samumu off its back. The dealer grunted as he slowly brought himself to his feet, but his back was in enormous pain. "Help me you fools" he commanded angrily, but no reply or reaction came from his guards. As he looked up, his four guards were on the ground too, not moving, while the rogue ninja disappeared and only left his horse behind. Samumu trudged to the guard closest to him and his face grew serious as he saw a shuriken buried deeply in his forehead. He was dead, no doubt about it. "What the f.." Samumu grunted. He started to scan the area, looking for his attackers, looking for his bodyguard. His thoughts were interrupted by the sound of feet landing on the ground behind him. Samumu spun on one heel and took out a kunai from under his robe. "Who are you?" he asked.

The boy looked no older than 15, he had long black hair and two brown stripes painted on his cheeks. Samumu's face began to relax, whoever this kid was, he had no chance against Samumu. He was only a child. The boy looked up to Samumu with a serious face and slowly replied, "I was sent here to kill you". Samumu stared at him blankly before he burst out with a laugh. "You're kidding right? What are you, 15? You messed up my bodyguards really bad I admit it, but you took us by surprise, you're in for a punishment kid." As Samumu got in a fight stance, the boy looked him deeply into the eyes, and something made Samumu relax. He quickly realised what was happening, he was trapped in a genjutsu. "Impressive", he thought, "what is your name child?". He asked. The boy replied with no emotion in his voice. "Konishi Shizue". "Well Konishi, your genjutsu skills are extraordinary, but they don't scare me, I'm not afraid of you kid". A pause followed, but Konishi smirked and replied: "I'm not the one you should be afraid of." and looked behind Samumu. The old man tried to turn around, but suddenly realised he was surrounded by a ring of fire. "What?!" He shouted. He spun on his heel once again and found another man standing behind him. This one a bit older and taller, but strangely similar looking to the kid behind him. As he looked closer he realised who was standing in front of him. "Hanzo" he whispered

"I hired you, you fool, explain yourself!" He shouted. The man in front of him was the rogue ninja that Samumu had hired to protect him. However Samumu needed no explaining, he knew what had happened. The kid had trapped them in a genjutsu to allow Hanzo kill his other four bodyguards with incredible speed. "I'm sorry Samumu", Hanzo said with a smirk, "don't take this personal, Were only doing our job, hope you understand". Before Samumu could register what was about to happen, Hanzo ran up to him in a flash, as if he teleported, and pierced his sword into his stomach. Samumu let out a breath as he coughed out blood and stared into the forest in front of him. The flames around him ceased and he was soon laying on the ground. The thunder had stopped and the sun rays fell on his face, blinding him. As Hanzo kneeled before him, he closed Samumu's eye lids with his palm. "Rest in Peace" he said softly.

Konishi helped Hanzo place  and strap the dead body of Samumu on his horse. "Let's make our way to the village, payment awaits". Konishi said. Hanzo looked at his younger brother and bowed his head in agreement. They began to walk in the direction of Morigakure, in hope to reach the village before sunset.

DARK CABIN, OUTSIDE OF MORIGAKURE
"You did well boys, here's the payment." A chubby voice spoke from within a shadow, while handing Konishi an envelope with money. Konishi quickly counted the sum before speaking softly: "We agreed on five thousand, we are a grand short." Hanzo flexed his muscles and the chubby man spoke with laughter. "Yes but you killed four other guards. My boys will have to go out there and clean up the dead bodies, you left marks even though you said you were professionals, hope you boys understand." The chubby man began to cough. Hanzo's eyes met Konishi's, before Hanzo said: "I don't think you quite understand how we go about our business. We will have to talk this out, hope you understand". Konishi moved back to close the open door behind them.

"Guys hold on, I can pay you in full, please wait" could be heard deep within the forest, and soon screams and shouts followed as it began to grow dark, then cloudy, and finally the sound of thunder and strikes of lightning.
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: taigakun on February 22, 2017, 15:30:37
The story is extremely well laid story
gjgjgj
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: Diamond Lee on February 22, 2017, 16:34:39
top-level banter right here! Good job, looking forward to more from u
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: CaioDarT on February 22, 2017, 17:29:20
What an great reading!!! I really like it, well done Hellaseb. Love the brothers working together. Cant wait to read another assassination story :)
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: StriderOtaku on February 22, 2017, 19:19:18
This story, I like it...
(http://i.imgur.com/GtIwmVs.gif)
Great job seb, really good story
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: hellaseb on February 22, 2017, 22:24:31
Thanks guys :) I want to start including some real organisations into the stories, but y'all gonna have to wait a little for the next xd
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: Raidnn on February 22, 2017, 22:27:09
nice story man :) keep up the good work
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: hellaseb on February 23, 2017, 09:18:12
nice story man :) keep up the good work
Thanks mayneee
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: Toratsume Nyshn on February 23, 2017, 12:21:44
welp... sucks to have a corrupt kage :P
Here you boys... kill the corrupt Kage will ya? I'll give you free ramen.... for lifetime :3
Good story.... is kind of different than the usual stuff I see here.
I liked it :)
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: hellaseb on February 23, 2017, 12:59:06
welp... sucks to have a corrupt kage :P
Here you boys... kill the corrupt Kage will ya? I'll give you free ramen.... for lifetime :3
Good story.... is kind of different than the usual stuff I see here.
I liked it :)
that free ramen offer is tempting, better than wild boar anyway xd
Thanks!
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: Manuster on February 23, 2017, 16:39:03
Hanzo said: "I don't think you quiet understand how we go about our business. We will have to talk this out, hope you understand". Konishi moved back to close the open door behind them.



aaand good job, question though;

are all your stories gonna be about assasinations? or will there be other stuff too?
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: hellaseb on February 23, 2017, 18:17:53
@Manuster
Just assassination stories I think, it's a bit more original that way since that's what my character does for a living.
But like I said I might be bringing in different organisations/characters hiring us to do certain jobs.
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: Manuster on February 24, 2017, 22:37:47
@Manuster
Just assassination stories I think, it's a bit more original that way since that's what my character does for a living.
But like I said I might be bringing in different organisations/characters hiring us to do certain jobs.

ahh i see, that is interesting, I'd like to see how you implement other organisations
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: mamita on August 30, 2017, 14:44:25
You two are amazing.
Teamwork in and out of game.
This is a darned GEM.
The art (YOU DREW THAT?! )
is mind-blowing, the writing even more so. Further accentuated by the collaboration on both your parts.
Best shit I've seen all week,
Hands. Down. NAILED IT SON.
Title: Re: Hanzo Shizue
Post by: Ken on August 30, 2017, 15:36:36
You two are amazing.
Teamwork in and out of game.
This is a darned GEM.
The art (YOU DREW THAT?! )
is mind-blowing, the writing even more so. Further accentuated by the collaboration on both your parts.
Best shit I've seen all week,
Hands. Down. NAILED IT SON.

Fanboying at its finest.
On the other hand, nice story bruv.