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Offline Aleksandar_Ciki

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Forsaken Chidori
« on: June 18, 2015, 20:50:51 »
Organization name:
Forsaken Chidori


Organization art:


Organization logo:


Founder
Aleksandar_Ciki

Leader
Aleksandar_Ciki

Affiliation:
Hidden Thunder

Allies
Hidden Thunder

Enemies
Currently none.

History

All this time, there are only a few that knows to use Chidori.. Least correctly... Forsaken Chidori is here to unite those few and surpass all the ninja!


Purpose/Goals
The goal of this organization is simple, to surpass all the shinobi and become one with the gods.

Unique features
1) Organization textbox: Forsaken Chidori.
2) Using chidori as a main jutsu.
3) Organization logo on clothing.
4) Dark blue clothing.


Rankings
1. Chidori user
2.Chidori Seeker
3. Chidori maker
4. Chidori Master
5. Chiden
6. Chinen
7. Chizet
8. Chigae
9. Chikage


Members

Aleksandar_Ciki - Chikage






Rules
1) Keep the information given from our organization to yourselves. Otherwise you will be removed from our org
2) Do not engage in a battle with organization members. Otherwise you will be ranked down
3) Keep your organization title visible at all times.


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I agree to obey the rules and follow the goals of Forsaken Chidori
My skills are:
I am good at:
My strength is:
My weakness is:
Why do i want to join Forsaken Chidori:
Rank i want to accomplish in this organization is:

« Last Edit: June 23, 2015, 14:13:27 by Aleksandar_Ciki »


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Re: Forsaken Chidori
« Reply #1 on: June 19, 2015, 12:26:56 »
You have added no unique traits , no purpose/goal , the ranking is the SAME as in villages , and you shouldn't add strengths and  weaknesses to an organization , people in an org aren't blood-related so it's rare for all of them to have the same strengths and weaknesses.
Have you ever heard of a thing called "Organization Template"?
Here : http://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php/topic,638.0.html
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Re: Forsaken Chidori
« Reply #2 on: June 19, 2015, 12:29:20 »
You have added no unique traits , no purpose/goal , the ranking is the SAME as in villages , and you shouldn't add strengths and  weaknesses to an organization , people in an org aren't blood-related so it's rare for all of them to have the same strengths and weaknesses.
Have you ever heard of a thing called "Organization Template"?
Here : http://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php/topic,638.0.html

Listen to this guy and people will consider joining you :)
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« Reply #3 on: June 19, 2015, 13:14:11 »
« Last Edit: June 19, 2015, 13:44:57 by Aleksandar_Ciki »
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Re: Forsaken Chidori
« Reply #4 on: June 19, 2015, 14:26:49 »
No hidden leaf or anything like that
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Re: Forsaken Chidori
« Reply #5 on: June 19, 2015, 14:34:34 »
you should have checked out the forums first(FAQ) and looked at other organization layouts, then proceed to make your own org
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Re: Forsaken Chidori
« Reply #6 on: June 19, 2015, 15:38:18 »
@StrawHatSeyi

Ive checked the villages list and edited the thread.
« Last Edit: June 19, 2015, 21:17:43 by Aleksandar_Ciki »
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Re: Forsaken Chidori
« Reply #7 on: June 19, 2015, 21:39:30 »
Why are maruisx and limits enemies? Most orgs don't put people as enemies, so why are you targeting them?
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Re: Forsaken Chidori
« Reply #8 on: June 19, 2015, 21:44:20 »
it's because he can't be proven wrong and gets mad when people question his 'authority'. Nevertheless im fine with that, come and fight me when the DM is out
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Re: Forsaken Chidori
« Reply #9 on: June 19, 2015, 21:53:10 »
Oooooohhhhhhhhhhh.

Dayum @limits!

But seriously @Aleksandar_Ciki, you have to give a reason yourself for making two random people on the forum your enemy, otherwise you could easily get many more enemies yourself. To most people right now (The ones that didn't see the shoutbox conversation), it looks like you are targeting these people for no reason, which will make you someone people don't like.


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Re: Forsaken Chidori
« Reply #10 on: June 19, 2015, 22:16:50 »
@Aleksandar_Ciki
"You can't cheath Death."
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"You have an inflated sense of your importance. To a thing like me, a thing like you, well... Think how you'd feel if a bacterium sat at your table and started to get snarky."

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Re: Forsaken Chidori
« Reply #11 on: June 19, 2015, 23:03:10 »
You picked the wrong members for your enemies.
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Re: Forsaken Chidori
« Reply #12 on: June 19, 2015, 23:51:42 »
I'll leave this to limits and marius. This guy is not a threat (no offence). I'm sure they can take care of themselves :D
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Re: Forsaken Chidori
« Reply #13 on: June 20, 2015, 15:50:32 »
Many people are just all talk here... who cares actually xD
SLO isnt even really in a playable state as it is.
Just running around no villages.
When DM comes out then you can all prove yourselves... ya know?
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Re: Forsaken Chidori
« Reply #14 on: June 20, 2015, 16:03:24 »
Many people are just all talk here... who cares actually xD
SLO isnt even really in a playable state as it is.
Just running around no villages.
When DM comes out then you can all prove yourselves... ya know?
hence why i said "come and fight me when the DM is out"
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