The Battle of Yoake Hill - Chapter 1

[waly206]

pretty good start cant wait for the next chapter

[adithya]

hahahahahah I think I have an idea as to who it is xD

[Sanji]

i think it is adithya,btw good one,waiting for more.

[Manuster]

Makes me wanna write my story xD nice work noob

[Diamond Lee]

Thanks for all the compliments and critique everyone it means a lot. I am currently well into writing chapter 2, which has the first fight. Expect it in a week or so!

[Sanji]

Thanks for all the compliments and critique everyone it means a lot. I am currently well into writing chapter 2, which has the first fight. Expect it in a week or so!

lel,i thought it will be there by tomorrow,well then good luck with it ^^

[lollernoob9]

lol they feel nice and alive

[json243]

Nice job it sounds really good!