Shinobi Life Online
Shinobi Life Online Category => Shinobi Life Online Character => Topic started by: Cryptonexin on February 04, 2016, 21:33:44
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(http://i.imgur.com/mNKDc2j.png)
This is Version 3 (v3). Maybe the final one, but if I get the White Himitsu Symbol from Leebz then I will just go with this. Feedback and Edits + Recommendations will always be appreciated. THANKS ALOT!!!
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It looks good however the logo seems copy pasted on there and so does the mask.
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It looks good however the logo seems copy pasted on there and so does the mask.
This. Also, using that logo is always meh on clothing but given you don't have the logo I use, it is good. However, placement of it could be better unless you do this thing I can't remember.. It reshapes/reangles it to look better.. Fuck. Anyway, not bad :)
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this character obviously loves his woman on any day of the month
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this character obviously loves his woman on any day of the month
If you love your woman then yeah ..
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was makin a joke about the blood on his face rip
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was makin a joke about the blood on his face rip
You don't say huh...!
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try to re-draw the mask yourself with the same line quality of the original shinobi drawing you made. They are "speaking different languages"
The logo cant stay in the middle because there is a division line there.
If you want the logo in the middle then cut the logo and distort perspectives in both sides a little bit inside changing some of the colours
If is patched or stamped on the suit, it changes colours too, so adjust the curves and it will look more natural :)
the drawing quality looks awesome :))
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Boom. New design.
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Tobi <3
Also, are you going to use the template?
[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]Gender:[/b]
[b]Height:[/b]
[b]Weight:[/b]
[b]Hairstyle:[/b]
[b]Facial hair:[/b]
[b]Hair color:[/b]
[b]Eye color:[/b]
[b]Blood type:[/b]
[b]Primary chakra nature:[/b]
[b]Hidden Village:[/b]
[b]Clan:[/b]
[b]Good or evil at heart?:[/b]
[b]Description of the character's personality:[/b]
[b]Description of the character's history:[/b]
Or are you going to wing it?
I personally would like to see more information regarding your character ^.^
I will ask Leebz about the logos and see what I can do.
As for feedback.
I like it but at some spots (where you colored over the existing stuff or added things yourself) it sometimes looks chunky, maybe you can put a little more time in to smoothing that out.
Looks well though ^.^
I did like your old one as well, why'd you change it if you don't mind me asking :3
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Tobi <3
Also, are you going to use the template?
[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]Gender:[/b]
[b]Height:[/b]
[b]Weight:[/b]
[b]Hairstyle:[/b]
[b]Facial hair:[/b]
[b]Hair color:[/b]
[b]Eye color:[/b]
[b]Blood type:[/b]
[b]Primary chakra nature:[/b]
[b]Hidden Village:[/b]
[b]Clan:[/b]
[b]Good or evil at heart?:[/b]
[b]Description of the character's personality:[/b]
[b]Description of the character's history:[/b]
Or are you going to wing it?
I personally would like to see more information regarding your character ^.^
I will ask Leebz about the logos and see what I can do.
As for feedback.
I like it but at some spots (where you colored over the existing stuff or added things yourself) it sometimes looks chunky, maybe you can put a little more time in to smoothing that out.
Looks well though ^.^
I did like your old one as well, why'd you change it if you don't mind me asking :3
Thanks for the feedback, I will be go full pro on this. The old one didn't look like the character that I imagined, this one resembles a lot. Yes, I will be using the format, with backstory that I planned and wrote and all that. So I'm not really gonna wing anything :)
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Thanks for the feedback, I will be go full pro on this. The old one didn't look like the character that I imagined, this one resembles a lot. Yes, I will be using the format, with backstory that I planned and wrote and all that. So I'm not really gonna wing anything :)
Nice, looking forward to the finished product ^.^
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Gukan Himitsu v3 and hopefully the last version.
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Your char is a mix between sasuke, tobi and paint hair :D
Will it get updated in the V3?
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Your char is a mix between sasuke, tobi and paint hair :D
Will it get updated in the V3?
Yes, Yes, YESS. All is planned, it will be the greatest character made!! *evil Laugh* *cough* *cough*
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If leebz isn't coming on, you can send him a ping by going to his character page, hovering over the white box next to 'offline' and pressing Left Alt + Shift + PrintScrn.
It'll send him a notification on his desktop to check your posts :)