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Title: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: Whatasnipe on February 27, 2017, 00:51:17
SLO General History Lore Poll

Hello everyone! It's your fourth favorite green name Whatasnipe, bringing you something exciting while you countdown the hours to the next update. Malix and I (Mostly Malix to be fair) have been coming up with some different general lore ideas over the last little while. The team has decided to get an opinion from the community as to which idea we should stick with. So take a little looksie through what we've got and cast 2 votes to directly influence which idea's we'll be going off of. Some of them will have a more detailed description to tie things together like a story, and some others won't. It's heavily encouraged you read all of them before casting your vote. Cheers!

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General History Lore Candidate #1 - Breaking Bonds

Main Points

Detailed Breakdown:
Spoiler: show
The shinobi world was once controlled by numerous different factions and neutral inhabitants. This early in time chakra was known and used by those who trained as samurai however the shinobi profession did not exist. These samurai used chakra strictly as a body strengthening tool and nothing more. No modern forms of ninjutsu or genjutsu were known as the samurai devoted their training to swordplay and not to advancing chakra abilities.

The most dominant force in the land was an empire governed by a single shogun. This empire was centered in the area that now contains the Hidden Hill. This empire sought to expand their control to the entire continent using their armies of samurai.

Inhabitants of the region lived normal lives for the most part however every now and then some would be born with very high innate levels of chakra. These usually manifested themselves in uncontrollable ways which led to wide scale destruction in the areas they were in. Fear and panic would follow as little was known about chakra at the time and these people posed threats to all. So the Shogun ordered that all who showed signs of high levels of chakra be detained and imprisoned. Some were captured early, others ran and had to be hunted down, and some even turned themselves in but all were caught and imprisoned in the center of the empire.

Rather than leaving them to rot or simply executing them the Shogun envisioned a use for these people. They were isolated in a large complex in the countryside and told to train themselves to control their abilities. No samurai would train outcast souls like this so instead they were forced to learn subterfuge and guerrilla warfare tactics. Thus the first shinobi were born.

Years past like this and the shinobi progressed. They were not allowed to leave the complex. Not allowed families, ambitions, goals, or anything resembling a normal life. They lived and died as prisoners from the day they were caught to the day they died. However this forced method of training produced great results. Unlike the samurai they were told to completely master and control their chakra. Those who progressed well would teach those after them and thus the lessons were past on.

Soon the first forms of ninjutsu and genjutsu were discovered as well as chakra affinities and eventually second affinities. These discoveries they melded into their combat tactics making them their own. Samurai would continue to dismiss these new ways as inefficient in regular front line combat, leaving the shinobi with a very unique role in the shogunate. The first squad was sent out to deal with a group of rogue samurai who had deserted the empire and were attacking caravans in the hills. The regular army was having difficulty tracking them down. The group of four senior shinobi were dispatched with low expectations. Many felt that their abilities were more suited as parlor tricks than actual combat maneuvers. Still these shinobi were expendable and so they could send endless waves of them at the enemy if the need arised. When the shinobi returned much earlier than expected, having wiped out the enemy forces with little difficulty, it changed the way the empire would do combat forever.

Shinobi battle squads were formed and sent out for a variety of missions after that. With each mission the samurai of the empire would lose more and more of their value. Shinobi were proving unstoppable in small scale battles. They also took no income and were completely expendable so the Shogun saw less and less use for regular samurai. The empire’s borders expanded greatly, its enemies having no way to compete with the shinobi forces.

When the first among the shinobi unlocked kenkai genkais things changed again for the empire. The Shogun recognized the uniqueness and strength of these powers and he did not want to lose them when the shinobi died. So after much deliberation it was decided that these shinobi would be elevated above the rest. Allowed to move out of the shinobi complex and have families. As expected the children of these shinobi would prove to also have the same abilities of the parent. The first shinobi clans were formed.

The Shogun pit these clans against eachother. Giving praise, honor and rewards to those who completely their missions the most efficiently. The clans struggled desperately to gain whatever rewards they could. Despite the elevation shinobi were still considered lower than common citizens. Their children were born and raised as shinobi and would live and die in service to the empire in the same fashion as their parents. This would prove to be a sore spot for the shinobi. Where once they were all individuals that struggled together with others who were captured, now their own children were born into this way of life. Children who would never experience freedom or own their own lives. It was a fact that did not sit well in their minds.

In regards to the expansion, the clans made short work of whatever remaining opposition the empire had. The Shogun now controlled the entire continent, all bowed to his will. However instead of bringing peace to the land this only sparked infighting between the high nobles of the empire. They demanded access to the shinobi clans and pitted them against eachother in their own personal vendettas. The Shogun allowed the practice as it not only pleased his supporters but kept the shinobi active and sharp while the rivalries between the clans would prevent any from joining together in revolt.

This was the theory at least. It did not stop the clan leaders from one day meeting in secret. They discussed their future as shinobi, and that of their children. They agreed that they could just sit by and let their children live their entire lives never knowing freedom. The Shogun relied too heavily on his free source of military strength to ever allow things to change. The only option remaining to them was a planned coup. Thus the shinobi set to work making arrangements. Eventually the day came, and over the course of one night every shinobi in the empire rose in unison as they overthrew the Shogunate. There was little resistance, shinobi were too deeply entrenched into the empire’s defenses. Many noble families employed only shinobi to defend them. These were all wiped out without mercy. The Shogun and his family itself were assassinated in the same night. By morning not a single remaining official of the Shogunate was left alive. The work was bloody and the shinobi took no chances. Never again would they succumb to a life of slavery.

The days following the mission were full of confusion and panic. The common people did not know what to make of the sudden change in power. Some feared the shinobi and ran away with their families while others stayed and submitted themselves to shinobi rule. The clans however had a hard time adjusting. Many still felt resentment not only to the common people but to the other shinobi clans. Old rivalries would not be so easily dismissed. Instead the clans split and went separate. Each making a home in what would eventually become the different Hidden Villages. Those shinobi who had no clans remained in the area where the Shogun was and eventually formed the Hidden Hill. Each village has their own unique story to the trials they faced as they formed their village.




General History Lore Candidate #2 - Sacred Grounds

Main Points

Detailed Breakdown:
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The history of the land goes back to a time where no major regions or countries existed and instead the land was filled with independent villages and shinobi clans. The shinobi were hired to protect the villages from bandit groups and other rogue shinobi but for the most part there was peace across the land.

This changed when the continent was hit with a series of earthquakes. They went on continuously for days having devastating effects. Rivers dried up, hills were ripped apart and whole valleys sunk into themselves. Many of the settlements were left in tatters, their source of water or resources taken from them. These people were forced to set out in search of new areas in which to start over. This invited a lot of turmoil as clans and villages fought amongst eachother for suitable locations to inhabit.

One day a piece of land was discovered that seemed to flourish much more than those around it. The grass was greener, the soil fertile, plenty of wood and water was nearby, the location seemed ideal for a community. This wasn’t what excited people though. The land itself exuded a pure form of chakra. It seeped from every living plant and animal, filling the air. When breathed in it seemed the chakra had a natural regenerative effect on people. They felt less tired and wounds and broken bones healed faster. Perfect as a defensive location. Rumours of this area would spread and soon more clans would spread out searching for similar “chakra lands”.

They were found all over the continent, some in obscure places that would normally not be suitable for life (land of inferno). However they would not prove easy to secure. Numerous clans would fight over the rights to these lands, sparking long, bloody feuds between them. Eventually one by one these lands would be claimed though and thus the Hidden Villages were formed.

Studies were done into the cause of the chakra emission. Clans hoped to reproduce the effect and use it to their benefit but few no concrete results were found. None of the Hidden Villages would be willing to share the knowledge they gained and thus it made progress move at a crawl. There are those who have grown worried over the presence of the lands. Living creatures can only hold so much chakra before having to rest and recover but these lands never stop releasing their healing chakra. The question is raised as to what is powering it and at what cost?




General History Lore Candidate #3 - Gifted Abilities

Main Points

Detailed Breakdown:
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Shinobi clans have been fighting eachother for dominance for generations. As one clan is eliminated, other new ones sprout up to replace them. It seemed unlikely that there would ever be an end to the bloodshed. That is until one day when various clans around the continent were each met by a mysterious cloaked figure. The man met with each clan leader, sometimes welcomed other times forcefully, and offered the leaders an opportunity to reach new unheard of heights of power. In return he only asked that they grant him a simple favour some time in the future once they’ve established themselves as a dominant force in the land.

Most clans were weary of the man but eventually came to accept his offer. The power he bestoyed on them would be that of the Genkai Kekkai. These new found abilities helped the clans wipe out their opposition and claim whole regions for themselves. The Hidden Villages would form from these. One village in every section of the world, having complete dominance over the lesser clans in the area. As the clans expanded out further, wars broke out and each Hidden Village refused to give way to another. Each claimed a right to dominate and so these wars would go on for generations, rivalries forming that would last even to present day.

The single exception to this would be the Hidden Hill area. The clan there rejected the cloaked figure of his offer and sent him away. Upon hearing the news that other clans had received the gift of Kekkai Genkais, the clan chose to go into seclusion to devote themselves to training. There they stayed for years until the day arrived when the shinobi from a neighbouring Hidden Village arrived to claim their land. It was then they Hidden Hill shinobi emerged to meet their would-be conquerors. To the surprise of their attackers they met them not with Kekkai Genkais but with a third unleashed chakra affinity. The shock of it was enough to give them the advantage and force the attackers back into retreat. News of this revoked attack spread across the land and soon other clanless shinobi flocked to the area to join this clan. The Hidden Hill Village was formed in earnest from then on.

Years past and the villages secured their boundaries. It was around this time that rumours emerged that the clans were being visited by a familiar cloaked figure. One who had not been seen in years, not since the first day Kekkai Genkai were introduced. The rumours say that he was asking for his payment now. A payment that would change the course of the land.




General History Lore Candidate #4 - Uprising

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Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: Whatasnipe on February 27, 2017, 00:51:39
General History Lore Candidate #5 - Religious Temples

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General History Lore Candidate #6 - Experimentation

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General History Lore Candidate #7 - Gracious Deity

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Thank you for taking the time to read through them and cast your vote, the community is really what fuels this project! Mwah <3
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: Kotatsu on February 27, 2017, 04:17:37
I don't know if I'm allowed to post this here. But, you sure do make it hard.  Voting will be hard, because I like aspects of each one. Anyway, now I'll go cast my vote, shaking my head because this all can't be apart of the history. (Congratulations, you've thought of a lot of great ones.)
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: Gustavolegend on February 27, 2017, 11:34:23
I love this idea,i Choose the best (i think)
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: Toratsume Nyshn on February 27, 2017, 13:53:51
I loved #1 breaking Bonds and #6 Experimentation. Although I voted for #1, I'd like to say if #6 was to take place, It should have been in 1950s or in the modern period, which will make it more practical to have existed. +rep to you and @Malix
Hope Vreg implements one of these.
P.S yeah I was imagining some epic cinematic narration when a newb would first play this game, as I read across these stories. You guys deserve a lot of reps :)
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: Manuster on February 27, 2017, 17:58:41
2 and 3 have an insane amount of potential. You could milk out soooooo much of an epic story from them

and is it only possible to vote for one? suuuurely people should be able to vote for 2...pleeeeeeeeeeeeaseeeeee <3
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: Saitou on February 27, 2017, 19:07:31
I'm going to increase the allowed number of votes to 2.
@Manuster @Gustavolegend @Toratsume Nyshn @Kotatsu .

Feel free to leave your remarks after you vote.
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: Malix on February 27, 2017, 19:23:32
I'm glad you guys are liking them! Also feel free to post any feedback/comments/suggestions you may have about the candidates. This could help us forge out the path we take afterwards.

Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: sirpaul on February 27, 2017, 19:44:59
I like 7 the most. the idea that all of this came from a deity and every village gets a sacred weapon etc.

3 wasnt all to bad either, it would form a good story. gz these are my votes
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: Konohuro on February 27, 2017, 20:14:30
I hope individual villages lore will be coming.

I am also hoping that the history of SLO world will continue to be written as the players and events occur after the game comes out. With this in mind, I think that not an exact story about how shinobis and chakra came into world is what we need. This allows for future interesting and genial ideas for major events including Vreg and the story of chakra.
What I am saying is that Naruto wouldn't have been that good if we knew right away who Sage of the Six Paths was, who mother Kaguya was and how everything appeared; this is kept for the end.

Therefore, I voted #1 and #4. #6 was also a very good idea, every time there should be a drama, this is what catches the eye, but unfortunately, in this scenario, everything is known about how chakra appeared...
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: Gustavolegend on February 27, 2017, 20:22:11
I'm going to increase the allowed number of votes to 2.
@Manuster @Gustavolegend @Toratsume Nyshn @Kotatsu .

Feel free to leave your remarks after you vote.
oh yeah!!!
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: Malix on February 27, 2017, 20:38:25
I hope individual villages lore will be coming.

I am also hoping that the history of SLO world will continue to be written as the players and events occur after the game comes out. With this in mind, I think that not an exact story about how shinobis and chakra came into world is what we need. This allows for future interesting and genial ideas for major events including Vreg and the story of chakra.
What I am saying is that Naruto wouldn't have been that good if we knew right away who Sage of the Six Paths was, who mother Kaguya was and how everything appeared; this is kept for the end.

Therefore, I voted #1 and #4. #6 was also a very good idea, every time there should be a drama, this is what catches the eye, but unfortunately, in this scenario, everything is known about how chakra appeared...

You're definitely right about needing to keep some things hidden and let the players explore the world and find them out. In light of that there definitely needs to be quest lines that will let the players unlock lore and find out more about the world (think hidden quests that unlock if a player does a particular thing or goes somewhere specific). Still what we're voting on here is just general back lore of the overall state of the world. Even in Naruto you knew this early on (i.e. Warring States period).

We need this to basically have a foundation on how to do the rest of the world's lore (villages, jutsus, themes, everything). All of which will be unique and engaging to the player. Also keep in mind that unlike in a manga where everything can be a mystery and the reader has no real decision power. Here we're asking you to be immersed in our world, pick a starting village, fight for a cause! Well we can't ask you to do that if you dont have any history to go off of.


Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: Gustavolegend on February 27, 2017, 20:51:30
I hope individual villages lore will be coming.

I am also hoping that the history of SLO world will continue to be written as the players and events occur after the game comes out. With this in mind, I think that not an exact story about how shinobis and chakra came into world is what we need. This allows for future interesting and genial ideas for major events including Vreg and the story of chakra.
What I am saying is that Naruto wouldn't have been that good if we knew right away who Sage of the Six Paths was, who mother Kaguya was and how everything appeared; this is kept for the end.

Therefore, I voted #1 and #4. #6 was also a very good idea, every time there should be a drama, this is what catches the eye, but unfortunately, in this scenario, everything is known about how chakra appeared...

You're definitely right about needing to keep some things hidden and let the players explore the world and find them out. In light of that there definitely needs to be quest lines that will let the players unlock lore and find out more about the world (think hidden quests that unlock if a player does a particular thing or goes somewhere specific). Still what we're voting on here is just general back lore of the overall state of the world. Even in Naruto you knew this early on (i.e. Warring States period).

We need this to basically have a foundation on how to do the rest of the world's lore (villages, jutsus, themes, everything). All of which will be unique and engaging to the player. Also keep in mind that unlike in a manga where everything can be a mystery and the reader has no real decision power. Here we're asking you to be immersed in our world, pick a starting village, fight for a cause! Well we can't ask you to do that if you dont have any history to go off of.



If you make prefabricated models for any biome of the game it would be better, because when a player is a secret location, the place was sent randomly to another area of the map, because the player could give the place of the area and would cease to be hidden
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: StriderOtaku on February 27, 2017, 22:24:15
I'm going to increase the allowed number of votes to 2.
@Manuster @Gustavolegend @Toratsume Nyshn @Kotatsu .

Feel free to leave your remarks after you vote.
I can't seem to vote a second time. Have you enabled it or should I wait?

#1-Breaking bonds seemed to make the most sense to me in terms of being an all round solid lore content-wise and still leaving room for mystery and further development as well as player adventures/discoveries. That's just my opinion, #4-Uprising would also be a solid pick imo.
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: America on February 28, 2017, 00:22:07
@people who didn't vote for #3

Hold this

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Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: adithya on February 28, 2017, 07:54:55
I feel like scared grounds and the religious temples could be combined into one idea. (I'm only interested in scared grounds because that might play into some of the player written stories which would be something amazing because the shit players hope to do in-game will be plausible and we're not left to think that our shit is separate.
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: Yamasukage on February 28, 2017, 10:49:39
My head is literally on fiya 1, 4 or 7; baaaaaaaahhhhh 
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: Dragon6624 on March 01, 2017, 02:12:34
I'd prefer to see an option with something along the lines of this topic, actually: http://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php?topic=2647.msg42394#msg42394

If not, however, then a fusion of Sacred Grounds and Religious Temples seems plausible in my mind, and opens up the options of possible "Ideologies" within each of the villages. Basically, the 'Gods' are the mindsets that existed within --and thereby dictate the actions without-- the monks, or "Protectors", in the native tongues (Perhaps not Shinobi, but who knows -- it's Fantasy), and the grounds are what each village happened to be built around, with a principle of worship growing up over these warriors. The influence of these "Protectors" created semi-religious Caste systems, eventually leading to the Kage(Future name pending?) being set as the elected figureheads of the upper-most Caste, that of the Warrior-Protectors. As in most organized religions, however, the extreme warriors amongst this class sought to squash the ideologies of those that opposed them, even going so far as to steal other techniques from the other villages in order to maintain an edge over the competition. Centuries pass...and we have SLO?

Those are just two ideas to think on, however. I'm anxious to see the winning pick O_O).
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: Manuster on March 01, 2017, 04:31:57
I'd prefer to see an option with something along the lines of this topic, actually: http://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php?topic=2647.msg42394#msg42394

If not, however, then a fusion of Sacred Grounds and Religious Temples seems plausible in my mind, and opens up the options of possible "Ideologies" within each of the villages. Basically, the 'Gods' are the mindsets that existed within --and thereby dictate the actions without-- the monks, or "Protectors", in the native tongues (Perhaps not Shinobi, but who knows -- it's Fantasy), and the grounds are what each village happened to be built around, with a principle of worship growing up over these warriors. The influence of these "Protectors" created semi-religious Caste systems, eventually leading to the Kage(Future name pending?) being set as the elected figureheads of the upper-most Caste, that of the Warrior-Protectors. As in most organized religions, however, the extreme warriors amongst this class sought to squash the ideologies of those that opposed them, even going so far as to steal other techniques from the other villages in order to maintain an edge over the competition. Centuries pass...and we have SLO?

Those are just two ideas to think on, however. I'm anxious to see the winning pick O_O).

You're idea of dinosaurs beasts that eventually became chakra beasts is not a bad one. But did they simply develop the same genome as humans did?

Also since we're suggesting stuff, how about

https://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php?topic=2647.msg42358#msg42358

I personally really liked the idea of separation into 3 lands...


PS.  Do these stories have anything to do with the lore around chakra beasts?

And most importantly....HOW MANY WILL THERE BE?
What animals will they take shape after?
Will they hold an individual chakra nature?
Or chakra mix?
Will they have their own lore?
Can we suggest things???
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: Malix on March 01, 2017, 05:06:26
Im sorry to say this guys but there isn't going to be Chakra beasts of any type. Really we're trying to steer away from Naruto in this regard.
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: Reminance on March 01, 2017, 12:10:24
Im sorry to say this guys but there isn't going to be Chakra beasts of any type. Really we're trying to steer away from Naruto in this regard.
So no chakra beast to slay at all?
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: NinjaMirage on March 01, 2017, 12:27:30
Looks that way!!
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: mamita on March 01, 2017, 14:45:49
I like Breaking Bonds, but I think Sacred Grounds would help to explain
why you're limited to picking one of two chakra natures per village
when starting out- It's because the natural chakra inherent in the land
influenced it at your birth. Those who have kekkei genkai have "Inherited"
the land's gift more prominently.
The first however, would explain where we get Kenjutsu from-
The teachings of the first Samurai who wielded chakra-enhanced swordplay.
Currently existing clans who have a strong samurai vibe to them could be
explained as having been influenced by this history.

And Sacred Grounds could explain how these uncontrollable abilities developed-
these were simply individuals who had "Inherited" it from their homelands.
The cloaked individual in Gifted Abilites is the scientist who expirimented on children in Expirimentation,
and who is offering to forcefully alter the genes of clans,
enabling their descendants to have a better chance of "Inheritance".
Inheritance. That is a seriously bitching name to call it.

So: A long time ago there was a giant shogunate.
There were only Samurai who used chakra for their kenjutsu.
Certain areas in the land were prone to releasing Chakra,
which could alter the flora, fauna, and people who inhabited them.
Sometimes people very rarely were born strongly connected
to this chakra.

Like Rising Moon, a boy who was born in what would eventually become Kazangakure,
currently known as the Land of Sulfur.
Due to the land overflowing with flaming, earthy chakra,
he was born with a Fire in him. When he was 12, he noticed that when his
emotions became unstable, things burned as he touched them. He struggled to control this,
afraid of how people would react. But eventually he was found out, and taken before the shogun.
He was put with others like him, overflowing with natural chakra, to be trained.
Eventually, he unlocked the potential to wield earth as well.
These would become sevenfold stronger over the course of his life.

Part 2 (Takes place decades after shinobi clan's uprising as explained in Breaking Bonds)
Yokaze was a scientist from the Land of Crows who had kidnapped certain children,
descendants of a direct line born from Rising Moon himself.
He had expirimented on them, and though it had required their deaths,
he'd found a way to implant Rising Moon's potential in other shinobi born in the Land of Sulfur.
He took his work to the current leader there, and offered to forever alter certain individuals,
giving their children a chance to become strong.

New people born, like Rising Moon, had more access to the natural chakra of the land,
which meant more people would be born shinobi.
(This explains why you have to pick either Earth or Fire as your primary nature in Kazangakure.)
Eventually, some children who were born with Rising Moon's original natures,
Fire and Earth, displayed a unique ability Rising Moon had not had-
They could combine their natures, creating magma,
Much like how the earth combined heat and stone.

Yokaze decided to call this power "Inheritance".
We can also replace "Kekkei Genkai" with this,
like how you changed "Chidori" to "Lightning Ball".
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: Malix on March 01, 2017, 15:08:21
Im sorry to say this guys but there isn't going to be Chakra beasts of any type. Really we're trying to steer away from Naruto in this regard.
So no chakra beast to slay at all?

To clarify there wont be any bijuus or large scale chakra beasts like that. There may be smaller chakra beasts in the literal sense but you're not seeing a nine-tails running around. We'll think up other ideas for world events and bosses.
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: StriderOtaku on March 02, 2017, 00:05:59
C'mon people, let's make Breaking bonds win this thing. It's pretty close and first place atm would've been my third pick anyways.
That aside, a lack of enormous tailed beasts to slay like Remi put it, is a serious bummer. :(
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: Manuster on March 02, 2017, 05:16:15
Im sorry to say this guys but there isn't going to be Chakra beasts of any type. Really we're trying to steer away from Naruto in this regard.
So no chakra beast to slay at all?

To clarify there wont be any bijuus or large scale chakra beasts like that. There may be smaller chakra beasts in the literal sense but you're not seeing a nine-tails running around. We'll think up other ideas for world events and bosses.

Hmmmm, smaller scael chakra beasts....now that certainly sounds interesting...



C'mon people, let's make Breaking bonds win this thing. It's pretty close and first place atm would've been my third pick anyways.
That aside, a lack of enormous tailed beasts to slay like Remi put it, is a serious bummer. :(

Ew noooo, Breaking Bonds leaves  no room for growth, or additional lore. It's like - there was an emperor, shinobi rebelled. The End.

Whereas Sacred Grounds and Gifted Abilities have a whoole lot of room to grow, they both end on cliffhangers and leave alot more of "why is there chakra?" unanswered
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: StriderOtaku on March 02, 2017, 09:20:52
C'mon people, let's make Breaking bonds win this thing. It's pretty close and first place atm would've been my third pick anyways.
That aside, a lack of enormous tailed beasts to slay like Remi put it, is a serious bummer. :(

Ew noooo, Breaking Bonds leaves  no room for growth, or additional lore. It's like - there was an emperor, shinobi rebelled. The End.

Whereas Sacred Grounds and Gifted Abilities have a whoole lot of room to grow, they both end on cliffhangers and leave alot more of "why is there chakra?" unanswered
From what I read, breaking bond leaves even more room for growth if anything. They haven't even ventured into the reason people got chakra in the first place so imo it's even more flexible than the other two because anything can still be added.  Like a tv show where you only know certain things at the start and slowly more and more about the world its set in is revealed to you.
And besides that, it seems like the most logical not overly dramatic or cliche lore on the list, just my opinion tho.
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: DarthTyrael on March 02, 2017, 15:32:22
In regards to breaking bonds, the chakra natures could've occured due to acclimatisation of their chakra to their new climates, tapping into the chakra of their surroundings gave them a new form.
Something of that sort.

Personally I liked 1 and 7 because they depict a traditional Japanese ruling system, then springs off into the 'Naruto' ruling system. Really cool.
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: gevanei on March 02, 2017, 17:02:03
Breaking bonds and gracious deity seems like the best approach although I like em all
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: adithya on March 02, 2017, 19:45:27
C'mon people, let's make Breaking bonds win this thing. It's pretty close and first place atm would've been my third pick anyways.
That aside, a lack of enormous tailed beasts to slay like Remi put it, is a serious bummer. :(

Ew noooo, Breaking Bonds leaves  no room for growth, or additional lore. It's like - there was an emperor, shinobi rebelled. The End.

Whereas Sacred Grounds and Gifted Abilities have a whoole lot of room to grow, they both end on cliffhangers and leave alot more of "why is there chakra?" unanswered
From what I read, breaking bond leaves even more room for growth if anything. They haven't even ventured into the reason people got chakra in the first place so imo it's even more flexible than the other two because anything can still be added.  Like a tv show where you only know certain things at the start and slowly more and more about the world its set in is revealed to you.
And besides that, it seems like the most logical not overly dramatic or cliche lore on the list, just my opinion tho.

Dude when the actual lore is being written it will end with the shinobi rising. And there will be no explanation for chakra. If your point is the fact that players will make the lore for that I'm sure you'd rather play in a world where people know what chakra is and will help you enable your abilities properly rather than- well what's the alternative?
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: adithya on March 02, 2017, 19:48:41
In regards to breaking bonds, the chakra natures could've occured due to acclimatisation of their chakra to their new climates, tapping into the chakra of their surroundings gave them a new form.
Something of that sort.

Personally I liked 1 and 7 because they depict a traditional Japanese ruling system, then springs off into the 'Naruto' ruling system. Really cool.

If the game is going for a massively naruto inspired theme rather than just borrowing elements from it then sure. That seems reasonable. This poll seems to be people choosing the thing closest to naruto rather than something original and unique. Just my opinion honestly. Dont mean to call you out or anything
Title: Re: SLO General History Lore Candidates
Post by: Manuster on March 02, 2017, 20:00:37
In regards to breaking bonds, the chakra natures could've occured due to acclimatisation of their chakra to their new climates, tapping into the chakra of their surroundings gave them a new form.
Something of that sort.

Personally I liked 1 and 7 because they depict a traditional Japanese ruling system, then springs off into the 'Naruto' ruling system. Really cool.

If the game is going for a massively naruto inspired theme rather than just borrowing elements from it then sure. That seems reasonable. This poll seems to be people choosing the thing closest to naruto rather than something original and unique. Just my opinion honestly. Dont mean to call you out or anything

yare yare yare, I get that naruto is heavily Japanese inspired but SLO won't be. 1 and even 5 have heavy similarities to Japan. 2 and 3 focus more on the idea of chakra and leave any ideas of culture completely up in the air (or just unmentioned which is what imo is the best option)