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The Akuma Raitongu [Akurai] Clan
« on: January 16, 2017, 17:05:42 »
Clan name:Akuma Raitongu [Akurai]

Clan logo:

Founder: AKU AKURAI

Leader:Khazei Akurai

Affiliation: It is part of Hidden Thunder

Clan history: The legendary thunder god was in love...
he had children named Aku and Tenshi
Aku and Tenshi always saw each other as rivals. One day, aku really became angered and used third Jutsukyushugan jutsu (Black Thunder) on tenshi...
Tenshi died and thunder god was on his deathbed too. He never learned of  tenshi's death.
Aku becomed regretful with time,and he found the word:
So many people black and white,but there are  some people model too,grey people..
Khazei,Ellzei,Jenizei were the children of Aku They are not as powerful as their father yet...
But we're now the leader of the clan and they will become powerful someday.

Unique traits: Red or White hair

Strengths: Genjutsu and Ninjutsu

Weaknesses: Standart Taijutsu

Rival clans: None yet

Allied clans: None yet

Rankings: Leader,asistant and members

Members:
Leader Khazei
Leader Ellzei
Leader Jenizei

Rules: Just Disipline.If you are weak you will die.

For Join:
Name:
Shinobi rank:
Age:
Traits:
Your message:
« Last Edit: January 17, 2017, 11:50:36 by Khazera »


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Re: The Akuma Raitongu [Akurai] Clan
« Reply #1 on: January 16, 2017, 17:50:34 »
Some things you might want to do:

Use the clan template which can be found: here.
And I wouldn't include anything such as clan jutsus / kekkei genkai (bloodline limits) simply due to the fact that you can't be certain that it will be in the game, or that your clan will posses it.
And above all, maybe work on the thread some more, make it look more appealing with some color, or bold text, just some things to make certain keywords stand out a bit more.
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To fix that logo just do this "[img height=400]http://i.imgur.com/7uB1IWt.png[/img]"


other than that, I wish you the best of luck with your clan.
« Last Edit: January 16, 2017, 17:52:11 by Nova »



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Re: The Akuma Raitongu [Akurai] Clan
« Reply #2 on: January 16, 2017, 18:09:01 »
thank you i will edit
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Re: The Akuma Raitongu [Akurai] Clan
« Reply #3 on: January 16, 2017, 20:35:22 »
Looks nice. you might want to elaborate a bit on clan history(that is if you want to), and then try and make the thread more appealing to new members.

But overall gj and best of luck.


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Re: The Akuma Raitongu [Akurai] Clan
« Reply #4 on: January 16, 2017, 22:21:10 »
yea, good luck man  ;D




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Re: The Akuma Raitongu [Akurai] Clan
« Reply #5 on: January 16, 2017, 22:50:28 »
The logo looks pretty cool. You should perhaps work on the post a bit to make it more appealing. Good luck anyways.
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Re: The Akuma Raitongu [Akurai] Clan
« Reply #6 on: January 16, 2017, 23:13:07 »
Good luck
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Re: The Akuma Raitongu [Akurai] Clan
« Reply #7 on: January 17, 2017, 00:43:25 »
Hey khazz! Just improvised on your post a bit to make it look a bit more fancy and corrected some grammatical errors too :) if you want you can use this code below.

Code: [Select]
[b]Clan name:[/b]Akuma Raitongu [Akurai]

[b]Clan logo:[/b][img height=400]http://i.imgur.com/7uB1IWt.png[/img]

[b]Founder:[/b] AKU AKURAI

[b]Leader:[/b]Khazei Akurai

[b]Affiliation:[/b] It is part of Hidden Thunder

[b]Clan history:[/b] The legendary thunder god was in love...
he had children named Aku and Tenshi
Aku and Tenshi always saw each other as rivals. One day, aku really became angered and used third Jutsukyushugan jutsu (Black Thunder) on tenshi...
Tenshi died and thunder god was on his deathbed too. He never learned of  tenshi's death.
Aku becomed regretful with time,and he found the word:
So many people black and white,but there are  some people model too,grey people..
Khazei,Ellzei,Jenizei were the children of Aku They are not as powerful as their father yet...
But we're now the leader of the clan and they will become powerful someday.

[b]Unique traits:[/b] Red or White hair

[b]Strengths:[/b] Genjutsu and Ninjutsu

[b]Weaknesses:[/b] Standart Taijutsu

[b]Rival clans:[/b] None yet

[b]Allied clans:[/b] None yet

[b]Rankings: [/b]Leader,asistant and members

[b]Members:[/b]
Leader Khazei
Leader Ellzei
Leader Jenizei

[b]Rules: [/b]Just Disipline.If you are weak you will die.

The new post will look like this...
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Clan name:Akuma Raitongu [Akurai]

Clan logo:
Founder: AKU AKURAI

Leader:Khazei Akurai

Affiliation: It is part of Hidden Thunder

Clan history: The legendary thunder god was in love...
he had children named Aku and Tenshi
Aku and Tenshi always saw each other as rivals. One day, aku really became angered and used third Jutsukyushugan jutsu (Black Thunder) on tenshi...
Tenshi died and thunder god was on his deathbed too. He never learned of  tenshi's death.
Aku becomed regretful with time,and he found the word:
So many people black and white,but there are  some people model too,grey people..
Khazei,Ellzei,Jenizei were the children of Aku They are not as powerful as their father yet...
But we're now the leader of the clan and they will become powerful someday.

Unique traits: Red or White hair

Strengths: Genjutsu and Ninjutsu

Weaknesses: Standart Taijutsu

Rival clans: None yet

Allied clans: None yet

Rankings: Leader,asistant and members

Members:
Leader Khazei
Leader Ellzei
Leader Jenizei

Rules: Just Disipline.If you are weak you will die.
I don't know whether the logo is visible or not ... anyways...
Good luck with your clan. Have fun ^^



Fixed the image/logo, as you put the wrong link there.
-Nova
« Last Edit: January 17, 2017, 08:19:26 by Nova »




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Re: The Akuma Raitongu [Akurai] Clan
« Reply #8 on: January 17, 2017, 02:01:20 »
Gluck with your clan! Hope it works out and growing soon!
« Last Edit: January 17, 2017, 02:04:46 by luckycmsn »
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Re: The Akuma Raitongu [Akurai] Clan
« Reply #9 on: January 17, 2017, 11:46:48 »
Hey khazz! Just improvised on your post a bit to make it look a bit more fancy and corrected some grammatical errors too :) if you want you can use this code below.

Code: [Select]
[b]Clan name:[/b]Akuma Raitongu [Akurai]

[b]Clan logo:[/b][img height=400]http://i.imgur.com/7uB1IWt.png[/img]

[b]Founder:[/b] AKU AKURAI

[b]Leader:[/b]Khazei Akurai

[b]Affiliation:[/b] It is part of Hidden Thunder

[b]Clan history:[/b] The legendary thunder god was in love...
he had children named Aku and Tenshi
Aku and Tenshi always saw each other as rivals. One day, aku really became angered and used third Jutsukyushugan jutsu (Black Thunder) on tenshi...
Tenshi died and thunder god was on his deathbed too. He never learned of  tenshi's death.
Aku becomed regretful with time,and he found the word:
So many people black and white,but there are  some people model too,grey people..
Khazei,Ellzei,Jenizei were the children of Aku They are not as powerful as their father yet...
But we're now the leader of the clan and they will become powerful someday.

[b]Unique traits:[/b] Red or White hair

[b]Strengths:[/b] Genjutsu and Ninjutsu

[b]Weaknesses:[/b] Standart Taijutsu

[b]Rival clans:[/b] None yet

[b]Allied clans:[/b] None yet

[b]Rankings: [/b]Leader,asistant and members

[b]Members:[/b]
Leader Khazei
Leader Ellzei
Leader Jenizei

[b]Rules: [/b]Just Disipline.If you are weak you will die.

The new post will look like this...
Quote
Clan name:Akuma Raitongu [Akurai]

Clan logo:
Founder: AKU AKURAI

Leader:Khazei Akurai

Affiliation: It is part of Hidden Thunder

Clan history: The legendary thunder god was in love...
he had children named Aku and Tenshi
Aku and Tenshi always saw each other as rivals. One day, aku really became angered and used third Jutsukyushugan jutsu (Black Thunder) on tenshi...
Tenshi died and thunder god was on his deathbed too. He never learned of  tenshi's death.
Aku becomed regretful with time,and he found the word:
So many people black and white,but there are  some people model too,grey people..
Khazei,Ellzei,Jenizei were the children of Aku They are not as powerful as their father yet...
But we're now the leader of the clan and they will become powerful someday.

Unique traits: Red or White hair

Strengths: Genjutsu and Ninjutsu

Weaknesses: Standart Taijutsu

Rival clans: None yet

Allied clans: None yet

Rankings: Leader,asistant and members

Members:
Leader Khazei
Leader Ellzei
Leader Jenizei

Rules: Just Disipline.If you are weak you will die.
I don't know whether the logo is visible or not ... anyways...
Good luck with your clan. Have fun ^^



Fixed the image/logo, as you put the wrong link there.
-Nova
thank you dude :D
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Re: The Akuma Raitongu [Akurai] Clan
« Reply #10 on: January 17, 2017, 18:03:19 »
@Toratsume Nyshn you're a goddamn angel, +rep
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