Ignore the hate buddy, you got a great thing going here!!!!
I've even +repped to show how much I like the idea!!!!
One little tip though:
Maybe change the yellow and white font as that is hard to read?
And having an afro as a requirement may restrict you on what members could join. What if one of the best kenjutsu users are bald?
As cool as your organisation logo is, maybe try reduce the size?
End your life?
You could've proofread your story as there are a lot of spelling errors.
Maybe hold back a bit with tab and spacebar? There are a lot of unnecessary spaces that make the entire post disjointed and hard to read.
Read a couple other organisations to get an idea of how to present yourself to be taken seriously. No one will want to join an organisation that is so poorly presented.
Think about it this way; if you can't put effort into your own organisation, then why would anybody else?
Ty For The Suppurt alredy Edited
Used to Hate On My Posts
Not chaging the afro idea
Honestly, jokes aside, the idea is good, great actually. There's no other organisation that focuses only on Kenjutsu (afaik).
What is likely to hold you back were the initial comments, it doesn't really give off the best image.
NEVERTHELESS, good luck to the org, I personally hope you get some help with the story; not everyone's a born storywriter.
And hey, you like black guys with afros fighting with big ass swords, who am I to complain?
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