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Shinobi Life Online Category => Shinobi Life Online Character => Topic started by: Mars on January 05, 2015, 16:51:32

Title: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: Mars on January 05, 2015, 16:51:32
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Name: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Age: 12
Gender: Male
Height: 5'3
Weight: 90lbs
Facial hair: None
Hair color: Navy
Eye color: White
Blood type: A
Primary chakra nature: Wind
Village: Hidden Hill
Clan: Akagi
Good or evil at heart?: Good

Description of the character's personality:
Not serious even in crucial moments
My character will be like how I am, no roleplaying as another personality will occur.


Description of the character's history:
Kuria was born into the Ennia family. The family wasn't too well known as their heritage was from a distant land.
His father was a Chunin level Shinobi who took it upon himself to train Kuria since his birth to awaken his potential as a shinobi.
Days of training turned into months which turned into years.
At the age of 6 he was better than the children in the academy and even some Genin.

One night, as Kuria was walking home with both of his parents a hidden snow shinobi jumped out.
"you funkging earth hill shinobi fuck you"
The shinobi then lunged at Kuria's mother with a Kunai and his father jumped in the way to block it, getting hit himself.
Unable to prevent the backhand on his mother, Kuria and his father watched in despair to see a defenseless woman be hit to the ground.
With both parents out of the fight, the next target was clearly Kuria.
Kuria locked eyes with his assailant and was fuming with rage.
He heard his father shout "Do it Kuria, practice the technique we trained."
"We believe in you" his parents chorused.
This was something Kuria had to do. He took a deep breath and closed his eyes. He channeled his chakra to his arms and legs and screamed at his lungs "Kuria special att"- he was cut off as the shinobi dashed towards him and punched him in the throat.
The shinobi then ran towards his parents and killed both of them.

The shinobi ran away and Kuria was left with no parents
That kinda sucked but he got over it and didn't become an avenger or obsess over revenge because Kuria wasn't a pussy.

As his parents died he became the head of the branch of his clan.
Being exposed to such leadership and responsibility, one would only expect Kuria to be used to power and leading people.
This wasn't the case, Kuria didn't give a shit.

- At the age of 8 Kuria graduated the academy and became a Genin. After this Kuria excelled in training and missions, soon being promoted to Chunin in the exams held 2 months after his graduation.
Kuria was then ranked up to Jonin at the age of 10 because he got shit done and wasn't a little bitch.
At the age of 12 Kuria was elected as Kage of the hidden hill village.
Some say the election was rigged and he had an affair with the village elder, Nao Tsukegami (Batt).
Other's say he only got the position because there were no other decent candidates.

Neither of these rumours were true, Kuria became kage because he had swag and payed the bills

As stated earlier, Kuria wasn't good with responsibility and runs the village immaturely as that reflects his personality.
Title: Re: Kurai Himitsu
Post by: Leebz on January 05, 2015, 17:06:17
Fellow Himitsu brother! :D
I look forward to hearing more about this Character :P
He kinda reminds me of a character in my story, personality wise. Maybe I will change the name in the story from Yaron to Kurai :3
Title: Re: Kurai Himitsu
Post by: json243 on January 05, 2015, 17:16:56
Cool character Mars! Cant wait for the history
Title: Re: Kurai Himitsu
Post by: Mars on January 05, 2015, 17:37:28
Fellow Himitsu brother! :D
I look forward to hearing more about this Character :P
He kinda reminds me of a character in my story, personality wise. Maybe I will change the name in the story from Yaron to Kurai :3
Really? :D

Cool character Mars! Cant wait for the history
And thanks man :)
Title: Re: Kurai Himitsu
Post by: Leebz on January 05, 2015, 19:01:55
Fellow Himitsu brother! :D
I look forward to hearing more about this Character :P
He kinda reminds me of a character in my story, personality wise. Maybe I will change the name in the story from Yaron to Kurai :3
Really? :D

Yeah bro :P
I don't continue the story no more but I'd prefer to have you in it than a made up name like 'Yaron' xD
I'ma change it to Kurai now :3
Title: Re: Kurai Himitsu
Post by: Kai on January 05, 2015, 19:04:50
Nice! :D, i'm sure the history will be great so i can't wait for it!
Title: Re: Kurai Himitsu
Post by: Mars on January 07, 2015, 17:17:24
Nice! :D, i'm sure the history will be great so i can't wait for it!
Thanks

Story has been added
Title: Re: Kurai Himitsu
Post by: Kai on January 07, 2015, 17:32:56
The story was great! :D, you didn't let anyone down!
Title: Re: Kurai Himitsu
Post by: Leebz on January 07, 2015, 21:56:07
Amazing story bro! You could make a fanfic from this. I'd love to hear what he does next :)
Title: Re: Kurai Himitsu
Post by: Mars on January 09, 2015, 17:49:28
Amazing story bro! You could make a fanfic from this. I'd love to hear what he does next :)
Thanks man:)
Title: Re: Kurai Himitsu
Post by: Cedie on January 10, 2015, 08:26:13
I like the way Kurai jabs the air, so passionate.
Title: Re: Kurai Himitsu
Post by: Mars on January 11, 2015, 11:42:50
I like the way Kurai jabs the air, so passionate.
The most beautiful jab in history.
(http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2015/008/1/9/g5z4p_by_loewyrs-d8d41j3.gif)
Title: Re: Kurai Himitsu
Post by: CaptainSpoon on January 11, 2015, 13:13:02
So graceful, just wow.
Title: Re: Kurai Himitsu
Post by: Mars on January 30, 2015, 21:15:32
Quick update, friendly reminder. This is the V.1 Kurai
The first of it's kind.
The original prototype.
Not even a prototype.
Better than a prototype.
Title: Re: Kurai Himitsu
Post by: Mars on February 05, 2015, 07:41:43
This is an interesting character. I liked how Kurai basically became a shinobi because he was inspired by Raika. Also, the detail that you put into the chunin exam was pretty awesome, I especially liked your description of the techniques. Furthermore, the way that Kurai and his teammates pay for their ignorance was kind of neat, if a little bit confusing.  The construction of the story was also pretty solid, though you may want to edit "indisguindished" and replace it with "undistinguished"?

I have a question, could I tie in this chunin exam with my character's history? If possible, I want Raisho and Shingen to have been in the same class as Raika so I could match the chunin exam events (my chunin exams will probably be held in part 3, unless part 3 gets really complex and long-winded) in both Kurai and Raisho's history.

Yukigakure POWAAAAAA!!!!  8)
That would be fine, in fact that would be really cool!
Thanks for the feedback man :)
Title: Re: Kuria Himitsu
Post by: Mars on April 04, 2016, 16:20:32
Updated character picture
Title: Re: Kuria Himitsu
Post by: Sanji on April 04, 2016, 16:25:02
Updated character picture
lol,it look nice, you prev xD
Title: Re: Kuria Himitsu
Post by: Ken on April 04, 2016, 16:27:25
AWWWWW! YASSSSSSSS!
Title: Re: Kuria Himitsu
Post by: taigakun on April 04, 2016, 17:35:49
Hahah that pic tho ;) cool character Marsy-kun
Title: Re: Kuria Himitsu
Post by: Kamashe on April 04, 2016, 18:11:06
Hahah that pic tho ;) cool character Marsy-kun
Who is taigakun just notcied he was apart of the forum
Title: Re: Kuria Himitsu
Post by: SirTroll on April 04, 2016, 18:23:22
Liked old one. -rep
Title: Re: Kuria Himitsu
Post by: taigakun on April 04, 2016, 18:41:22
Hahah that pic tho ;) cool character Marsy-kun
Who is taigakun just notcied he was apart of the forum

Really?? Then u must be newer than i thought lel
Title: Re: Kuria Himitsu
Post by: SirTroll on April 04, 2016, 18:42:57
Hahah that pic tho ;) cool character Marsy-kun
Who is taigakun just notcied he was apart of the forum

Really?? Then u must be newer than i thought lel
He's also banned now
Title: Re: Kuria Himitsu
Post by: taigakun on April 04, 2016, 18:43:42
Hahah that pic tho ;) cool character Marsy-kun
Who is taigakun just notcied he was apart of the forum

Really?? Then u must be newer than i thought lel
He's also banned now


Lol RIP
Title: Re: Kuria Himitsu
Post by: Mars on April 05, 2016, 00:59:32
Just because someone doesn't post often, doesn't mean they're not a member of the community.
I consider Taiga as much of a member as I do the people who frequently post. I know Kamashe is banned now, just making a point.
Title: Re: Kuria Himitsu
Post by: Kodai on April 05, 2016, 01:01:58
Just because someone doesn't post often, doesn't mean they're not a member of the community.
I consider Taiga as much of a member as I do the people who frequently post. I know Kamashe is banned now, just making a point.
nice char u have @Mars
Title: Re: Kuria Himitsu
Post by: Mars on April 05, 2016, 01:13:42
nice char u have @Mars
Thanks buddy!
Title: Re: Kuria Himitsu
Post by: Mercury on June 21, 2016, 22:36:03
update this
Title: Re: Kuria Himitsu
Post by: Manuster on June 22, 2016, 00:36:50
update this

@Mars

And that's an order.
Title: Re: Kuria Kaiyo
Post by: Mars on October 19, 2016, 22:57:13
New character design.
Thanks Rapho!

I changed the face and body proportions but that's it :D

Going to work on the history, someone pls help!
Title: Re: Kuria Kaiyo
Post by: Diamond Lee on October 19, 2016, 23:35:36
youngest kage ever in SLO? Call him yagura
Title: Re: Kuria Kaiyo
Post by: Mars on October 20, 2016, 09:25:24
youngest kage ever in SLO? Call him yagura
Yagura is pretty badass tbh
Title: Re: Kuria Kaiyo
Post by: Manuster on October 20, 2016, 16:02:06
"Description of the character's personality:
Not serious even in crucial moments
My character will be like how I am, no roleplaying as another personality will occur."


Didn't think anyone was gonna be roleplaying though O.o I thought everyone's character was just them.
Title: Re: Kuria Kaiyo
Post by: Tsunayoshi on October 20, 2016, 16:25:28
Konohuro is gonna be role playing a lot.


Nice character marss
Title: Re: Kuria Kaiyo
Post by: Mars on October 20, 2016, 17:34:36
"Description of the character's personality:
Not serious even in crucial moments
My character will be like how I am, no roleplaying as another personality will occur."


Didn't think anyone was gonna be roleplaying though O.o I thought everyone's character was just them.

Lots of people describe their characters as cool, smart, strategical, funny, kind, mysterious.
Out of those with said descriptions, how many are really like that as a person?
Title: Re: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: Tsunayoshi on December 11, 2016, 12:28:00
Nice lore m8
Title: Re: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: Fraudulent on December 11, 2016, 12:37:09
Lots of people describe their characters as cool, smart, strategical, funny, kind, mysterious.
Out of those with said descriptions, how many are really like that as a person?
Part of the reason why I decided to make a new character that reflects me much better.
Nice lore.
Title: Re: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: Mars on December 11, 2016, 13:10:22
Nice lore m8
Lots of people describe their characters as cool, smart, strategical, funny, kind, mysterious.
Out of those with said descriptions, how many are really like that as a person?
Part of the reason why I decided to make a new character that reflects me much better.
Nice lore.
thanks m8s it took lots of work
Title: Re: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: Hiruko on December 11, 2016, 13:56:54
Much wow, Much kappa
Title: Re: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: StriderOtaku on December 11, 2016, 16:39:53
"Description of the character's personality:
Not serious even in crucial moments
My character will be like how I am, no roleplaying as another personality will occur."


Didn't think anyone was gonna be roleplaying though O.o I thought everyone's character was just them.

Lots of people describe their characters as cool, smart, strategical, funny, kind, mysterious.
Out of those with said descriptions, how many are really like that as a person?
This is a roleplaying game, amirite?
Title: Re: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: Hiruko on December 11, 2016, 16:53:51
"Description of the character's personality:
Not serious even in crucial moments
My character will be like how I am, no roleplaying as another personality will occur."


Didn't think anyone was gonna be roleplaying though O.o I thought everyone's character was just them.

Lots of people describe their characters as cool, smart, strategical, funny, kind, mysterious.
Out of those with said descriptions, how many are really like that as a person?
This is a roleplaying game, amirite?
XD. He meant his reallife personality, not like others taking their ingame character personality :)
Title: Re: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: StriderOtaku on December 11, 2016, 17:40:51
"Description of the character's personality:
Not serious even in crucial moments
My character will be like how I am, no roleplaying as another personality will occur."


Didn't think anyone was gonna be roleplaying though O.o I thought everyone's character was just them.

Lots of people describe their characters as cool, smart, strategical, funny, kind, mysterious.
Out of those with said descriptions, how many are really like that as a person?
This is a roleplaying game, amirite?
XD. He meant his reallife personality, not like others taking their ingame character personality :)
alright
Title: Re: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: Mars on December 11, 2016, 21:36:55
A roleplaying game is where you roleplay as your character e.g as a ninja, true.

Roleplaying as a personality that does not belong to you will be pretty difficult.

If you're positive, chatty and love making friends you're going to find it hard to roleplay as a negative, silent person who hates people.
All I'm saying is that my in-game character will represent myself. This will make the game easier and I'll feel comfortable playing. I don't want to be constantly asking myself "what would Kuria say in this situation", I just want to say what I'd say. I'm gonna be me homie
Title: Re: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: StriderOtaku on December 11, 2016, 21:56:39
A roleplaying game is where you roleplay as your character e.g as a ninja, true.

Roleplaying as a personality that does not belong to you will be pretty difficult.

If you're positive, chatty and love making friends you're going to find it hard to roleplay as a negative, silent person who hates people.
All I'm saying is that my in-game character will represent myself. This will make the game easier and I'll feel comfortable playing. I don't want to be constantly asking myself "what would Kuria say in this situation", I just want to say what I'd say. I'm gonna be me homie
aight but some people are pros
Title: Re: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: Reminance on December 12, 2016, 00:30:10
A roleplaying game is where you roleplay as your character e.g as a ninja, true.

Roleplaying as a personality that does not belong to you will be pretty difficult.

If you're positive, chatty and love making friends you're going to find it hard to roleplay as a negative, silent person who hates people.
All I'm saying is that my in-game character will represent myself. This will make the game easier and I'll feel comfortable playing. I don't want to be constantly asking myself "what would Kuria say in this situation", I just want to say what I'd say. I'm gonna be me homie
Aight this makes sense and imma be doing this as well bruv.
Title: Re: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: Toratsume Nyshn on December 12, 2016, 01:18:13
imo most of the angel ninjas (the good guys I mean :P ) will be playing based on what they are irl. Its the bad guys who go rogue who'll do the rp.....unless....you know..... they are some psycopathic murderer/klepto/corrupt officials/rapists/conspirator who is planning to start WW3 and become the lord of earth/assasins for hire/assasins not for hire/Donald Trump/barbarian burglar/ serial killer or any other freak I missed, in there real life. 
Title: Re: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: takami on December 12, 2016, 11:19:49
how did you create the image of the character?
Title: Re: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: Mars on December 12, 2016, 12:48:00
how did you create the image of the character?

A very talented artist name RaphoZentel made it for me!
Title: Re: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: StriderOtaku on December 12, 2016, 21:13:28
imo most of the angel ninjas (the good guys I mean :P ) will be playing based on what they are irl. Its the bad guys who go rogue who'll do the rp.....unless....you know..... they are some psycopathic murderer/klepto/corrupt officials/rapists/conspirator who is planning to start WW3 and become the lord of earth/assasins for hire/assasins not for hire/Donald Trump/barbarian burglar/ serial killer or any other freak I missed, in there real life. 
aye
Title: Re: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: Manuster on December 13, 2016, 11:28:46

Some say the election was rigged and he had an affair with the village elder, Nao Tsukegami (Batt).


He couldn't get with Batt if he tried.
Title: Re: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: Sanji on December 13, 2016, 15:38:18

Some say the election was rigged and he had an affair with the village elder, Nao Tsukegami (Batt).


He couldn't get with Batt if he tried.
Mars and Batt Are Even In Game Skills,But From What I Saw Mostly Mars wins,So I Will Only See A Rasterd Talking Who Don't Know Shit,So Stfu And Go Away Nicely.



anyways that was great mars!
Title: Re: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: StriderOtaku on December 13, 2016, 16:23:20

Some say the election was rigged and he had an affair with the village elder, Nao Tsukegami (Batt).


He couldn't get with Batt if he tried.
Mars and Batt Are Even In Game Skills,But From What I Saw Mostly Mars wins,So I Will Only See A Rasterd Talking Who Don't Know Shit,So Stfu And Go Away Nicely.



anyways that was great mars!
don't be taking shit personal bruv. ffs chill
Title: Re: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: Sanji on December 13, 2016, 16:25:04

Some say the election was rigged and he had an affair with the village elder, Nao Tsukegami (Batt).


He couldn't get with Batt if he tried.
Mars and Batt Are Even In Game Skills,But From What I Saw Mostly Mars wins,So I Will Only See A Rasterd Talking Who Don't Know Shit,So Stfu And Go Away Nicely.



anyways that was great mars!
don't be taking shit personal bruv. ffs chill
dont worry m8 like you said i dont take any of his shit personal lul :D
Title: Re: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: Mars on December 31, 2016, 13:19:29
story updated a bit lol
Title: Re: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: takami on December 31, 2016, 15:15:01
Nice and funny history and
Kuria became kage because he had swag and payed the bills
ahahahah
Title: Re: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: Hiruko on January 01, 2017, 16:25:40
Kurias special att- what does att mean? Can you explain that? I dont get it. Its to complicated.
Title: Re: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: takami on January 01, 2017, 16:46:26
He was about to say "kuria special attack" but was discontinued, so "kuria special att"
Title: Re: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: Hiruko on January 01, 2017, 20:38:07
He was about to say "kuria special attack" but was discontinued, so "kuria special att"
Shit, didnt knew that, tahnk yu
Title: Re: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: takami on January 01, 2017, 20:57:34
He was about to say "kuria special attack" but was discontinued, so "kuria special att"
Shit, didnt knew that, tahnk yu

no problem :-)
Title: Re: Kuria Ennia Yuishi
Post by: Mars on January 01, 2017, 22:15:20
takami knows his shit