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Takumi Himitsu
« on: November 29, 2016, 16:05:05 »
Name: Takumi Himitsu
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Height: 1.76
Weight:70
Hairstyle: Short
Facial hair: No
Hair color: Red
Eye color: Red
Blood type: Unknown
Primary chakra nature: Fire
Secondary chakra nature: Lightning
Hidden Village: Hidden Hill
Clan:Himitsu
Good or evil at heart?: good, but not too

Description of the character's personality: A very calm person, usually detached from other people, but he has some friends and will not hesitate to risk his life to protect them. He follows orders without hesitation, whatever it is. Always trying to measure his strength to get better, and would do anything to aquire more power .... if it is to be able to protect friends or greed of power, even he knows ...

Description of the character's history: -deleted-

Combat style: Usually it ends once his opponent using genjutsu and fire style jutsu, but is also known for its speed and dexterity with sword. When fighting immediately tries to understand the opponent's fighting style and to understand the weak points.




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« Last Edit: March 06, 2017, 16:34:52 by takami »





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Re: Takumi Ukita
« Reply #1 on: November 30, 2016, 14:35:03 »
Description of the character's personality:/

Description of the character's history:/

What an emotional past(!)

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Re: Takumi Ukita
« Reply #2 on: November 30, 2016, 14:43:32 »
much simple much wow, much kappa




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« Reply #3 on: November 30, 2016, 15:35:28 »
dope character. I luv his personality
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Re: Takumi Ukita
« Reply #4 on: November 30, 2016, 22:48:44 »
noted
PS. Population census will b out by 14th of December (thats when my main papers will get over :P )



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« Reply #5 on: November 30, 2016, 23:19:14 »
much simple much wow, much kappa
nice char mein




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Re: Takumi Ukita
« Reply #6 on: November 30, 2016, 23:47:50 »
Welcome to the forum.
I would suggest adding some more information on your character profile.
If you need help, refer to the links in my signature, they should help you get started.

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Re: Takumi Ukita
« Reply #7 on: December 05, 2016, 17:58:46 »
actually is a really incomplete description, so I will try to work of the imagination to add things ... I hope it will be a decent thing because I'll use the translator :)



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Re: Takumi Ukita
« Reply #8 on: December 20, 2016, 17:45:15 »
Damn! I like the new story! :D
Killed his baby brother though... That's sad D:

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« Reply #9 on: December 20, 2016, 19:24:26 »
Wow. Killing his younger brother...dark, very dark.
Its wayy more interesting now.
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Re: Takumi Ukita
« Reply #10 on: December 20, 2016, 19:47:59 »
Thank you, in the future I will try to expand the story and make it very long and more detailed.



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« Reply #11 on: December 23, 2016, 01:02:31 »
UPDATED



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Re: Takumi Himitsu
« Reply #12 on: December 23, 2016, 01:30:40 »
Nice work Takami. Looking forward to reading more of the chapters man
Good job




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Re: Takumi Himitsu
« Reply #13 on: December 23, 2016, 01:33:44 »
Damn.
That is a really good story.
I can't wait to see more!

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Re: Takumi Himitsu
« Reply #14 on: December 23, 2016, 12:35:46 »
Dialogue is a little hard to follow (I assume English isn't your first language, so it's not a big issue.) but other than that, great story man. :)

 

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