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mamita:
Okagakure, 04:30
The Second Quarter
Mitsuru Aiko sat on the edge of the roof, peering into the alley below him.
Walking through it were two shinobi. One a young woman, the other a tall,
thin man. Their identities did not interest him- it was the green scarves
on their arms that he noted.

Halfway through the alley, the pair were abruptly suprised by
Mitsuru dropping down in front of them.
"Bit late to be out walking here, isn't it?"
The girl stumbled back. "Who the hell are you?"
He grinned, but it was not a nice grin.
"Doesn't matter. What matters is that you need to leave."
The larger man spoke.
"There's no need for violence- We're just passing through. We have business-"
"Then it can wait until morning." The girl spoke again. "What's it matter to you anyway?
This is neutral territory!" Mitsuru smirked. "Not anymore. We'll be moving in soon.
Now either leave, or-" Here he fingered the kunai hilt sticking out of his hip pocket-
"Suffer my wrath." The larger man spoke again.
"We don't have time for this. We need to move, Miku."
She pulled out a knife and snarled, "We don't have to take this from him. It's two on one."
The man sighed, and took in hand the large axe strapped to his back.
Mitsuru changed his stance, getting better footing.
The girl began edging forward. For a moment, there was silence.
A small stone dropped from the rooftops above.
The larger man rushed forward, swinging his axe downwards.
Mitsuru rolled to the side and whipped out his kunai,
blocking the girl's knife as she tried to stab him. She had moved fast,
on him in the time he had spent dodging. *Quick girl.* he thought.
He jumped back, then flipped sideways, setting his feet on the alley wall.
He ran upwards as the larger man narrowly missed his head with the axe,
cracking the concrete wall. He jumped down and landed on the man's shoulders,
stabbing him in the shoulder with the kunai. The man grunted and quickly jumped,
arcing backwards and ending with him landing squarely on Mitsuru.
He then rolled on top of him and pinned him down,
then began punching Mitsuru in the head. His nose broken,
Mitsuru managed to reach up and yank the kunai out of the man's shoulder.
The other man yelled, and attempted to grab Mitsuru's wrist, narrowly missing.
Mitsuru then was about to try slashing his throat,
but his hand was abruptly struck by the girl's knife. Pinned down by both, panicking,
he arched upwards with all his might, breaking out of the girl's grip
and bashing the man's nose in with his forehead. The larger man rolled off of him,
and Mitsuru's legs whipped upwards, striking the girl in the stomach and knocking her back.
He flipped onto his feet, then began forming hand signs. *Lightning Ball!*
His hand began emitting electricity weakly,
and he rushed forward at the man and gripped his head.
The man began thrashing as his body absorbed the electric current.
The girl jumped onto Mitsuru and attempted to stab his head,
but only scored a light cut on the side of it.  He let go of the man and grabbed her wrist.
She spasmed and fell off as he thrashed, dislodging her bodily hold on him.
He then grabbed one of her legs, pulling it up,
and with a mighty kick- *CRACK* -it broke at the knee under his foot.
She screamed in pain as he dropped it.
He reached to pick up his kunai from the ground, when suddenly-
A knee came out of frigging nowhere and obliterated his nose.
Falling back, Mitsuru saw Kuria Yuishi, the Kage of Okagakure,
staring down at him with an impassive expression on his face.
The boy looked on as Mitsuru yelled in rage,
disregarding the fact that the *KAGE* of all people had just appeared to disrupt their fight. He quickly attempted to get up, only to have Kuria whip his foot sideways at his head,
dislocating his jaw with an incredibly quick blow. Overcome by pure pain,
he fell back, staring at Kuria with hatred in his eyes.
The girl and the other man were now on their feet,
and staring in amazement at the Hidden Hill Kage.
Kuria looked at them silently, then when Mitsuru began moaning, spoke. "Shut up."
Mitsuru did, shocked. Kuria looked at the pair and began speaking again.
"What are you doing here?" The pair looked at each other,
then the girl began talking, "We were just-" The larger man cut her off.
"We have business in the west part of the village."
Kuria looked down at Mitsuru. "You should have waited until morning."
The larger man sighed.  "It's urgent. A friend is sick and needs our help."
Kuria then turned his attention to Mitsuru.
"And what the hell is he doing here? This isn't Akai Kumo territory."
The girl explained, "He said they were moving in on this place."
Kuria looked at Mitsuru, and he was suddenly aware of a very cold sensation in his stomach.
"This doesn't belong to your people. I only remember... giving you the first quarter."
Kuria smiled, and Mitsuru was afraid. "Seems Yori is getting a swollen head.
Perhaps it's time to remind him of his duties as a citizen in my village,
and what he owes me for not getting rid of him."
Kuria seemed to see what Mitsuru was thinking.
"Oh, don't worry. I'm not going to kill you."
Suddenly, two black-clad men dropped from the rooftops above.
Kuria gestured to the beaten shinobi lying before him.
"Take this man and the girl to a hospital." "As you wish, Kage."
They murmured. He looked at the larger man. "You may continue on your way..."
The man smiled gratefully. "It's Yoichi."

Next part will be coming soon.
Just to clarify:
In this story, the entirety village is split into four quarters, numbered 1 to 4.

Diamond Lee:
Cool! Keep it going!

Mars:
Loved it man, you should post more! :D

Toratsume Nyshn:

--- Quote from: Mars on November 28, 2016, 22:05:25 ---Loved it man, you should post more! :D

--- End quote ---
Yeah sure...
Jk :P

Gj mamita! That's a new concept and would love to see it continue!
Keep 'er going'!

Manuster:
"A knee came out of frigging nowhere and obliterated his nose."

this is great xD

make sure to include me ;) ;) I'm Okagakure too :DDD

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