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Shinbou Maeda
« on: May 11, 2015, 03:58:52 »
Name: Shinbou Maeda

Age: 24 years
Gender: Male
Height: 5' 11"
Weight: 193 pounds
Hairstyle: Straight, directional (top goes forward, left goes left, etc.)
Facial hair: No signifigant hair
Hair color: A mixture of Red and Blonde (perhaps a tad lighter than the image)
Eye color: Green (The image used did not have an option for eye color)
Blood type: A-
Primary chakra nature: Water Release
Village: Heizugakure
Clan: N/A
Good or evil at heart?: Closer to a "good" standard at heart.

Description of the character's personality: Tends to be stoic and direct in any situation other than relaxation. Oftentimes, if he is helpful or kind, there will be no recognition of it from him. When relaxed, or as close as is possible, tends to be loud and full of laughter.

Description of the character's history: (basic simply because there is not much of a world to base off of yet) Shinbou was born in Heizugakure, the Village Hidden by Haze. Joining the Shinobi Academy, Shinbou was recognized for a drive to knowledge, allowing him to succeed and become a Genin. He remained has remained as a Genin for the past years, choosing not to advance in rank to avoid attention.
 (If it sounds like a character that is not extremely talented or ambitious, or the like, it's because he isn't. I enjoy using characters that are pretty normal in skill.)
« Last Edit: May 15, 2015, 03:20:42 by TheUnknownCheese »


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Re: Shinbou Maeda
« Reply #1 on: May 12, 2015, 02:01:25 »

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Re: Shinbou Maeda
« Reply #2 on: May 14, 2015, 00:14:53 »
I like the sound of the character! I feel like he should be more ambitious though.
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Re: Shinbou Maeda
« Reply #3 on: May 15, 2015, 01:39:48 »
I like the character so far, however the history definitely could do with some improving, and having a visual representation of how he looks, as eliforth said, would improve the description of the character a lot.

The history doesn't have to be anything to do with villages etc. Part of it may be about eg. A traumatic experience he went through as a young child. I'm not sure, I just think that so far this shinobi is very ordinary, and unless that was what you were aiming for, you need something that differentiates it from the rest.

Still, sounds very nice so far!


 

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