You sound like you're trying to sing with one lung...
the cringe hit me with an uppercut, lol jk it sounds good
Nice one adi! :)
If you want to go hard and go big; buy a proper mic. And at first glance I thought this would be rap lol.
@Mars Life here is toxic, though quite exotic. Living every breath at my screen like I'm boxed in, sucked into the game known as Shinobi Life, it isn't real though it's just online but that's fine, smacking people in the face with Chidori but if you battle Mars I promise you'll be left sore see, he isn't weak shit 'cause he spent hours on the game, back then it was kinda lame, jousted people till he got into the hall of fame and back then Himitsu was more than a name.Hello, 911? pls Leebz set my house on fire xd hahah lol gg
So many clans and so many orgs and the game is still yet to have any lores but there is still many doors that yet to be open, game is patching to make it less broken and if you ask me, it's improving overnights even though the community gets into many fights we still live like a family just ask people about the community vs Sanji.
Aaaaand cba to continue lol. Idk if you can understand my flow or anything of it but it's pretty shitty.. yeah.. You probably wanted someone to actually make a rap and spit it on Youtube to an instrumental, right? Well give me a couple of weeks ;)Spoiler: show
@adithya I am always a fan of your singing ;oAll together not bad. I like your flow but it's still mediocre.
I 100% support you making a full song bruh.
@Mars Life here is toxic, though quite exotic. Living every breath at my screen like I'm boxed in, sucked into the game known as Shinobi Life, it isn't real though it's just online but that's fine, smacking people in the face with Chidori but if you battle Mars I promise you'll be left sore see, he isn't weak shit 'cause he spent hours on the game, back then it was kinda lame, jousted people till he got into the hall of fame and back then Himitsu was more than a name.
So many clans and so many orgs and the game is still yet to have any lores but there is still many doors that yet to be open, game is patching to make it less broken and if you ask me, it's improving overnights even though the community gets into many fights we still live like a family just ask people about the community vs Sanji.
Aaaaand cba to continue lol. Idk if you can understand my flow or anything of it but it's pretty shitty.. yeah.. You probably wanted someone to actually make a rap and spit it on Youtube to an instrumental, right? Well give me a couple of weeks ;)Spoiler: show
@adithya I am always a fan of your singing ;o
I 100% support you making a full song bruh.
@Mars Life here is toxic, though quite exotic. Living every breath at my screen like I'm boxed in, sucked into the game known as Shinobi Life, it isn't real though it's just online but that's fine, smacking people in the face with Chidori but if you battle Mars I promise you'll be left sore see, he isn't weak shit 'cause he spent hours on the game, back then it was kinda lame, jousted people till he got into the hall of fame and back then Himitsu was more than a name.
So many clans and so many orgs and the game is still yet to have any lores but there is still many doors that yet to be open, game is patching to make it less broken and if you ask me, it's improving overnights even though the community gets into many fights we still live like a family just ask people about the community vs Sanji.
Aaaaand cba to continue lol. Idk if you can understand my flow or anything of it but it's pretty shitty.. yeah.. You probably wanted someone to actually make a rap and spit it on Youtube to an instrumental, right? Well give me a couple of weeks ;)Spoiler: show
As much as your feedback was somewhat good... This was far from something I would be proud of. It was whatever I thought of I typed. As in no editing went into it nor effort. If I wanted I could probably make something a lot better but quite frankly there would be no point seeing as:@adithya I am always a fan of your singing ;oAll together not bad. I like your flow but it's still mediocre.
I 100% support you making a full song bruh.
@Mars Life here is toxic, though quite exotic. Living every breath at my screen like I'm boxed in, sucked into the game known as Shinobi Life, it isn't real though it's just online but that's fine, smacking people in the face with Chidori but if you battle Mars I promise you'll be left sore see, he isn't weak shit 'cause he spent hours on the game, back then it was kinda lame, jousted people till he got into the hall of fame and back then Himitsu was more than a name.
So many clans and so many orgs and the game is still yet to have any lores but there is still many doors that yet to be open, game is patching to make it less broken and if you ask me, it's improving overnights even though the community gets into many fights we still live like a family just ask people about the community vs Sanji.
Aaaaand cba to continue lol. Idk if you can understand my flow or anything of it but it's pretty shitty.. yeah.. You probably wanted someone to actually make a rap and spit it on Youtube to an instrumental, right? Well give me a couple of weeks ;)Spoiler: show
You've got the basic of rhyme (some the bars were forced just so they can rhyme), but if you want to make a higher grade rap; you'd have to get deeper meanings for your lyrics and add an instrumental in the background if you're serious.
I know this was all a joke but I like to criticize, especially when it's rap.
3. Rap isn't something I religiously do, it's a hobby. I don't aim to seek praise from anyone here.. Especially you of all people (No offence bud.. But you're not someone I consider close to at all... even online standards.)It's true we went a long way and things didn't turn out well, but I'm rather surprised you still hold a grudge about that.
Thanks anyway dude but I won't be making a debut album anytime soon.. No need to add an instrumental.. Lol.
@adithya I am always a fan of your singing ;olmfaooo the community vs Sanji? nice bars tho @Leebz
I 100% support you making a full song bruh.
@Mars Life here is toxic, though quite exotic. Living every breath at my screen like I'm boxed in, sucked into the game known as Shinobi Life, it isn't real though it's just online but that's fine, smacking people in the face with Chidori but if you battle Mars I promise you'll be left sore see, he isn't weak shit 'cause he spent hours on the game, back then it was kinda lame, jousted people till he got into the hall of fame and back then Himitsu was more than a name.
So many clans and so many orgs and the game is still yet to have any lores but there is still many doors that yet to be open, game is patching to make it less broken and if you ask me, it's improving overnights even though the community gets into many fights we still live like a family just ask people about the community vs Sanji.
Aaaaand cba to continue lol. Idk if you can understand my flow or anything of it but it's pretty shitty.. yeah.. You probably wanted someone to actually make a rap and spit it on Youtube to an instrumental, right? Well give me a couple of weeks ;)Spoiler: show
im on slo and my name is mars
im about to drop the sickest bars
my friends name is ken and he's about to drop some rhymes
he's been arrested seven times
i got a buddy his name is nova
he's kinda serious he ain't a joka
my homie remi likes to say anus
thanks to roguhanta he's now famous
limits is good right now yeah he's in yaiken
but not in full game because he's not asian
my tight buddy his name is sir troll
we also like to call him monsieur old
my homie shivraj is a leader of kata
he's a solemn fellow who has no need for chatter
don't forget darth who always smokes
i bet he does weed, maybe even coke
let's talk about sanji who likes his women
he gets them so wet they go swimmin
don't forget cedie, he makes soaps
the younger generations are the ones he gropes
what about snoopy, he has kids in his cellar
are they his slaves? he says "fucking hella!"
don't forget cedie, he makes soapslmfaoooo
the younger generations are the ones he gropes
wat a nuubSpoiler: show
Exactly what the title says. I've been told, and I know i got dem singing skillz Unfortunately though, I start sucking when it comes to being recorded. but hey, I plan on getting better. Here's a little taste:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HhMDCAL0uAY&feature=youtu.be (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HhMDCAL0uAY&feature=youtu.be)
EDIT
So I finally got done making the video :D
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v6aQABJLgyc (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v6aQABJLgyc)
Awesome adi, sometimes it seems like you're being a bit shy.
But otherwise it's pretty fucking awesome man, just go balls in on some parts
Its good :)Thanks Man :)
I especially liked the way you modified the high screech
Gotta need to work on the modulation ..... keep working hard
Sounds good, can't wait to hear more.
Keep going at it.
Keep going at it Adi ^^