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Offline yarden

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« on: December 18, 2016, 15:56:44 »
[/url]Name:Yarden Akaihono
Age:20
Gender:Male
Height:178 cm
Weight:59KG
Hairstyle:Medium\Long -Man Bun
Facial hair:none
Hair color:Black-Grey
Eye color:Black
Blood type:AB
Primary chakra nature: earth release.
Hidden Village: kazangakure
Clan:Agni
Good or evil at heart?:Good

Description of the character's personality:
A peaceful person.
Intelligent ninja.



Description of the character's history:
Yarden's father was a legend in kazangakure , he died saving the village from a criminal.
Yarden's father was named as"The red volcano" becouse of the legendary jutsu he made.
People says Yarden inherited his father's power.

After the death of the Red volcano , Yarden left alone.
His mom died 3 years before of Red volcano's death.
She died becouse of a disease.
Yarden had to survive  , this way of living made him the person he is .

The rest of yarden's life was a secret , Until the day he  became a shinobi.


« Last Edit: March 18, 2017, 15:44:39 by yarden »
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Re: Yarden
« Reply #1 on: December 18, 2016, 19:06:26 »
Eyy actually do like your character history in a weird way lol
If you want to make it more elaborate, you can expand more on your character description
But overall gg
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Re: Yarden
« Reply #2 on: December 18, 2016, 19:10:01 »
Nicu character. I find the history is a bit short, but thats your decision.
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Re: Yarden
« Reply #3 on: December 18, 2016, 19:43:56 »
might need a bit more work but nevertheless, it seems interesting. gj
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Re: Yarden
« Reply #4 on: December 18, 2016, 20:25:30 »
1. Fix ur profile pic
2. Add more history
3. Description is good
4. Everything else is ok.
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Re: Yarden
« Reply #5 on: December 18, 2016, 21:25:20 »
Welcome!
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Re: Yarden
« Reply #6 on: December 19, 2016, 00:56:15 »
Welcome to SLO! Enjoy your stay here.
Right now your character is looking pretty decent, however I would add a bit more information in the personality field if you wanted to go for a more detailed response, but I like the simplicity nonetheless.

The links in my signature should be useful when looking for a clan/org or simply want to chat in the Discord.
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Re: Yarden
« Reply #7 on: December 19, 2016, 02:15:32 »
Welcome to SLO!
Noted you're character :)
Stay active and have fun
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Re: Yarden
« Reply #8 on: December 19, 2016, 11:14:19 »
kasuke pls
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Re: Yarden
« Reply #9 on: December 19, 2016, 12:41:54 »
Quote from: Toratsume Nyshn on December 19, 2016, 02:15:32
Welcome to SLO!
Noted you're character :)
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Re: Yarden
« Reply #10 on: March 18, 2017, 15:50:48 »
Good stuff :3 Again the maker of this will be revealed soon
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