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Offline Tep

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Raiu Ishi
« on: May 07, 2017, 03:28:13 »
Name: Raiu Ishi
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Height: 5'9"
Weight: 125 lbs
Hairstyle: Spiked
Facial hair: None
Hair color: Periwinkle
Eye color: Blue
Blood type: B-
Primary chakra nature: Wind
Hidden Village: Kaminarigakure
Clan: Raiu
Good or evil at heart?: Good      

Description of the character's personality: Tries to be joyful and enthusiastic but ends up being awkard
or is sometimes cold and mingy.

Description of the character's history: Ever since he was little he's always tried his best to make friends,
but people would put him off as annoying or a nuisance. Growing up he slowly distanced himself from
people, unless they went for the long stretch to actually become friends with him. Whenever he made a
friend would try his best to keep them being their friend, afraid of being abandoned or betrayed like before...
(Note.Thanks for all the recommendations)
« Last Edit: May 07, 2017, 22:37:01 by Tep »


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Re: Jisatsu Ishi
« Reply #1 on: May 07, 2017, 04:32:23 »
Since this is your first thread:welcome :)

,,Hairstyle: (Picture)''
If you are just writing,,picture'',why did you write about the gender of your character,the hair/eye color the facial hair?
I mean,all of those things are visible on the picture as well,so you could also add,,picture''as a answer instead.
Looks a bit odd,to fill out everything normally,but add this kind of description for the hairstyle,just saying.
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Re: Jisatsu Ishi
« Reply #2 on: May 07, 2017, 08:06:07 »
Welcome to SLO and nice character.


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Re: Jisatsu Ishi
« Reply #3 on: May 07, 2017, 09:32:18 »
Decent character, nice job.
I had to check your posts to make sure you're actually in the Raiu clan, because there have been some cases where people throw in an existing clan name without even applying or being accepted in it.

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Re: Jisatsu Ishi
« Reply #4 on: May 07, 2017, 11:53:23 »
Looks good enough. Welcome to SLO, do enjoy your stay.
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Re: Jisatsu Ishi
« Reply #5 on: May 07, 2017, 12:02:17 »

Hairstyle: (Picture)


Might want to change that to spike/spiked/spikey. That would describe it best I suppose.

Hair color: Periwinkle


Odd name for a color o.O oddly specific

Final suggestion, in my opinion it would be best suited to change your last name (whether that be 'Jisatsu' if you took the traditional Japanese name display or 'Ishi' for the English name display) to 'Raiu', since that is the clan you chose to take part in, making them your family.

But again, that depends on you - it's just my personal preference.




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Re: Jisatsu Ishi
« Reply #6 on: May 07, 2017, 12:28:17 »
whats with these weird ass names like wot "Jisatsu Ishi" why such a weeb name m8

tho nice character and i like the drawing <3
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Re: Jisatsu Ishi
« Reply #7 on: May 07, 2017, 16:14:37 »
yooo welcome :3 nice char maybe if u want u can add more but is your choice xd
anyways, welcome again and enjoy your stay ^^




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