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Author Topic: The Sabre of Heizugakure  (Read 12271 times)

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Re: The Sabre of Heizugakure
« Reply #15 on: October 15, 2016, 03:39:52 »
Wow.


That was lit.

Okay no seriously I loved the action sequences I loved the way you described them, I could just see it playing out in my head. Man, you are really good at writing for a dude on a forum.
Let the power of youth wash over you and fill you with strength!


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Re: The Sabre of Heizugakure
« Reply #16 on: October 15, 2016, 15:56:04 »
Wow.


That was lit.

Okay no seriously I loved the action sequences I loved the way you described them, I could just see it playing out in my head. Man, you are really good at writing for a dude on a forum.

Thanks fam, means a lot.

I intend on writing more as I explore more ideas, everyone is encouraged to suggest some.


cant guarantee that it'll inspire me to write though
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Re: The Sabre of Heizugakure
« Reply #17 on: October 15, 2016, 17:19:25 »
Wow.


That was lit.

Okay no seriously I loved the action sequences I loved the way you described them, I could just see it playing out in my head. Man, you are really good at writing for a dude on a forum.

Thanks fam, means a lot.

I intend on writing more as I explore more ideas, everyone is encouraged to suggest some.


cant guarantee that it'll inspire me to write though
Well, you know, maybe you could write a story about in game events such as duels, or for example the Heathen event thats coming up... It would be cool to have lore about those things that we actually did in game.  Just a suggestion.
Let the power of youth wash over you and fill you with strength!


-lethal dankness

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Re: The Sabre of Heizugakure
« Reply #18 on: October 15, 2016, 18:39:45 »
Okay no seriously I loved the action sequences I loved the way you described them, I could just see it playing out in my head. Man, you are really good at writing for a dude on a forum.

This.



A short but sweet story, i  enjoyed reading it.

I'd love to read about an assassination mission or just an organization mission in general.

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Re: The Sabre of Heizugakure
« Reply #19 on: October 16, 2016, 09:59:45 »
awesome stuff!
another war short will be what I'd like... but yeah I could read some assassination biographies like kai suggested




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Re: The Sabre of Heizugakure
« Reply #20 on: October 16, 2016, 22:39:33 »
great to see you back to writing America
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Re: The Sabre of Heizugakure
« Reply #21 on: October 17, 2016, 15:19:59 »
Wow.


That was lit.

Okay no seriously I loved the action sequences I loved the way you described them, I could just see it playing out in my head. Man, you are really good at writing for a dude on a forum.

Thanks fam, means a lot.

I intend on writing more as I explore more ideas, everyone is encouraged to suggest some.


cant guarantee that it'll inspire me to write though
Well, you know, maybe you could write a story about in game events such as duels, or for example the Heathen event thats coming up... It would be cool to have lore about those things that we actually did in game.  Just a suggestion.

I'd have to be a prophet to foretell how your event will unfold.  ;)

Thanks for your support everyone, I am working on my own short stories as well as SLO arena (w/ snoopy) so expect that soon.
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Re: The Sabre of Heizugakure
« Reply #22 on: October 17, 2016, 15:36:27 »
Wow.


That was lit.

Okay no seriously I loved the action sequences I loved the way you described them, I could just see it playing out in my head. Man, you are really good at writing for a dude on a forum.

Thanks fam, means a lot.

I intend on writing more as I explore more ideas, everyone is encouraged to suggest some.


cant guarantee that it'll inspire me to write though
Well, you know, maybe you could write a story about in game events such as duels, or for example the Heathen event thats coming up... It would be cool to have lore about those things that we actually did in game.  Just a suggestion.

I'd have to be a prophet to foretell how your event will unfold.  ;)

Thanks for your support everyone, I am working on my own short stories as well as SLO arena (w/ snoopy) so expect that soon.
haha no lol I mean you spectate and then write a story after haha
Let the power of youth wash over you and fill you with strength!


-lethal dankness

 

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