Nice .
I'm sure you can see this, but the nose needs some work, needs to be more "anime"
etc.
if you're stuck on a nose or a mouth, I'd suggest googling nose and mouth styles in anime etc. and taking inspiration from that.
I think the hair to the left of his head should be bending downwards cause he's bending his head to the right, and the hair to the left of his head is sticking out
^the hair I'm talking about.
other than that, it's great , the eyes could be more detailed, but it's not necessary.
Haha yeah I know the nose fucked up and I just couldn't be bothered to do anything about that.
Also, when I started drawing him, I did him slightly smaller than I should have so I didn't really have that opportunity to make his face and hair that detailed.
But yeah I know where you're coming from and these are just rookie mistakes -- but thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it, and I'll continue to improve with further drawings.
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