Shinobi Life Online Category => Shinobi Life Online Character => Topic started by: Alanok on April 30, 2017, 21:09:35
Title: Alanok's Character
Post by: Alanok on April 30, 2017, 21:09:35
Originally posted on: April 30, 2017 Update: July 06, 2017 (added gallery; added 2 images made by NinjaMirage) Update: October 21, 2017 (added 1 image made by Alanok [the second one]; added links to the series 'Diaries of Fear')
1. Technical Info -1.1. Name : Osoreito (roughly meaning “fear thread”) -1.2. Age : 29 -1.3. Gender : Male -1.4. Blood Type : B- 2. Physical Body -2.1. Height : 211cm (~6’92ft) Tall -2.2. Weight : 112kg (~246lb) Chubby 3. Face -3.1. Hairstyle : Short and curvy -3.2. Facial Hair : Long Beard -3.3. Hair Color : Black -3.4. Eye Color : Brown 4. Affiliation -4.1. Village : Hokorigakure (hidden dust) -4.2. Clan : Zen’no no Sabaku https://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php?topic=3011.0 (https://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php?topic=3011.0) -4.3. Organization : _ 5. Behavior -5.1. Good or Evil at Heart? : Lawful neutral (good) -5.2. Description of the Character’s Personality : Proud, responsible and overly confident at times. Osoreito’s personality is sometimes regarded as shallow and his presence goes often unnoticed. Lastly, to note, Osoreito failed to inherit the ‘golden tongue' of the Zen’no, consequently being mockingly referred as ‘silver tongue’ by his sister. On a side note, he also likes to avoid conflict as much as he manage to. 6. Stats -6.1. Primary Chakra Nature : Wind release -6.2. Appearance : Light beige shirt, dark beige pants, black shoes and black coat. -6.3. Abilities --6.3.1. Specialization : Genjutsu --6.3.2. Average Level Skill : Shurikenjutsu --6.3.3. Bellow Average Level Skill : Wind Ninjutsu; Defensive Taijutsu -6.4. Equipment of Choice : Senbon 7. Description of the Character’s History -7.1. Family : Osoreito comes from a wealthy family, and have his grandma as the elder and guide of the family. The specific branch of the family he is part of became rich by selling rare resources and spices to villages around Hokorigakure. It is common [for the family] to pray before an altar dedicated to the Black Turtle spirit, of the north. -7.2. Childhood : Traditionally, the elders expect the family members to become either successful merchants or shinobi. Osoreito was disappointing at the eyes of the family elder, which considered him a black sheep for lacking in bargaining and combat skills. His younger sister, on the other hand was good at everything, from chakra control and martial arts to bargaining and eloquently impressing crowds, she filled the family with pride. -7.3. Near Past : Ultimately, Osoreito felt pressed to join the academy, at a late age however, as the family elder judged him worthless of the family pride. Although the act of joining the shinobi world was forced, Osoreito eventually become part of the intelligence division of Hokorigakure. -7.4. Family Members : His grandma, the widow elder of the family and former shinobi; His father, a merchant constantly traveling for business; His mother, former shinobi at a scout group in the village’s perimeter; His sister, the prodigy and hope of the family to get involved in merchant business.
(https://i.imgur.com/S3ylufE.jpg) By Alanok.
"The desert in our souls, like the desert of Hokorigakure, can be lonely sometimes. We don't want things to get troublesome, do we? So, farewell..." - Osoreito to a bandit, just before becoming a bunch of sand and fading into void thanks to genjutsu.
(https://i.imgur.com/JdWoYbF.jpg?1) By Alanok
Osoreito training his genjutsu skills in his home, next to paintings made by his sister. His body appears to be disappearing, but he already went somewhere else while leaving an illusion behind.
Links to the series 'Diaries of Fear': Diaries of Fear - Arc 1:https://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php?topic=3415.0 (https://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php?topic=3415.0) Diaries of Fear - Arc 2:https://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php?topic=3461.0 (https://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php?topic=3461.0) Diaries of Fear - Arc 3:https://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php?topic=3484.0 (https://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php?topic=3484.0)
Gallery
Here is a version made by NinjaMirage (or 'cmsurfer' if you have been around for enough time). My original draft made Osoreito look like a beggar, even though he is from a wealthy family. This version went to a different direction. From this angle he appears to have 'bewbs' and the hair is looking fabulous! (resized, original in page 2) Sponsored by L'Oréal Shinobi, because your ninja hair deserves the best! On a serious note, the 'Monkey King Enma' weapon was a nice touch.
(https://i.imgur.com/JzO3Ltd.png) (https://i.imgur.com/nipPp3a.png) By NinjaMirage
So far, this is the only different version of this character made by another member. I hope you enjoyed it.
Title: Re: Alanok's Character
Post by: AY0 on April 30, 2017, 21:24:03
Welcome to Slo Nice Drawing Man
Title: Re: Alanok's Character
Post by: IbrahimRafi on April 30, 2017, 21:27:50
Welcome, silver tongue.
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Post by: Tameshi Hinode on April 30, 2017, 21:38:34
Good character,welcome.
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Post by: Fraudulent on April 30, 2017, 21:42:18
Looks good, welcome to SLO. Enjoy your stay. The links in my signature should be useful.
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Post by: takami on April 30, 2017, 21:48:09
yoo welcome, nice detailed character and history ( maybe u can make it a bit longer and detailed xd ) and nice drawing :3 enjoy your stay
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Post by: StriderOtaku on April 30, 2017, 22:07:06
This is greatly detailed. Welcome, silver tongue :p
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Post by: CaioDarT on April 30, 2017, 22:11:06
Welcome to SLO, and the Dust village :)
Title: Re: Alanok's Character
Post by: Mars on April 30, 2017, 23:32:02
Woah this is organised really well. I came to make a troll post and was left very impressed. Touché...
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Post by: HiChikara on May 01, 2017, 03:51:34
Welcome chubby silver tongue. Cool drawing. :)
Title: Re: Alanok's Character
Post by: DarthTyrael on May 01, 2017, 06:14:32
Very nice, well detailed and good use of the branches' characteristics. If you have discord, you can join the village's discord by pressing on the logo
Welcome to SLO, Sabaku and lastly but most importantly, welcome to the Hidden Dust ^^
Title: Re: Alanok's Character
Post by: Manuster on May 01, 2017, 06:47:01
This is great, wonderfully detailed.
I'm getting really annoyed that the Sabaku Clan have pretty sensible members.
My partial jealousy aside, I see you don't have an organisation.
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Come hither.
Title: Re: Alanok's Character
Post by: Toratsume Nyshn on May 01, 2017, 09:05:53
Beard.. nice, and really liked the layout. Good job with the character :)
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Post by: taigakun on May 01, 2017, 09:58:21
Love how in-depth it is. Very good character and welcome to SLO
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Post by: sirpaul on May 01, 2017, 12:05:17
Nice. I like the detail. Welcome to SLO my friend.
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Post by: SirTroll on May 01, 2017, 18:44:42
Welcome to SLO, The Hidden Dust and lastly but most importantly, welcome to the Sabaku ^^
Fixed it for you :)
Welcome silver tongue. Enjoy your time here, and I hope you will eventually best your sister.
Title: Re: Alanok's Character
Post by: Alanok on May 01, 2017, 23:26:23
Thanks everyone who took the time to reply.
Thank you, M0NK3Y. Thank you Tameshi Hinode, the 5th leader of the Midori Ken. Thank you CaioDarT, fellow Dust member. Thank you DarthTyrael, I really appreciate your hospitality mister Kage. Thank you as well taigakun.
Thank you IbrahimRafi. Thank you StriderOtaku, leader of the Zen’no branch. Thank you SirTroll, really. I’ll take a little break and say that I am surprised the nickname ‘silver tongue’ became so popular, so quickly; it was not supposed to be a recurrent title haha, but it is ok, I’m not bothered at all.
Thank you Snoopy, these links really look useful after all. Thank you takami, I was considering the possibility of writing some stories when I started creating this character, if I get enough free-time to do so I’ll gladly post them in this forum.
Hey Mars, thank y… wait, what? I have mixed feelings about this comment since you admitted wanting to troll. Meh, thank you anyway. Thank you HiChikara, my drawing was supposed to look fatter, if you compare the height and weight to the drawing it look slightly disproportional but it is ok since the drawing is merely illustrative. Hello Manuster, thank you, was ‘hither’ supposed to mean heathen or maybe hitler? I appreciate the suggestion; I may consider an organization to join, eventually, in the future.
Thank you Toratsume Nyshn, the beard was supposed to make my character look elegant, in some of my other sketches however, it made my character look like a beggar… oops. Oh, and of course… …Thank you Fampo. I thought the font would look appropriate this size.
Again, thanks everyone.
Title: Re: Alanok's Character
Post by: NinjaMirage on July 06, 2017, 10:43:40
I saw your drawing and discription and thought it would look cool so I made a aviator for you!! You can use it or not!! Welcome to slo!
(https://i.imgur.com/JzO3Ltd.png)
He kinda reminded me of a kungfu master so I gave him the thirds bo/ monkey king Enma's transformation!
(https://i.imgur.com/nipPp3a.png)
Title: Re: Alanok's Character
Post by: Suroshi on July 06, 2017, 21:18:20
Yo lol if you want actually good looking 3D(IMVU) for pictures lemme know
Title: Re: Alanok's Character
Post by: NinjaMirage on July 06, 2017, 22:22:23
:p suroshi if you can do better then by all means!! But I dare you to find the elements of his character with the look in his drawing!!
Title: Re: Alanok's Character
Post by: Alanok on July 07, 2017, 00:53:22
Inb4 a war begin in my character profile thread... just kidding.
Please do not make a mod lock my thread down, I may want to modify my character profile in the future.
The image is good NinjaMirage. The garment gave a 'noble' feel to the image. The hair is epicly fabulous, it scream 'envy me bietches'
If you want to, Suroshi, you can make a version of your own, and I will add it in the main post with credits, etc. My intention would not be to compare both versions or try to judge which one look better, but rather to keep some kind of 'cool' gallery. At least I think it sounds like a cool idea.
Again, no war 'plox'.
Edit: Thank you Suroshi and NinjaMirage for trying to help me. I totally forgot to thank you two. Sorry.
Title: Re: Alanok's Character
Post by: Suroshi on July 08, 2017, 05:49:05
:p suroshi if you can do better then by all means!! But I dare you to find the elements of his character with the look in his drawing!!
On IMVU that is not a problem.. I played it for 12 years I know how to find good textured products.. I also have a way to customize and get a picture for free normally you would have to spend ingame credits for products.. But its okay I know you wouldnt be able to tell just by the one I have on my sig.