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ShiXie
« on: August 07, 2016, 23:10:41 »
Name: Shi Xie
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Height: 170 cm
Weight: 60Kg
Hairstyle: Long.
Facial hair: none
Hair color: Black like the darkest night.
Eye color: Emerald Green
Blood type: 0+
Primary chakra nature: Fire
Village: Inferunogakure (Hidden Inferno)
Clan: None
Good or evil at heart?: “People say that there are two opposing concepts: good, and evil. If humanity was left only with goodness, perhaps that would make the world more beautiful. Unfortunately, that isn’t realistic. Without the existence of evil, perhaps good… would no longer be called good.
Good and evil are the desires of the heart. If I earnestly perform good deeds, evil can be suppressed. Likewise, if I malevolently perform evil deeds, good will be suppressed.
Perhaps there is nothing truly good or truly evil in the world.
What I have… is my own will!”
-Meng Hao (I Shall Seal The Heavens).

Description of the character's personality: Out of mind, strange with strange hobbies and habits. But still fun and interesting. Some times cold like ice and others lovely af.



Description of the character's history:
It was dark at night when the crying of a baby was heard.
-Wee!Wee!-
At the same time, the shouting of a man could be heard "It's a male! Oh, my son! I'm a father! I'm a father!" accompanied by a laughter full of happines and ecstasy.
In a little wooden house, lying on a bed, there was a beautiful girl, on her twenties.  Tiredness could be seen on her beautifull face but regardless that, she was displaying a smile full of love when shifting her gaze between her loved and the newborn on her enbrace.
Almost at the same time when the children was born, a strange, horrifying event occurred in the sky.  An enormous tempest of fire covered the nightly sky making it even more bright than at day.
At the sign of that, the woman, supported by the man, with the child on enbrace, went outside to observe this fenomeno.
While the two of them were concentrated on the sky, the little baby watched the sky with brightly eyes. It was like there was some sort of conection between him and what was happening in the sky.
After roughly two to three minutes, everything went back on normal.
"Pure Yang body.. Who would have thought that our baby... Would possess such an unique and amaing body.." Said the man while looking at his women in the eyes.
"Do you think that someone saw this...? Should we run again...?" Said the woman, fear, killing intent as well as sadness could be sensed in her voice.
"I don't think. It's been some months already since the last group and we're so far from any tipe of village or population. Fear nothing my love, everything's gonna be alright." Said the man while taking back to home his loved.

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Time seemed to fly and soon, the child learned to walk as well as talk.
His father took him and  trained him to be a ninja as well as taught him of the way of life. Since his primary chakra  was fire, like his parents, his father taught him everything he could. He was shocked at how fast he mastered any jutsu related to fire. It was heaven-defying!

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As time was flying, soon the child turned ten.
-Late at night.
"Happy birthday to you!" Said his mother and father.
His mother went on a diffrent room and took a little gift packed with care to give him. Right when she was giving it to him, and started to say something, her loved stopped her.
"Shh! Make silence." Said him while listening with care.
A moment after, his face fell. His face withe like paper.
"There's someone out there and they're many! And so close.. How didn't I find them early?!"
Listening to her man, the woman feel her knees gone weak.
"How.. but..why now?! It's been years... Oh god!"
She casted a franatic look at her son and then at her man.
"What now?" Asked her.
With a bitter smile, he answered. "All we can do is to pray... and fight. Fight to give our son a chance to escape and live."
The fear on the face of the woman changed to resoluteness and killing intent.
"Mom, dad.. what's happening? What are you talking about..?"
"My son" said the father to the child, "go, take the horse and run. Run far, far away from this place."
"But..."
"There's not "but" or "no". You now have to go.
The child cast a pleding face to his mother but with no avail.
"Go my child, go! Don't make us worry."
The child, unwilling, ran.
After he taked a long and narow passage under the earth, he find himself out in a forest. The birght full moon in the sky and a huge fire and smoke rising far back.
With tears on face, the child ran again for hours and hours.
Back at the home, there was a fierce fight between a couple and numerous oponents.
Theyr clothes were filled with blood and tatered. All around there were many bloody bodies.
"Who's your capitan?!" Shouted the man while taking down another enemy.
"Step back, my men." Sounded a powerful voice and soon everyone stepped back, forming a circle around the couple.
Soon, men were moving at the side forming an opening where one man was leisurely walking.
The eyes of the couple narrowed.
"So it's you, huh?" Said them.
"Yeah, it's me. It took me so much time to find you two! Now I'm gonna kill you. For both the clans. How dared you to destroy our pride. How could you, pass the bloodline to another person of another clan, huh!? Men, take a stroll in the house, see if there's a baby."
After one or two minutes one man came back.
"Sir. There's no baby or sign of ever been a baby."
"Quite strange... So be it. Take them down. Leave intact the corpses, we need them like prove."
"Yes sir!"

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Some weeks later.

"Mom... dad..?"
The crying of a child could be heard. And then, a child, arount seven or eight years, was walking on the battlefild. There were still trace of blood, no corpses, but here and there, there were pice of clothings.
Afert strolling like a zombie for some hours, the child stoped crying.
"I'll never, ever, forget this!!" Roared the child while puting two difrent tipe of clothes in his pocket and walking away in the forest.
After that, no one knows nothing about the child, if he's alive or death...


Abilities : unknown.

I'm sure there are a lot of errors... Sorry. Here it's like 00:00 pm and English it's my third language..
« Last Edit: August 07, 2016, 23:21:45 by ShiXie »


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Re: ShiXie
« Reply #1 on: August 07, 2016, 23:57:00 »
It still was a good read for me! Grammatical errors aren't noticed when you just wanna keep on reading. xD

Nice story, m8!
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Re: ShiXie
« Reply #2 on: August 08, 2016, 05:51:12 »
I need chapters 2-10 out now please & thank you. Awesome story and sick character! :D
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Re: ShiXie
« Reply #3 on: August 08, 2016, 07:41:18 »
Pretty amazing story
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Re: ShiXie
« Reply #4 on: August 08, 2016, 14:24:45 »
Very nice story
Overall good job with the char


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Re: ShiXie
« Reply #5 on: August 08, 2016, 15:26:11 »
ur green like a tree Xd
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Re: ShiXie
« Reply #6 on: August 08, 2016, 19:13:56 »
Great character history
It was a wonderful read mate
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Re: ShiXie
« Reply #7 on: August 09, 2016, 02:24:42 »
Like to see the effort put in to this, good job mate.
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Re: ShiXie
« Reply #8 on: August 09, 2016, 03:35:11 »
umhmmm....pure yang body....the two pieces of clothes... forbidden mating among two clans... this will be interesting... btw.. is SHI XIE chinese?
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« Reply #9 on: August 09, 2016, 07:21:32 »
umhmmm....pure yang body....the two pieces of clothes... forbidden mating among two clans... this will be interesting... btw.. is SHI XIE chinese?
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Hey ya!
Thanks ahah I think I'm gonna update it but this time I'm gonna firstly write it in my language and then translate it..  This way it should be better ehehe and maybe I'm gonna add some things on this parts.
Anyway, I'm not Chinese, I'm Romanian AHAH
But I'm reading a lot of Chinese novels in English so I'm kinda addicted to them.

Fun fact: Shì Xiě means Bloodyrhirsty.
Initially I just put this name cause it's cool..  But after writing the story and thinking..  The name it's so f**king right. lmao.
One doesn't have to be Evil to be Bloodythirsty!  Like for Shì Xiě, he's thirsty of the blood of those who killed his parents!
So it doesn't have any problems with the description of the personality  of the character!  Ehehe
And, for those who don't know, a Pure Yang Body it's essentially the perfect body, with the best talent, for fire and also lightning! So it's perfect with the village I chose for it ehehe.

ur green like a tree Xd

Yeah, I love green! So I put it there..  But it's okay, the character's personality it's strange af! So there's nothing strange with the fact he's wearing green instead of red (for fire)  lmao
« Last Edit: August 09, 2016, 07:29:05 by ShiXie »
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« Reply #10 on: August 09, 2016, 13:30:02 »

Fun fact: Shì Xiě means Bloodyrhirsty.
Initially I just put this name cause it's cool..  But after writing the story and thinking..  The name it's so f**king right. lmao.
One doesn't have to be Evil to be Bloodythirsty!  Like for Shì Xiě, he's thirsty of the blood of those who killed his parents!
So it doesn't have any problems with the description of the personality  of the character!  Ehehe
And, for those who don't know, a Pure Yang Body it's essentially the perfect body, with the best talent, for fire and also lightning! So it's perfect with the village I chose for it ehehe.

and i thought its a variation for sexy :3.... nevermind tho




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Re: ShiXie
« Reply #11 on: August 16, 2016, 10:29:46 »
Nice character and very in-depth story. Well done!

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Re: ShiXie
« Reply #12 on: August 16, 2016, 16:04:18 »
dam that character looks badass AF cant wait to see it get adapted in to the game.....homefully
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Re: ShiXie
« Reply #13 on: August 16, 2016, 18:36:22 »

Blood type: 0+


erm, do you mean O+ ?
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« Reply #14 on: August 16, 2016, 18:51:35 »
decent looking char bro ^^
I say decent because of the char image.
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