Shinobi Life Online
Art Category => Drawings => Topic started by: Dragon6624 on February 03, 2015, 14:12:49
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In the rebooted version the hand that's flipping the coin looks a little strange but everything else is awesome. :D
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I see and np :).
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Nice art, carry on with it and don't quit. Good luck buddy!
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Nice! ;) Can draw better than me anyday.
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Good luck with your journey buddy! If u want a bit of inspiration, u can look at my draws before i started working hard and got to the (still bad) level i am at now! (http://shinobirisings.forumotion.com/t30-eternal-s-draw-s-preparation) xD All it takes is hard work, if u want it enough and try hard enough, slowely but surely u will see improvement!
After: http://drawcrowd.com/eternaleyes/projects
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That looks really cool, and its interesting how you used an action figure to outline your drawing. good job!
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I love that drawing but IMHO the left arm of the char looks a little long. But that's just my opinion. :D :).
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Yeah I like the moon drawing more too :) and imo the next drawing should be THE WARLOCK!
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Can't find any bad things in that other than the ones you already stated and I like this char a lot!
Not more than moon though imo moon is your best drawing that you have shown on this forum as of this moment
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Thanks man, I agree completely with your statement :)
Also, I intend to use that ARF Trooper more often from now on.
Yw and NICE!!!
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I agree^, all good drawings are on printer paper.
Lined paper looks scruffy o3o
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I like the white line idea ! And imo everything is actually perfect except for ....... His mouth, it looks a little weird.
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The bicep on his right arm looks bigger than the one on the left arm. That's it lol and maybe just maybe you can add another pair of abs.
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Agreed, I'll see what I can do with the bicep. His arms are supposed to be muscular, so I'll adjust the left arm to be proportionate to the right. As for the abs, lemme quickly consult some pics on that to make sure the number is right...
*consults Madara pics*
...agreed, I'll make sure to change it.
Btw Shiv, if you ever search Madara for consultation on the abs, do not, DO NOT search "madara uchiha armorless". Always make sure to search "Madara Uchiha abs"....otherwise you may stumble across some wierd sh*t (that goes for anyone else who is reading this as well).
XD k thx for the warning lol.
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These are looking good dragon. Keep it up :)
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2. (Female, 16) Ochiyo Okano, aka "Razor Wing" (Raven Armor Version). My vote.
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AWESOME!!! I can only draw animals really. especially dragons and wolves.. but I would never imagine drawing humans that well!
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IMHO the right knee looks too small. But otherwise just love this one :) :D
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Sharp knee. 2 left feet.
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Oooh nice!!!!! But IMO he looks too skinny
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Oooh nice!!!!! But IMO he looks too skinny
Yeah, that's just the way he turned out when I copied him over to plain paper. I think he looks pretty good with a few less pounds though.
Yeah but I was just comparing from the original drawing
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XD nice char but her face looks too masculine don't know why :/ and her torso is a little longer than average.
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I see and YW :)
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Looks kiddy but nice. The breasts should be firmer to look more succulent (^_^). LOL. Try using coloring materials other than crayons. I'm not good at drawing but I can see you have potentials. Practice more.
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Hmmm.... What do you use for coloring? Color pencils? Crayons? Oil Pastels are harder to work with but they give a more "professional" look as many people say. http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20080930182047AAQrnX9
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Wow!! You have improved :) :D and IMO the right arm looks more chubbier and shorter than the left one. And the bulge on the skirt on the left side is caused by the knee right? But if it is then the left foot should have been a little more tilted to the left ( if you know what I mean) but that might just be me.
EDIT: I see and I agree with you on color pencils being more precise :D
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Wow!! You have improved :) :D and IMO the right arm looks more chubbier and shorter than the left one. And the bulge on the skirt on the left side is caused by the knee right? But if it is then the left foot should have been a little more tilted to the left ( if you know what I mean) but that might just be me.
EDIT: I see and I agree with you on color pencils being more precise :D
Yeah Shiv, the bulge is from the knee, but I was too lazy to work the foot into the proper position (I was more focused on the outfit and trying to get the hands right). As for the arm, that's a recurring proportion problem I'm just going to have to keep tackling. Ty for the critque though, I'll continue to strive for greatness, just like my motto on art says!
P.S. I think some people could misconstrue that it is better to leave something hanging, I meant that one must always hone their skills in the area/areas best suited to them...kind of like a sword ;)
Ah I see nice lol good luck and I hope you succeed in "tackling" the problem XD
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Sorry about not posting anything new lately guys, I've been tossing some ideas around for a bigger project. I'll make sure to have my next pic, Manabu Ohishi (aka Nightmare) ready soon.
YAY!!!!!!!! Cool nickname btw :) :D. :3
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You forgot to color the left chest which is touching the left ps which is a little uncolored hear the chest as well if you look closely. That makes the left bicep look very weird
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You forgot to color the left chest which is touching the left ps which is a little uncolored hear the chest as well if you look closely. That makes the left bicep look very weird
Yeah, I see that now, my mistake on that part. The lighting in the house was a bit odd that day so it was a littlr bit hard to get the colors right. Ty for the critique though!
yw!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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The eyes look a litthe short they could've been made a little longer and the same for the nose but that may just be my opinion.
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Agreed, I also noticed a problem with the ears being a bit too small...or maybe that's just me. Anyway, working on another random pic...trying to figure out how to draw fire atm.
Agreed about the ears and good luck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Very nice dragon but from the way you've drawn him, the nose looks very pointy and flat.
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the way you drew him there is no left arm XD and the shadow should not be like a rock XD it should show the gap between his legs XD. otherwise it is a nice drawing!
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youve got quiet the imagination to be creating these kind of drawings
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You've improved so much.
That is your best drawing on this thread by far!
Good work :D
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Oh my god.
It's in Drum roll
PROPORTION!!!
But seriously, you've got much better than you used to be, wayyyy better than I could have ever done :P
Keep it up :D
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Nice draw, great story and some nice details. So yeah as mentioned proportions are the only real issues here aside from some little perspective problems. Like for starters im not entirely sure if the hill behind those guys is a hill, a rock or a mountain. This is kinda down to a lack of clear perspective, which becomes more obvious if we look in the foreground. If it is indeed a rock, due to the angle at which the rock has been drawn, the slope of the rock seems very steep. To fix this id recommend widening out the base of the rock, which would naturally occur due to foreshortening for a rock with what i assume is intended to be a less steep slope( oh and probably make the vanishing point flat too, maybe with a ruler?). Only other problem you've got is depth, which is extremely hard to achieve with pencil, only thing i could recommend with this medium is making the foreground values a bit darker/make them stand out compared to the background values through some greater line thickness on the characters and body bag. As for proportions, only tip i can give is study bodies and how they move, maybe look for similar poses online before you start a draw and see the way bodies and limbs move for the pose you want. Other than that, nice draw, your improvement can be seen with each drawing! ;)
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That's amazing, you're improving so much :)
Cc would be that the left hand looks deformed.
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Holy Shit!
That is awesome dude
Indeed the hands are not that good but it is normal
The best part is the evil ninja standing at the door.......loving him
Sorry i cant do critique.....as my knowledge about drawings is far lesser than yours :(
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I really like the pencil-only drawings <3
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