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Shinobi Life Online Category => Shinobi Life Online Clans & Organizations => Shinobi Life Online Organizations => Topic started by: KurumaTensei on May 24, 2015, 20:01:27

Title: TheJokers Genkai
Post by: KurumaTensei on May 24, 2015, 20:01:27

Daten-shi
堕天使

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FOUNDER: KurumaTensei

LEADER: no leader, everyone is here
 for a personal purpose.

HISTORY:
(http://29.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lr0min1VsD1r2encuo1_500.jpg)

one day I was walking and saw a cat and then I went home, and so it occurred to me

PURPOSE:
survive to the next day.

REQUERIMENTS TO ENTRY:

They must be themselves without caring what others think

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Joker ジョーカー
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("Kyaputen")
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Title: Re: Eternal Akatsuki
Post by: Batt on May 24, 2015, 20:45:57

Kuruma this is the exact akatsuki in Naruto. I dont think you can use this.

Title: Re: Eternal Akatsuki
Post by: Kai on May 24, 2015, 21:00:10

Quote from: Batt on May 24, 2015, 20:45:57

Kuruma this is the exact akatsuki in Naruto. I dont think you can use this.

Nah, i think he can use this. Although if i were him i would rework the org and think of a more original idea, at least a original name.

Title: Re: Eternal Akatsuki
Post by: Mars on May 24, 2015, 22:45:24

Very unoriginal, though there's no rule against this.

Title: Re: Eternal Akatsuki
Post by: Dragon6624 on May 25, 2015, 05:15:32

1. All powerful god-slaying members [Check]

2. Elemental color-coated symbolic items [Check]

3. S-Class Bingo Book material [Check]

4. Not so peaceful massacring machines with a hazy dream-vision of world peace through...violence? [Whatevs, Check it off anyway]

I'm starting to see a trend that's getting pretty stale the...oh...5th time around or so. I know the site is free and all, and that you can create pretty much whatever you want, but this kind of "I'm totally shoulder-rubbing with all the powerhouse figures/orgs I know right now" attitude has got to stop. No offence to the creator of this organization personally, but just in general, come on guys...think of something new (and at least semi-logical). Try starting off on a fresh foot with, perhaps, something that isn't:

1. OP as f*ck
2. World class powerhouse (OP as f*ck)
3. Greatly feared and respected before even getting into the game (OP as f*ck)
4. Having members with a variety of uniquely generic but extremely powerful element/sin/animal/f*cking color wheel assigned ninjas (OP as f*ck and lazy as  the first MK)

And instead try doing something that has:

A. A logical goal and background...for example, who in their right mind attempts to gain world peace through total destruction and world-domination? Even the Akatsuki only did that AFTER their viewpoint was completely warped from being naively betrayed and cut-down to size, before they were simply trying to keep the peace. Try doing something simpler, such as simply trying to survive and make ends meet, or specialize in a certain range of jobs/actions, such as making the very first Herald service to print and sell news of events taking place between/in different lands to anyone and everyone with yin.

B. A new take on what an organization is/could be...for example, something other than a gods be damned-rogue-all powerful-god slaying-peace keeper-massacre force. Try doing something as simple as being a simple mercenary organization for once, preferably one that DOESN'T try to naively meddle in the affairs of superior super-powers.

C. An unset number of members with a  less strict chain of command, capable of being changed to meet the needs/wants of its members, considering how all of these members are likely to HAVE THEIR OWN BRAINS...instead of following militaristic-like orders to a T.

D. An acceptance of a mixture of normal and exceptional members, considering how you never actually know just WHO you're going to be getting in your org, and who could suddenly become a rising star due to their skill-sets.

E. An understanding that your org is not the center of the political sphere, that the fate of the world does not rest in your hands, and that most people will probably never hear of your org during their char's (or chars') lifetime(s).


This isn't meant to be a straight up insult/flame post, merely a wake-up call for all the idiots who are even contemplating continuing this chain of copy-paste organizations. Try use something called your imaginations people, I'm sick of reading about this same organization sixty times over but with different palette swaps!

http://i.imgur.com/EzoKReP.jpg

(^^Many thanks to Straw for referencing this wonderful pic btw^^)

Title: Re: Eternal Akatsuki
Post by: Kayleb on May 25, 2015, 10:25:19

Wouldn't an organisation like this be better to open up once the game has started? You have no idea how good you'll be or anyone else who would join will be until well into the game.

Title: Re: TheJokers Genkai
Post by: Konohuro on May 25, 2015, 13:31:42

Quote from: KurumaTensei on May 24, 2015, 20:01:27

TheJokers Genkai
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FOUNDER: KurumaTensei

LEADER: no leader, everyone is here
 for a personal purpose.

HISTORY:
(https://a1-images.myspacecdn.com/images03/31/f39de0481cef48668e244ca0aa7c7aff/300x300.jpg)

The organization is comprised of some of the most powerful criminals of the moment.
 Each member of TheJokers is a criminal Class S (the highest rank in the shinobi universe)
feared for their tremendous power and ruthless nature. Together they form what is, probably,
 the most powerful organization in the world shinobi. All members are attached to the list in
 the Book of Bingo so you have the order to kill barely see them.
each member of TheJokers organization has a "special" Simbol in which these simbols are unique and
 unrepeatable, either color or meaning. These Simbols contained within the enrollment of the first kanji
 in relation to the nine mythical beasts of Japanese mythology, including the four Kyoto guardian gods.

PURPOSE: The original objective of TheJokers, exterminate world wars
 and return the smile to humanity..

REQUERIMENTS TO ENTRY:
The exact criteria for admission to the group does not know exactly,
 but we know they must have extraordinary capabilities of fighting,
 as well as unique features, in terms of techniques and skills are surely
 the basic requirements. Some of its members had to carry out tests or
assignments before they can join the group.
Another requirement which may be particularly relevant to the income is
 committing a crime for historic village that suffered.


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CLAN EMBLEM:
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Is this a joke?

Title: Re: TheJokers Genkai
Post by: rayzote on May 25, 2015, 16:53:12

There's nothing bad with this org, we all have different ideals, come on. Why so cereal!? Although the joker's pics and the connection of the name with the idea is obvious, that's the unoriginal part.

....Suicide Squad would be better tho :P

PS. I just realized he changed the name from Eternal Akatsuki to TheJokers Genkai, i guess it's still unoriginal... but whatever

Title: Re: TheJokers Genkai
Post by: Kayleb on May 26, 2015, 13:20:51

I like this idea to be honest, it's different to most of the organisations that are on here, and I can do nothing but respect that.

Title: Re: TheJokers Genkai
Post by: Uzumaki Hari on May 27, 2015, 10:07:05

this is a nice change!

Title: Re: TheJokers Genkai
Post by: StrawHatSeyi on May 27, 2015, 11:48:55

Another organization huh. Good luck bro, you'll need it.