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Shinobi Life Online Category => Shinobi Life Online Clans & Organizations => Shinobi Life Online Clans => Topic started by: Kamashe on March 05, 2016, 21:25:26

Title: Nakadori Clan
Post by: Kamashe on March 05, 2016, 21:25:26
History Of the Clan

The  Nakadori clan came about shortly after the creationof The hidden hill. It was the binding of 3 small clans which had suffered many loses and soon would no longer exist; Hikaru Clan (輝), Kichiro Clan (吉郎) and the Yoshiaki Clan (義明), by the use of marriage and sharing of land.
Each of the separate clans were peaceful and respectful, none of which possessed any unique abilities but each clan was trained by the sword. However to ensure that their clan's teachings, they agreed to form together to create one clan.  they trained using all their knowledge to become better swordsmen, training the next generation to come to be better then themselves.

Since they have lived and worked as shinobi of the Hidden Hill

Physical Characteristics

Nakadori Both the men and women of the clan tend to have dark hair, usually brown or black but this is not always the case as many marry others from outside the clan. However all clan members do share the same eye colour; a deep brown.
Men of the clan are generally tall and have a slightly muscular build about them, some refer to them as being 'ruggedly handsome'.
The women of the family are mainly average in height, built with a more petite frame and generally having large doe-like eyes.

Personalities

Those of the Nakadori clan are calm, peaceful people. They are laid-back and aren't particularly interested in talking for the sake of talking but would rather sit quietly.
They possess leadership qualities and like to think very logically.
They try to be the best they can and are always looking out for other peoples well being.

Although being as calm as they usually are, they can be quite scary when they get angry or frustrated at someone/thing. However that is a very rare occurrence.

Marriage and Traditions

When the clan was first formed, it was an unspoken rule that you would marry someone from within the clan, however with time passed and the clan thriving, it is no longer a necessary occurrence.
Within this clan there is a tradition that when you intend to ask for someone's hand in marriage, you first my get the blessing from their parents. To do this you must demonstrate you skill with a sword in a fight with the father or mother. Mostly these days this is more of just a show, as strength and stability has already occurred.

Abilities and Training

The Nakadori clan is known for its swordsmanship.
From when a child turns 5 they are taught how to handle a sword and use fire and wind style techniques properly.
Whether or not the child goes on to become a shinobi, they are taught basic techniques of
self-defense with the use of ninjutsu.
When the child makes a definite decision, they are then taught the ways of the shinobi at home and within the Ninja Academy.

Ninjitsu is also used within the Nakadori clan. The use of Wind-Release is the most common but occasional users of others is possible as well.

Rankings
Leader: Kamashe
more soon to be ( if u have suggestions about ranking pm me)


Application
Name:
Village:
Age:
Chakra Nature:
Title: Re: Nakadori Clan
Post by: Nova on March 05, 2016, 21:42:30
It looks decent.
The only thing I have my doubts of is the
Quote
The use of Scorch-Release is the most common

Will you be updating it? like adding in an application form, logo, allied clans/rivals etc?
Or keeping it like it is now?

Good luck with this clan Kamashe ^.^
Title: Re: Nakadori Clan
Post by: Batt on March 05, 2016, 21:44:42
Seems like a solid clan.
Title: Re: Nakadori Clan
Post by: Kamashe on March 05, 2016, 21:45:41
Seems like a solid clan.
thanks.

@Nova ima keep it like this
plus a friend helped with most of it
Title: Re: Nakadori Clan
Post by: Kamashe on March 05, 2016, 22:30:24
It looks decent.
The only thing I have my doubts of is the
Quote
The use of Scorch-Release is the most common

Will you be updating it? like adding in an application form, logo, allied clans/rivals etc?
Or keeping it like it is now?

Good luck with this clan Kamashe ^.^
@Nova i didnt add that stuff cause i need help with it
Title: Re: Nakadori Clan
Post by: Kai on March 06, 2016, 08:41:09
The only suggestion I have is to make the sub-headings bold (History, personalities and etc.) so that they stand out from the rest of the information.

Apart from that good job.
Title: Re: Nakadori Clan
Post by: Kamashe on March 06, 2016, 19:32:49
The only suggestion I have is to make the sub-headings bold (History, personalities and etc.) so that they stand out from the rest of the information.

Apart from that good job.
Thx
Title: Re: Nakadori Clan
Post by: ChristmasDragon on March 22, 2016, 18:18:07
Name: Adrian Nakadori
Village:Hidden Dust
Age:14
Chakra Nature:Wind
Title: Re: Nakadori Clan
Post by: ChristmasDragon on March 22, 2016, 18:18:41
Name: Adrian Nakadori
Village:Hidden Dust
Age:14
Chakra Nature:Wind
Accepted
Title: Re: Nakadori Clan
Post by: Kamashe on March 22, 2016, 18:20:20
Name: Adrian Nakadori
Village:Hidden Dust
Age:14
Chakra Nature:Wind
Accepted
yh
Title: Re: Nakadori Clan
Post by: Itsuki00 on March 22, 2016, 21:04:56
I would of say it is nice but i wont because you stole this from devian art. Original name is Satoshi clan...
Title: Re: Nakadori Clan
Post by: Kamashe on March 22, 2016, 22:20:23
I would of say it is nice but i wont because you stole this from devian art. Original name is Satoshi clan...
not stole but yh ur riight
Title: Re: Nakadori Clan
Post by: Leebz on March 23, 2016, 00:43:12
I would of say it is nice but i wont because you stole this from devian art. Original name is Satoshi clan...
not stole but yh ur riight
If you didn't write it, and took it without permission to use for your own benefit, then it is stealing. You should probably redo it completely by writing it yourself.

You could ask the creator for the use of it but I doubt they'd:
1. Reply
2. Give you permission

Good luck with your clan.
Title: Re: Nakadori Clan
Post by: Yamasukage on March 23, 2016, 07:26:56
I would of say it is nice but i wont because you stole this from devian art. Original name is Satoshi clan...
not stole but yh ur riight
If you didn't write it, and took it without permission to use for your own benefit, then it is stealing. You should probably redo it completely by writing it yourself.

You could ask the creator for the use of it but I doubt they'd:
1. Reply
2. Give you permission

Good luck with your clan.

*cough* To much work
*cough* Join Sanderaisu