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Shinobi Life Online Category => Shinobi Life Online Character => Topic started by: yarden on December 18, 2016, 15:56:44

Title: Yarden
Post by: yarden on December 18, 2016, 15:56:44

[/url]Name:Yarden Akaihono
Age:20
Gender:Male
Height:178 cm
Weight:59KG
Hairstyle:Medium\Long -Man Bun
Facial hair:none
Hair color:Black-Grey
Eye color:Black
Blood type:AB
Primary chakra nature: earth release.
Hidden Village: kazangakure
Clan:Agni
Good or evil at heart?:Good

Description of the character's personality:
A peaceful person.
Intelligent ninja.



Description of the character's history:
Yarden's father was a legend in kazangakure , he died saving the village from a criminal.
Yarden's father was named as"The red volcano" becouse of the legendary jutsu he made.
People says Yarden inherited his father's power.

After the death of the Red volcano , Yarden left alone.
His mom died 3 years before of Red volcano's death.
She died becouse of a disease.
Yarden had to survive  , this way of living made him the person he is .

The rest of yarden's life was a secret , Until the day he  became a shinobi.
(https://i.imgur.com/ZqBcR28.png) (https://www.fxp.co.il)

Title: Re: Yarden
Post by: taigakun on December 18, 2016, 19:06:26

Eyy actually do like your character history in a weird way lol
If you want to make it more elaborate, you can expand more on your character description
But overall gg

Title: Re: Yarden
Post by: Hiruko on December 18, 2016, 19:10:01

Nicu character. I find the history is a bit short, but thats your decision.

Title: Re: Yarden
Post by: StriderOtaku on December 18, 2016, 19:43:56

might need a bit more work but nevertheless, it seems interesting. gj

Title: Re: Yarden
Post by: Ken on December 18, 2016, 20:25:30

1. Fix ur profile pic
2. Add more history
3. Description is good
4. Everything else is ok.

Title: Re: Yarden
Post by: iyonatan on December 18, 2016, 21:25:20

Welcome!

Title: Re: Yarden
Post by: Fraudulent on December 19, 2016, 00:56:15

Welcome to SLO! Enjoy your stay here.
Right now your character is looking pretty decent, however I would add a bit more information in the personality field if you wanted to go for a more detailed response, but I like the simplicity nonetheless.

The links in my signature should be useful when looking for a clan/org or simply want to chat in the Discord.

Title: Re: Yarden
Post by: Toratsume Nyshn on December 19, 2016, 02:15:32

Welcome to SLO!
Noted you're character :)
Stay active and have fun

Title: Re: Yarden
Post by: Mars on December 19, 2016, 11:14:19

kasuke pls

Title: Re: Yarden
Post by: Diamond Lee on December 19, 2016, 12:41:54

Quote from: Toratsume Nyshn on December 19, 2016, 02:15:32

Welcome to SLO!
Noted you're character :)
Stay active and have fun

your*

whale cum 2 SLO! hev fan!

Title: Re: Yarden
Post by: adithya on March 18, 2017, 15:50:48

Good stuff :3 Again the maker of this will be revealed soon

Title: Re: Yarden
Post by: mamita on November 24, 2024, 22:19:27

Good to see all of Looki's portraits are still up!
I have such things in store for you in the annals of Kazangakure's history, Yarden, son of Yarden... Such things.