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Offline Hiruko

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Re: Hiruko Himitsu
« Reply #1 on: October 21, 2015, 15:40:24 »
It's a good starting, maybe if u could bring more informations about his story/life the thread would be better.
I like the way u told: "Hiruko is a really nice person in general (...) He wants to be an Assassin." :,)

And "Hiruko" like the puppet ?!
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Re: Hiruko Himitsu
« Reply #2 on: October 21, 2015, 15:55:00 »
yea. But i choosed it because in the 3th Naruto shippuuden movie is a Hiruko too! And i like the person :D ^^
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Re: Hiruko Himitsu
« Reply #3 on: March 20, 2016, 21:44:58 »
I like the history and your character in general, but you shoudn't use "!" at the end of every 2nd sentence. I think it sounds weired.
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