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Author Topic: Gukan Himitsu PREVIEW NOT FINAL!  (Read 2735 times)

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Gukan Himitsu PREVIEW NOT FINAL!
« on: February 04, 2016, 21:33:44 »


This is Version 3 (v3). Maybe the final one, but if I get the White Himitsu Symbol from Leebz then I will just go with this. Feedback and Edits + Recommendations will always be appreciated. THANKS ALOT!!!
« Last Edit: February 25, 2016, 20:11:48 by Cryptonexin »





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Re: Gukan Himitsu
« Reply #1 on: February 04, 2016, 21:40:36 »
It looks good however the logo seems copy pasted on there and so does the mask.
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Re: Gukan Himitsu
« Reply #2 on: February 04, 2016, 22:00:07 »
It looks good however the logo seems copy pasted on there and so does the mask.

This. Also, using that logo is always meh on clothing but given you don't have the logo I use, it is good. However, placement of it could be better unless you do this thing I can't remember.. It reshapes/reangles it to look better.. Fuck. Anyway, not bad :)
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Re: Gukan Himitsu
« Reply #3 on: February 04, 2016, 22:11:40 »
this character obviously loves his woman on any day of the month
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Re: Gukan Himitsu
« Reply #4 on: February 04, 2016, 22:13:58 »
this character obviously loves his woman on any day of the month
If you love your woman then yeah ..
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Re: Gukan Himitsu
« Reply #5 on: February 04, 2016, 23:35:26 »
was makin a joke about the blood on his face rip
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Re: Gukan Himitsu
« Reply #6 on: February 05, 2016, 10:29:57 »
was makin a joke about the blood on his face rip
You don't say huh...!
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Re: Gukan Himitsu
« Reply #7 on: February 05, 2016, 12:27:35 »
try to re-draw the mask yourself with the same line quality of the original shinobi drawing you made. They are "speaking different languages"
The logo cant stay in the middle because there is a division line there.
If you want the logo in the middle then cut the logo and distort perspectives in both sides a little bit inside changing some of the colours

If is patched or stamped on the suit, it changes colours too, so adjust the curves and it will look more natural :)

the drawing quality looks awesome :))
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Re: Gukan Himitsu
« Reply #8 on: February 25, 2016, 15:24:06 »
Boom. New design.



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Re: Gukan Himitsu
« Reply #9 on: February 25, 2016, 16:24:22 »
Tobi <3

Also, are you going to use the template?
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[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]Gender:[/b]
[b]Height:[/b]
[b]Weight:[/b]
[b]Hairstyle:[/b]
[b]Facial hair:[/b]
[b]Hair color:[/b]
[b]Eye color:[/b]
[b]Blood type:[/b]
[b]Primary chakra nature:[/b]
[b]Hidden Village:[/b]
[b]Clan:[/b]
[b]Good or evil at heart?:[/b]

[b]Description of the character's personality:[/b]

[b]Description of the character's history:[/b]

Or are you going to wing it?
I personally would like to see more information regarding your character ^.^
I will ask Leebz about the logos and see what I can do.

As for feedback.
I like it but at some spots (where you colored over the existing stuff or added things yourself) it sometimes looks chunky, maybe you can put a little more time in to smoothing that out.
Looks well though ^.^
I did like your old one as well, why'd you change it if you don't mind me asking :3



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Re: Gukan Himitsu
« Reply #10 on: February 25, 2016, 16:35:42 »
Tobi <3

Also, are you going to use the template?
Code: [Select]
[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]Gender:[/b]
[b]Height:[/b]
[b]Weight:[/b]
[b]Hairstyle:[/b]
[b]Facial hair:[/b]
[b]Hair color:[/b]
[b]Eye color:[/b]
[b]Blood type:[/b]
[b]Primary chakra nature:[/b]
[b]Hidden Village:[/b]
[b]Clan:[/b]
[b]Good or evil at heart?:[/b]

[b]Description of the character's personality:[/b]

[b]Description of the character's history:[/b]

Or are you going to wing it?
I personally would like to see more information regarding your character ^.^
I will ask Leebz about the logos and see what I can do.

As for feedback.
I like it but at some spots (where you colored over the existing stuff or added things yourself) it sometimes looks chunky, maybe you can put a little more time in to smoothing that out.
Looks well though ^.^
I did like your old one as well, why'd you change it if you don't mind me asking :3


Thanks for the feedback, I will be go full pro on this. The old one didn't look like the character that I imagined, this one resembles a lot. Yes, I will be using the format, with backstory that I planned and wrote and all that. So I'm not really gonna wing anything :)



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Re: Gukan Himitsu
« Reply #11 on: February 25, 2016, 16:40:50 »
Thanks for the feedback, I will be go full pro on this. The old one didn't look like the character that I imagined, this one resembles a lot. Yes, I will be using the format, with backstory that I planned and wrote and all that. So I'm not really gonna wing anything :)

Nice, looking forward to the finished product ^.^



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Re: Gukan Himitsu
« Reply #12 on: February 25, 2016, 17:51:10 »
Gukan Himitsu v3 and hopefully the last version.



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Re: Gukan Himitsu
« Reply #13 on: February 25, 2016, 19:50:00 »
Your char is a mix between sasuke, tobi and paint hair :D
Will it get updated in the V3?
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Re: Gukan Himitsu
« Reply #14 on: February 25, 2016, 20:11:11 »
Your char is a mix between sasuke, tobi and paint hair :D
Will it get updated in the V3?

Yes, Yes, YESS. All is planned, it will be the greatest character made!! *evil Laugh* *cough* *cough*



 

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